Very Young Lady

Does the author still update? If you don't want to change, just say something. I don't have much time.

Let me declare two points to avoid causing disputes 1. Although the transformation text is in a worrying situation at the starting point, it has become a trend of its own on other platforms and is no longer a niche (although Lily is the main one), so I will put aside the love brought by the transformation niche. Bonus for those who are good, I express my views from an ordinary perspective 2. Evaluating anything is a purely subjective feeling. The following only represents my personal opinion. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and vegetables, and they seek common ground while reserving differences What kind of person is Bai Xiao? I stick to my previous review, she is a boring person. When I recall the character Bai Xiao, the most superficial thing about her in the book is "beauty". In every plot, and even almost everyone, when they interact with Bai Xiao, there will be a paragraph where they write about how they are shocked or coveted by Bai Xiao's beauty - wow, where does this Mary Sue come from? Besides beauty, what else does Bai Xiao have? He doesn't talk nonsense, he has no hobbies except water groups, his mind is simple, he has no plans for the future, and no views on life. He seems to be a character living in 2008. He doesn't check Weibo or Zhihu, he doesn't watch live broadcasts, he doesn't read novels, he doesn't watch news, he doesn't watch TV series, he doesn't watch animations, he doesn't play games (oh, yes, there is also a character who is not good at games who spent hundreds of words writing about it). He has nothing but getting stronger and letting others praise his beauty - how can a protagonist be so flat? The ridiculed Xiao Yan still has a heroine to save, but Bai Xiao has nothing. He does not need to work hard for his family to be happy, he does not need to change his life to be happy, he does not need to save his friend's health, and the artifact is readily available (I wonder about that sword) It is set to be sent by an unknown person, and it is more interesting to be unable to trace it than to get it so casually). He does not even have a decent opponent. He is so talented that he only needs to live a smooth life to become invincible - so what should I watch? Long Aotian, who can only pretend to be awesome in front of his family and friends, has a calm and calm account? I don't want to compare works at will, so I'll take "Best Blessings for Animation Production" that the author once recommended as an example (there is no marketing intention, I just read the first few chapters of this book today). The protagonist in it, as an original animator, is faced with a bad production and he has an important position. But what about Bai Xiao? He never encountered a single decent difficulty. OK, since the main plot is sparse and Bai Xiao doesn't have a goal, then I'll just look forward to the emotional plot, right? One of the selling points of transformation is the shaping of emotions, and the shaping of emotions can also make a character become three-dimensional. This is a must, right? But there was nothing. The above views on the character setting and the main plot have never mentioned emotions, because Bai Xiao is a paper person without emotions. Except for his family, the emotional exchanges with other characters in the book are lackluster. The other characters are also very "self-aware" and treat them as brothers - black question mark. Jpg. If there is no problem with my eyes, there will be a post in the discussion area "The singles in this book prefer to marry others"? The word count is already 98w, it's impossible that the male protagonist hasn't appeared yet, right? Let me think about which male character has more scenes in the book - wouldn't it be Brother Lin Jian? If the 980,000-word novel were about youth and campus, the protagonist would probably be heartbroken, with several love lines developing in a spiral and turning the world upside down, and the stock market would be in turmoil. So how to realize this feeling? Could it be that the author planned to create a plot with a suspension bridge effect so that Bai Xiaoguang could do it for free? Finally, let's talk about the background setting of the entire book. There is no doubt that it is a modern city, and it is mixed with content about cultivating immortals. But why does the book look so empty? If there is an official organization like the Management Bureau, then there will be things like Soul Controllers all over the world. Not to mention the in-world struggles between countries, what happens in other cities, even the competition between people, is completely absent. Everyone is a good gentleman? The Authority handles supernatural events without hiding it from ordinary people. The Authority has been established for so many years, there are so many spirit masters in every city, and there are supernatural events in every place. What is the public opinion like? It is impossible that there are no things that have a huge impact. How does the authorities handle it? This is how the news reports it, none of it - So what exactly does the author want to write? A Mary Sue story? The main plot is boring and lacks depth. Apart from upgrading explosive equipment and simply solving unchallenging problems (the next girls dormitory problem must be solved easily), there is no emotional line at all. What should I watch? Like those melon-eating viewers in the live broadcast subplot who praised Bai Xiao's "beauty"? Because the author is very patient and finished reading my last messy comment, I wrote another one today to express my personal views on the whole book. If the author wants to use this book to test the bottom line of readers' acceptance, then I am the fish that was caught. The above is my opinion on this book.

Does the author update every two days? Please update it.

To be honest, it's pretty good. I've read several books about transformations and written by different people, and I think this one is the best. . 🤫

The author? I heard before that she gave birth to a baby. If it is true, are you taking care of the baby now? Can the author take some time to write a little, and add one chapter every two weeks? Can't you just update one chapter a month?

，，，！ You two are gone!(っ╥╯╰╥C)        ，，，?，，QUQ

It's pretty good🙂Don't stop it🔪

Big cheers for the author＾0＾~!

The first is my personal thoughts on the character Bai Xiao - the character setting that was popular five or six years ago and the background setting of Xiaolong Aotian. Mediocrity is the only way I can think of Bai Xiao. Putting aside the dramatic conflicts caused by her transformation, she has nothing that distinguishes her from other characters. She has an ordinary personality, neither outstanding nor cowardly. She has no characteristics in her way of life. She is neither a showman nor a fool. Secondly, let's look at the background of the protagonist - the roommates are all good brothers, nothing special or in-depth, just tools; at home, the good brother and sister are respectful brothers, the sister-in-law's parents are good people, the elders are open-minded and gentle, hmm, the family is happy - oh, there seems to be a father-son feud, it doesn't matter, it will be resolved at the speed of light, very happy So how can such a protagonist have a story? She is neither bitter and resentful, nor is she surrounded by characters who are bitter and resentful, and her environment is stable and peaceful. She has no special past or present, and she has not even grown up after watching it halfway through. There has been no fundamental change in either her thinking mode or her mentality. Well, she has no reason to change, whether it is from herself or external pressure, and she does not have any dramatic conflicts. Well, at least we still have a story. Transformation is still an interesting element after all. Bai Xiao's process of learning to become a woman and getting to know people again are still interesting - but it can't be interesting all the time, because the learning can be completed very quickly, and the reacquaintance can also be completed very quickly (just finished watching the back-to-school plot, almost halfway) That's almost enough, right? Apart from the daily plot of killing monsters and upgrading, I really don't have much to say about this plot. It's too ordinary, even catching ghosts in a rotten city, fighting ghosts and people - it doesn't matter, the plot can still be written with ups and downs, and the plot is magnificent - but unfortunately, no, Bai Xiao is a character with no ups and downs, she can't expand, she has no reason to be magnificent, and the supporting characters can't give her anything spectacular. Oh, no, I was wrong. Bai Xiao also has a pocket watch and a mother. Maybe this is the biggest mystery in the plot? But why am I not interested in this plot point? Maybe it's because this appearance is just a flash in the pan, and it's hard for me to think that Bai Xiao, a character as white as her name, can do anything big. In summary, Bai Xiao's character design is flat, with no characteristics and no essential growth. She has always been an "ordinary person" by definition. The plot is biased towards daily life but not sandy enough. It is bland and bland. The super power part is a cliché of upgrading monsters and blasting equipment. Apart from the reshaping process brought by the transformation, this "Very Big Miss" is really boring. To put it bluntly, Yes, online writing can be ridiculous, it can be cliche, it can be ridiculously bad - but it cannot be boring The above are all my thoughts about the middle of the novel Some people may say that you are not qualified to comment until you have finished reading, so I will continue reading (fortunately, everyone understands this time), and hope that the subsequent content will make me change my mind.

I didn't see any men appearing in the character chart and relationship chart, other than him? Her father, how can I say it is a marriage change article. Well, I haven't read it yet. I read a book review that said it's about getting married. I have a special question?

The positioning of this book is that singles prefer to marry, so don't ask any more questions. Urban literature, I think is more troublesome to deal with interpersonal relationships. In addition, I have seen too many wars between the two factions of transformation literature, and I really don't want to get involved. It's just a different perspective when reading the book. Lily Party insists that the protagonist is female and male, which is understandable, because when the protagonist is a man, and he takes on the role of the protagonist, he secretly understands the interesting stories behind the female appearance. The Marrying Party, on the other hand, defines the protagonist more as a heroine who "has a special experience". It is read as a female protagonist, basically taking a God's perspective to look at the urban life of a special heroine. This kind of substitution is relatively rare. It's like reading gangster stories, you don't really want to be a gangster. Looking at the transformation stories, I don't really want to become a woman. Since you don't want to become a woman, why should you accuse people from different positions of having psychological problems? ……… Note: It is recommended not to substitute too much (´･･)ﾉ(._.`) When reading the novel, not to mention it is a transformation novel. Wouldn't it be better to read the whole story from God's perspective? Seeing what the protagonist does (ﾟoﾟ; feeling happy, and feeling happy for the development of the protagonist, is not a sense of substitution, but a sense of identification! The protagonist is happy to take revenge, kills the enemy with a sword in his hand, and readers will feel happy; for example, if a certain character beats and scolds his parents, I believe most readers will feel unhappy - they feel that he is unfilial, and readers often think that they will not do so, even if they have done so in real life Running into your parents - this is the sense of identity. When reading novels, you should step out of the sense of substitution and strengthen your sense of identity. Don't think that you are the protagonist, but judge: what would you choose and what you would do if you encountered the protagonist's situation? ... In addition, any personal attacks or even insults that harm the family will be banned! Those who start a scolding war will be deleted!

I started to learn about transformation literature in junior high school, first with a certain unscrupulous Orange, then with Conscience Big Di Eternal Big, followed by Little Sheep under the Moon. These are the three writers who impressed me most. Now I am really excited to open a new book for Eternity. Come support

I understand that authors, especially those who write about transformation, have a hard time. For a long time, the transformation literature has basically been about changing into hundreds, becoming single, and changing into marriage. The conflicts between these parties are ten times more terrifying than the dispute over whether to eat coriander or not. I asked a Bianbai Party member, and she said that reading Bianbai Wen has a different kind of happiness (I said I didn't understand). I also asked a Bianbai Party member, and she said that reading Bianbai Wen has twice the happiness (I still don't understand). As a change party myself, I say they are all heretics, hahaha. Later I also understood that it is difficult for people who eat coriander to understand people who do not eat coriander (some people say that people who hate coriander feel like vomiting when they smell it). So when I eat noodles or wontons at a noodle restaurant, whether or not to add coriander, I always say hello in advance. But later, those merchants often took the initiative to ask customers if they could accept coriander. In many restaurants, chefs increasingly ask customers about their tastes and dietary taboos. Just like more and more authors who write about transformation, they will write the party of their book (explaining the taste of the food) in the introduction. To be honest, I think it is very good. If there are still people entering the book review area to cause trouble, it will be a "bad visitor". Don't worry about driving him away. This way everyone will be satisfied (normal customers), and those who don't like it can find another place to eat.

First enter the Yuhuang Avenue, and then enter the Bingji Reincarnation Realm to transcend the starry sky: Ancestor Blazing Sky has become a strong role model for us, how terrifying!

If you don't update for more than two years, I will continue writing like a gunman.

The Seraph who never stops digging holes

The first time I gave a reward of 10,000 points, the first time I played Qidian, and I read this book on the third day, just because I thought it was worth it. Just saying "good luck" would be very weak, and I don't want to go into a long discussion. I only have one thing. I hope the author can give this work and Xiaoxiao a perfect ending in the future. Thank you~ (I have only reached more than 150 chapters. When I became interested, I looked at the table of contents and found that it used to be updated daily, but now it is updated almost every week. , So I'm afraid, so I'd like to recommend the author. I like your works 🌹🌹 very much, please don't slow down your enthusiasm)

I remember that I first read Angel's Yuhuang when I was in high school and rented books from the bookstore. I told Angel how old I was when I wrote the book 🤭. I had already graduated and started working.

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When others write novels, I am always picky from the perspective of a reader (although I still am). However, when I came up with the idea of writing my own novels, I realized that even if I had an outline in my mind, It is really difficult to write each chapter in detail and make it readable, because you have to consider not only the path taken by the protagonist, but also the psychological activities of the supporting characters that are important or important at certain times. To describe them with flesh and blood is to give them "souls" instead of rigid existences like NPCs. . . Outline and details are completely different things!

Forget it about the author, it's reasonable for a man with sexual orientation not to be able to write about Lily. It's a marriage party. I'm curious whether you like men or women? The protagonist's popularity of 12,000 means that he is quite popular. Just as an adopted daughter, you are willing to let your excellent daughter marry any cat or dog? As long as the author writes well, he doesn't mind getting married. Since he agrees that the male protagonist is worthy of the protagonist's charm, he should increase the popularity of the male protagonist. Is it possible that the protagonist shines, and the male protagonist ends with a sentence saying that he is a rich second-generation Wang Moucong, and then you think you are compatible? As expected, I can't understand the brain circuit of marrying into a party.

Judging from the current situation, the subsequent plot may not be easy to write, because usually transformation stories are about transformation and rebirth, just to avoid the embarrassing reactions of people around you after the transformation. But I have to say that there can be some interesting plots from the perspective of bystanders, but the writing and the psychological level of handling the relationship between the characters are more demanding. Maybe future plots will be more interesting.

I heard that the author is going to have a baby. I hope that I can take good care of my body and be healthy and safe. I also hope that I can continue to complete this work in the future. I really like it.

It's Binhe University of Technology again😅

Why are some people unfriendly to marriage-changing articles? In fact, you can think about it, a man who has liked women for more than ten years suddenly becomes a woman, and then likes a man, or even marries him. This is something that many people cannot accept, unless you are gay and you also like men after the transformation. And male compatriots usually think, I would rather be a lily than a gay, at least I still like women, this is what most men think And female compatriots will think this way, isn't it right for a man to marry a woman, and then marry a man? They often only regard the protagonist as a special woman (who has had male experience), and lily and other things are disgusting. This is often the case, which is why there are many male pornographic videos (for women) and many female pornographic videos (for both men and women). In this way, there are only three choices: 1. Single 2. Lily 3. Married We each have different understandings, but the easiest one to accept is often the first one, single, so that the two do not violate each other and readers will not quarrel. The poster still thinks it is better to transform into a single.

🔞🈲🤪I want to see Bai Xiao being penetrated!

Let me talk about the man who reads faces. When he looks at the face of the heroine, he should be able to tell that she is a woman. Otherwise, it would feel like Ye Jianbai has learned to read faces. After so many years of learning, he can't even tell the difference between men and women. What's the use of it? Just like when we tell people's fortunes, the same hexagram will definitely show different endings for men and women. If a boy has a female aspect, this person must be very filial, just like what is written in the novel. If a girl has a male aspect, the person must be a tomboy, unyielding, and a strong woman. The heroines in the novel all meet the above. If in real life, it is the most difficult to calculate for this kind of person. If you don't know the gender, you have to use the method of random divination.

Suggestion Post I personally think the author needs to pay attention! I haven't seen the main storyline so far! I know the author likes to take things slow! But in a book, you don't have a main story line or conflict! The content will be very embarrassing to watch! I remember that the main threads of the two novels Ye Mingzhu and Sunflower True Solution are both revenge. According to the title of this book, there is a eldest lady, so the main line of the story is indispensable for family fights and feuds between wealthy families! This is based on the setting of the author, the Spirit Controller! There will definitely be a battle between good and evil! Whether this book is about getting married or not, I hope that the "male protagonist" can be more awesome and have an incredible IQ, emotional intelligence, and combat prowess! I especially hope that the male protagonist and the female protagonist "Miss Bai" will meet by chance in the early stage, and become friends and heroes who cherish each other in the mid-term, but they belong to different camps, fall in love and kill each other!

If a man transforms into a woman and becomes a tomboy, according to fortune-telling, this person is very likely to have an unhappy marriage or be single when she gets married in the future. She must find someone who can restrain her. It is said that my parents are the ones who give birth to me, and my descendants are the ones who give birth to me. I can restrain my wife and wealth, restrain me from officials and ghosts, and brothers who are better than me. This is the truth. If she has a cowardly character, this should be discussed separately.

Is the author still alive😭