One Punch

My favorite is Wudi. At the starting point, I have basically read all Wudi's articles with more than 500,000 words. Let's talk about this book first, the title is "One Punch to Fight". High martial arts and high martial arts can actually be regarded as fantasy, and at present, the world view is not too big, but it may be that the number of words is too small and has not laid the groundwork. Although the world of high martial arts can be regarded as fantasy, in the world view of this book, the strength of the warriors does not seem to be strong, at least not to the extent of destroying the world, so this is a test of the author's description of the protagonist's strength. In terms of plot, there are one or two slaps in the face, and the plot is blunt and forced to slap the face, but it is very good for newcomers, and it will definitely improve after writing. Currently, the supporting characters are not distinctive, and the protagonist is also not outstanding. However, Saitama-style protagonists do not need to be outstanding, so they need distinctive supporting characters. This is a test of writing skills. In general, with the plot of Wudiwen, it is not enough for a punch. Getting back to the subject, I hope the author will take the time to read the following points. First of all, control the strength; Saitama's setting in "One Punch Man" is that tomorrow's me can beat today's me, and as the strength increases, some things that normal people have begin to lose. Like hair? (Manual funny) Based on this anime, what I personally extended is: one kick to exceed the speed of light, one punch to break stars, and carry nuclear bombs without injury. These are just the basics in my personal opinion. (Personal opinion) As of now in this book, the protagonist has not reached this level. Just like the one named Qian Duoduo, he can withstand less than one-tenth of the protagonist's power. Of course, I didn't mention the premise of unlimited enhancement. Invincible is so lonely. Yes, lonely! It must be lonely, it doesn't need to be cold-blooded, but it must have a lonely temperament! It's best not to have too many mood swings. Opponent! Fight seriously, all living beings are equal! There can be opponents that the protagonist can challenge in a normal state. After all, the protagonist is a human being, not a devil (manual funny) As far as the system of invincible writing is concerned, the number of words is destined to be small. After all, there will not be as many monsters and monsters as upgrades. But if the author has enough writing power, he can even write the opening invincible writing to two million. . . . The above represents only my personal views.

Set as a high school student? This setting is very restrictive. I personally feel that high school students are either novices or poisonous writers. After all, I was afraid of being poisoned a few years ago and subconsciously contacted him 😰. Also, it feels different from the invincible boss I imagined after reading the introduction 🤭. I have read a few chapters and wish you good luck (^_^)/

A small reward of 500 starting coins! I have read pirated novels for so many years and this is the first time I will reward you. I hope the author can stop being a eunuch. At least when your book is on the shelf, I will pursue it. I mostly read pirated versions. Only those new authors whose new books do not perform well are easy to read and they happen to be the novels I like. I will pursue the original version. It just so happens that your book meets my requirements for pursuing an authentic version. Come on, author!

Well, I accidentally got sucked into death again. After reading what you said, I understand you. I hope to keep up the good work in the next novel! Can you tell us that the next book will be Invincible?

I just like this kind of invincible writing. It's not fun enough. Chapter 60 is still too short and it's gone in an instant. It's not fun enough.

I give you the recommendation vote. The book is quite good, but the update is a flaw! Chasing it is painful. According to my personal opinion, I should keep it first! I'm afraid that if I raise you, I'll make you a eunuch, or if I raise you for too long, I'll forget the book, or if I raise you, I won't be interested in reading this book.

The author's sentence about the small amount shocked me 😂

The author doesn't follow the routine. In the latest chapter, I thought the protagonist beat up the governor, and then the governor's backstage came and was beaten again, and then the backstage backstage came out, and so on. It turned out that the author didn't follow the routine 🤫

😥😥😥Why is it not updated?

Alas, another Invincible book has disappeared. Can the author hold on?

Awesome. I just found out and became a eunuch.

Chapters 26 and 27 look a bit awkward

It would be nice to write a middle-aged uncle as the protagonist

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I went abroad for a few days and you became a eunuch when I came back?

Why do so many old routines and add conflicts to advance the plot? That's not how it's written.

Suggested changes to chapters 11 to 14 (small transparency)