Hyperevolution

I read dozens of chapters. The first 5 chapters were very well written, but then it became very confusing. The world view is grand, but your writing is too compact, which makes people feel too ordinary. Moreover, opportunities are all over the street. In the end, only the protagonist picked it up. The protagonist knows everything and cannot be compared with a country. And it has been a year. It was not until the protagonist came out that the country seemed to have some action. No research was done. It seemed like it had been just soy sauce all year. There are too many loopholes, and the plot is still a stand-alone version.

Let's have a good time together. . Brother

I read seven of them, please forgive me for giving up this book.

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The first subscription for a childish old man, the subscription for a pastoral person! Old worm's advice, and other friends who have not given up on this book, thank you for your support! Sincere thanks! I won't give up, thank you!

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