Picked up a Ninja World

After reading Dushu for so long, I gave this book a subtitle. Shadow Clone: ​​I Trap the Whole World

The introduction and the title of the book are sorry for the content of this book. It is very well written. If one day, the author becomes a eunuch, it must be the introduction and the title of the book!

Except for the chapter about chakra which is a bit biased, the rest of it is super interesting. Highly recommended! ! ! As long as you don't jump behind and maintain this level, I feel that the author can become a god in one book. Big cheers. 👍

I don't like Lin Ruowei very much, mainly because the protagonist's attitude is too annoying

Those two girls are too poisonous. If the author doesn't know how to write emotional dramas, just don't write them. It made me uncomfortable to watch them. There are too many clichés.

Damn, this is so well written, why didn't I notice it earlier!

Let the protagonist split his soul in two, and then find Orochimaru to clone a female body using his own cells. Wouldn't there be a heroine? Abbreviation: I love myself😜

The main character went too far in self-pleasure and the writing was so messy

It makes me happy. Well enough. But if there are too many, it will become a routine, which will be very boring. Goodbye.

The novelty is good, but the author often gives the protagonist an aura of mental retardation. It is a refreshing read without thinking.

Can you stop licking the dog? The scenes between the two girls are too much. It says they are not licking the dog but they are actually licking it. I am not happy about it. What else is there to read?

A beautiful woman is a goddess? Forced to guess the identity and unilaterally dragged into the vortex

It's a very imaginative book with a novel setting. If it wasn't too realistic, I would continue to read it.

Funny and illogical, I really can't stand this kind of writing

Swear words are an eyesore. To be honest, I don't understand many writers. Seeing that they don't use bad words when talking to readers, it shows that they still have something in mind, but when they start writing a book, they lose control. If a book is full of swear words, it will appear that the writer is very unprofessional and just wrote randomly for fun. One day, he may become a tJ. Isn't the fact there? I dare say that 90% or more of the books with good scores have no curse words. If you don't believe me, go to those ranking lists and take a look. Can there be 1 book out of 10?

The real world is starting to feel a bit like writing collapse...

So if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, please avoid it.

It became a routine in Chapter 83. It was good at first, but then you ended up with a mysterious recovery routine. Don't write too many novels of this type.

Author, I feel that these recent chapters are a bit boring, mainly because they feel too confusing. I don't know what you want to express, especially the character description. I really feel that my IQ needs to be strengthened. The third generation is also a shadow. The person who can be in this position is not only capable of fighting, I think the eyes The IQ must also be very good, so I think the three generations in your writing feel like children, which is really not in line with the feeling of a village chief. I suggest you read your own novels as other people's novels when you have time. I think you will feel something. PS tips

Okay, it's quite funny~🤭

The story is very good, but could it use less flashbacks? Sometimes it feels confusing. In fact, the running account is quite good. Anyway, I just want to read a cool article.

Come on, hurry up, it's more beautiful and the words are a bit less readable.