The Road to Awakening of the Empress

The writing is OK It can be said that the Chinese version of Westworld (it is recommended to watch more The Truman World and Westworld for more inspiration) I didn't see any obvious conflicts, contradictions, confrontations, and even the foreshadowing was too hidden! You threw away the emotional line that female video writers are best at. You are not just trying to count words. I didn't see what I wanted! It stands to reason that the subject matter is very good, there is nothing wrong with the writing style, the subject matter is okay, but the pace is too slow... It is really a common problem among female fans. If it can be written in five chapters, it must be written in 50 chapters. I hope the author pays attention to the fact that the writing is not popular. Sometimes, when you not only announce the problem, but also the writing style and subject matter, you have not stepped on the resonance point of most readers? What's the problem here?

I have seen this book on the book list next door several times. In fact, my impression has always been that it is a female channel and about female emperors. Although this seems to be the case, this is a male channel. The writing style is still good, which is my evaluation of the author's other book, but I don't know if it is appropriate to use it in this book. In any case, the writing style is not faulty, but it gives me a feeling of being out of touch from time to time. If you only look at the content of the first few pictures, it is easy for people to think that this is a classic female channel rebirth article, especially in terms of wording and sentence making, it is literary and artistic, too literary. It's not that this kind of literature and art is bad, but similar to this structure, a more modern writing style may be more suitable. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion. Not to mention male videos and female videos, that's not important, they are just ways for us to express our thoughts and ideas, right? Let's look at the content now. I like the worldview and the ideas embodied in the book very much. The gap between the rich and the poor is widening, and the rich increasingly regard the poor as nothing. This situation that is gradually losing control always needs a character to rise up. In other words, heroes emerge from troubled times. Can a woman be a hero? I think it is natural. The key lies in what you have done, not just gender or other things. From a simple point of view, the Empress is not as harmless or inoffensive as she seems on the surface. When her strength is low, it is actually a very smart choice to keep a low profile and protect yourself wisely. As for what will happen in the future, we need to see how the author reveals it to us. In troubled times heroes emerge, whether they are male or female. Awakening or resistance? Probably... All of them.

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(O￣Д￣)＜Get up! ※=○☆(＿＿*)Zzzｚ I like the book The Empress very much. The story is great, the conflict between the simulation and the human, and the use of fake memories to create the plot of the game (it is wrong to say that the simulation is real, after all, the human body is real, but the memory is fake). The heroine discovered this fact and began a journey of liberation. Who said that artificial people should be beasts and beings to be slaughtered, but I wanted to rescue all living beings who were deceived in the game, and the journey of resistance began. By chance, I read this book. The writing is good, but I am afraid that the author will not be able to hold it in the later period. After all, he has to keep causing conflicts for a long time and gradually sublimate these conflicts. Without a certain ability to control the situation, it is easy to write off the mark. Come on.

First of all, this is my first time, a long review. Let's first talk about the title of the book, "The Road to the Empress' Awakening". The emperor, the king, the only leader above ten thousand people, a female body, a symbol of the weak ability of human consciousness, the protagonist of the game who is branded as the "empress", in a sense, she is an "inhuman" setting! Is she weak? No, she is the empress. She is powerful and cunning in a programmed way. However, with the aura of the protagonist, she is the representative of the poor. Only the poor are the A, B, B and D of the game... They are the victims of the entertainment of the rich fairy family, a game set for people to play. They have human bodies and are in human form, but they do not have human rights. They do not have the rights of wealth and wealth of "fairies". Even if you cannot stand up, you will only have a life of salted fish until you die, and you will not have a free body. When the mind awakens, when the "weak" of the past remove the grip of fate with his own hands, it is a desperate counterattack! Or wait to die? Of course it's a counterattack! And it's a desperate counterattack! It's a question! If power cannot control fear, what difference does it make between poverty and lowliness? What are the boundaries between heaven and earth? Can the so-called "immortal" stop the empress from rising to prominence? What I fear most is not the ferocious beast, but the trapped beast that comes out of the cage. This is - "The Road to Awakening of a Female Brother" The momentum is overwhelming and unstoppable. I browsed the comment area and saw some interesting comments. ，（）               ：      ，，，，，，""， Let's take a look at its purpose. First, let's talk about the "rich" people who call "immortals". Immortals are just a title, one level lower than gods. Gods have the right to decide life and death and judge people's sins. How can immortals have such rights?       ，~，，""，，？ Such people, such spiritual civilization, are too materially numb. People's basic sympathy, morality, and the expansion of desires... Wait, isn't it alluding to some perverted and extreme reality of the gap between rich and poor? The transactions under Bitcoin, and this time, the insinuations spread, dark to the core, that is not a crime, that is the original sin of injustice. People who have never been exposed to darkness will mainly get novelty and pleasure from reading this kind of article. However, if we want to talk about the depth, the sudden appearance of pleasure in this article is a bit far-fetched, and it cannot be compared with the refreshing article, the silly comfort, and the heartbeat of the heart, because this kind of article requires you to use your little brain while reading it. I personally like its concept very much. In this regard, I suggest that the author may combine it organically, not to imitate, but to pay attention to the control of rhythm. After all, this is an online article, and online articles need rhythm and appropriate rhythm. Fast, accurate, and ruthless, this is the killing style of the empress. Also, there is the author's narrative. I personally like her transition style, which makes me feel very comfortable. I don't think transitions are about technique, it all depends on feeling. You know, transitions are quite challenging. Whether the transition is good or not has a lot to do with the author's ability to control the story. Obviously, the author did a great job. Men's channel, boys' thinking is mostly thick and thin (some of them are as wide as the road@_@), and the effect of reading the text will directly affect their reading experience. I think that although this book has flaws, the flaws are not hidden. If you read it slowly, you will be surprised.

One day, the world you live in will be as designed by a program, and thoughts will be implanted. One day, your existence will be just the purpose of other people's guides, and you will be treated as an NPC in the game. Being humiliated, tortured, and subjected to extremely unbearable means by others. Death, resurrection. Game plots designed one after another for this reason, repeated over and over again... Until one day, you find a corner of this world... Will you rise up to resist? I just take back the freedom that belongs to me and us, fight for freedom, fight for destiny, and the steps of resistance begin. The plot of this book is similar to a movie I have watched. It seems to be "A Different Dimension World". I also found out that my world was just programmed, and I can feel the collapse and helplessness. Summary: The writing in this book seems plain, but in fact it is extremely vivid. The description of the environment, the dialogue between the characters, the rendering of the atmosphere, and the vivid portrayal of human characteristics, etc., Can completely tell the story without fancy words, which is enough to show the author's skill. This book is very delicately written. The author deserves to be from a female channel. You need to read it carefully.

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"The Road to the Empress's Awakening" - the road to the glorious recovery of humanity wiped out by life technology. Total score: 94 points [Foreword] When I first started reading this book, I thought I was about to see a domestic version of "Westworld" imitated, and I picked it up with this interest. After reading the first chapter, I felt that it incorporated Chinese elements into the game to tell a story similar to the game style of "Westworld". But I was wrong. The author obviously wanted to express more, and the project structure of this book was larger. Because of this, I am very slow to write the review. I am pondering the author's original intention and listing the logic and central idea of ​​the book. At Qidian, there are many, many books, and they are divided into novice texts, realist texts, and some other categories. This book is obviously not a piece of writing. It needs to be read calmly, enter the author's fictional world, and follow her logical thinking to overlook the whole situation from a God's perspective. In this book, you will have some insights and reflections. The brilliance of human nature has been excluded by the rapid development of life technology here. Reason, indifference, and calculation and planning everywhere are all filled with flesh and blood. If I were to give you some direction, it would probably be a fusion version of "Westworld" and "Alita Battle Angel". [Detailed text explanation] This is a world where life science and technology has been highly developed. Humanity has cracked the secret of life and gained immortality. That is, no matter how you try to die, if you want to save you, you can use life technology to completely and perfectly allow you to be reborn, and this rebirth is a rebirth that retains the memory of life characteristics. Of course, this narrative only expresses the prerequisites of this story. It is precisely because of this technological support that the world is polarized. The rich are extremely rich. They stand at the top of the food chain, looking down at the poor people they have left behind. Therefore, they have a name for themselves called Immortals, and the place where they live is called Heavenly Palace. At the other extreme are the poor, with backward technology and backward ideas. So they are dominated and played with. The poor who are selected by the survival of the fittest are implanted into the character consciousness and become NPCs, waiting for the development of the main plot and branch plots in the constructed game world. The protagonist, the empress Qingcheng, is a high-quality poor person. She has worked in the Empress Game Area for many years, and her memories have been cleaned over and over again, and she has been reborn over and over again to complete new storylines. (Therefore, knocking on the blackboard and marking the key points, this is a game between people, a game played by people who call themselves immortals to play with the inferior people in their eyes. The so-called Heavenly Palace has no moral bottom line, and kills wantonly because life can be reborn.) Qingcheng's character not only has a beautiful appearance, but also has a brain and a delicate mind. He is extremely tolerant, seizes the time, and is good at discovering the weaknesses of others and taking advantage of them. Therefore, in this game, it is not yet known who is the real winner, but no matter who it is, Qingcheng's own fate is based on a lamentable position. How to rise up in this extremely downturn and adversity, break out of the siege, and subvert the Heavenly Palace will be the biggest expectation and attraction. (Other characters with their own characteristics and backgrounds will not be discussed in detail, otherwise I will have to vomit blood as a claw machine. Because each has its own story) [Text review] Overall rating: 94 points Theme: Male Channel - Xianxia Channel - Modern Cultivation Reading Word Count: 70,000+ Note: Individual Rules for people's reviews: book title attractiveness 10, writing style 30, plot 20, smoothness 20, attractiveness 20 (1) book title attractiveness 10 points. The title's attractiveness is average, because I have seen a lot of XX Empress recently, but according to the actual situation of the book, there is nothing wrong with this title. (2) Writing style 30 The author's writing style is very good and must be given full marks. Especially the description of large scenes is very personal. The delicate movements of clouds and flowing water are all displayed in the scene, which is very picturesque. And it also contains the crisp and bloody descriptions of killing that male porn readers like. (3) Plot 18 According to the author's plan, the plot is very clear and the logic has reached a high level, especially the setting of game rules. Very thoughtful and innovative. Two points deducted, this book is basically the same as the last book I reviewed. Because after reading more than thirty chapters, there is still a little less writing about the protagonist, the empress. Most of the time, the supporting character dominates the scene. Although it is exciting, it still feels a little missing how the protagonist feels and how to be discovered in depth. According to the current progress of the game, Liu Neng, the main supporting character of the player, has broken an arm, Miss Green, the secondary supporting character, only has her head and torso, and two are dead... There are still five players who are still in good health for the time being... Well... My empress Dada just showed the rules she summarized, and using her clever mind, she began to plan to act alone. (4) Fluency 18 You need to have a good logical foundation to read this book. Hmm... Or in various characters analyzing each other's situation and counter-exploitation, and taking advantage of the situation, or planning the plot, to straighten out the relationship line requires good logical thinking support and memory. But it's not difficult to get started. If you can't remember it, just keep reading. It's not difficult to understand. After all, there are not many main characters, so it is not difficult to remember their personal characteristics and positions. (5) Attractiveness 18 is not bad, it has its own system, a very clear system. Regarding human nature, with the development of advanced science and technology, civilization has become no longer civilized. Instead, it has a cold moral outlook and discussions and controversies on the subject of basic human survival and reproduction, which runs through many characters' existence points. [Recommendation for this book] I feel that the author is a little impetuous or impatient after 50,000 or 60,000 words. The plot is in full swing. In the hands of a master, the current plot of this story can probably support the writing of at least three to four hundred thousand words. The author compressed it into 100,000 words, which makes me a little curious, author, how many words do you want to write? This is highly refined. But the consequence of being highly refined is that you just keep going forward without having time to think carefully. Once you stop, you will feel tired because you are waiting for an update. There will be plot counterattacks that have not been considered carefully before, and thoughts of withdrawal that feel like many plots have been missed. Calm down your mind and recall the calmness of the first few chapters, the steady feeling of the scroll slowly unfolding when you first met the empress. [Summary of this book] The story is good, innovative, and the structure is very stable. Moreover, the author has great writing skills, so I guess she is a female writer. But when I read the book, there was no lengthy description of my mother-in-law at all. Just like a swordsman, he draws his sword cleanly and neatly. He sees blood when he should see blood, and he sees desire when he should see desire. Author, don't abandon your article. What you want to express in this book cannot be expressed in simple writing. This kind of discussion of ideological realm should be respected and expressed perfectly. Every author has his or her own preferences, but there are not many that can really show the big picture and arouse discussion and thinking. Although you currently feel that you are insufficient, as a reader, I can feel your thoughts and direction and resonate with you. This is enough. I believe that if you write a complete book like this, your second and third books will be more mature and free-flowing. Of course, the only thing you chose wrong is the category. The Male Video Xianxia... Well... If you choose a popular category, this book won't make you want to abandon the article in tears. This book is suitable for making a movie, very suitable! Appreciate every book carefully - Miao Miaoyi

The writing is vivid and the subject matter is interesting. I wish the author an early signing!!!

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First of all, this is my first time, a long review. Let's first talk about the title of the book, "The Road to the Empress' Awakening". The emperor, the king, the only leader above ten thousand people, a female body, a symbol of the weak ability of human consciousness, the protagonist of the game who is branded as the "empress", in a sense, she is an "inhuman" setting! Is she weak? No, she is the empress. She is powerful and cunning in a programmed way. However, with the aura of the protagonist, she is the representative of the poor. Only the poor are the A, B, B and D of the game... They are the victims of the entertainment of the rich fairy family, a game set for people to play. They have human bodies and are in human form, but they do not have human rights. They do not have the rights of wealth and wealth of "fairies". Even if you cannot stand up, you will only have a life of salted fish until you die, and you will not have a free body. When the mind awakens, when the "weak" of the past remove the grip of fate with his own hands, it is a desperate counterattack! Or wait to die? Of course it's a counterattack! And it's a desperate counterattack! It's a question! If power cannot control fear, what difference does it make between poverty and lowliness? What are the boundaries between heaven and earth? Can the so-called "immortal" stop the empress from rising to prominence? What I fear most is not the ferocious beast, but the trapped beast that comes out of the cage. This is - "The Road to Awakening of a Female Brother" The momentum is overwhelming and unstoppable. I browsed the comment area and saw some interesting comments. ，（）               ：      ，，，，，，""， Let's take a look at its purpose. First, let's talk about the "rich" people who call "immortals". Immortals are just a title, one level lower than gods. Gods have the right to decide life and death and judge people's sins. How can immortals have such rights?       ，~，，""，，？ Such people, such spiritual civilization, are too materially numb. People's basic sympathy, morality, and the expansion of desires... Wait, isn't it alluding to some perverted and extreme reality of the gap between rich and poor? The transactions under Bitcoin, and this time, the insinuations spread, dark to the core, that is not a crime, that is the original sin of injustice. People who have never been exposed to darkness will mainly get novelty and pleasure from reading this kind of article. However, if we want to talk about the depth, the sudden appearance of pleasure in this article is a bit far-fetched, and it cannot be compared with the refreshing article, the silly comfort, and the heartbeat of the heart, because this kind of article requires you to use your little brain while reading it. I personally like its concept very much. In this regard, I suggest that the author may combine it organically, not to imitate, but to pay attention to the control of rhythm. After all, this is an online article, and online articles need rhythm and appropriate rhythm. Fast, accurate, and ruthless, this is the killing style of the empress. Also, there is the author's narrative. I personally like her transition style, which makes me feel very comfortable. I don't think transitions are about technique, it all depends on feeling. You know, transitions are quite challenging. Whether the transition is good or not has a lot to do with the author's ability to control the story. Obviously, the author did a great job. Men's channel, boys' thinking is mostly thick and thin (some of them are as wide as the road@_@), and the effect of reading the text will directly affect their reading experience. I think that although this book has flaws, the flaws are not hidden. If you read it slowly, you will be surprised.            ，，，😳（）

First of all, this empress is an NPC in the game park. She is not an empress who can take charge of the family in the traditional sense. She is just a game tool. Secondly, this NPC wants to get rid of the fate of NPC, but his personal ability is too small compared to the entire era. In addition, the time is set five thousand years later, life science and technology has developed greatly, everyone is immortal, and as long as there is one cell, they can restore their original life form. The surface of the earth has been transformed into a game park. Have you seen "Westworld"? It's somewhat similar, except that "Westworld" is about robots and this book is about real humans. It is impossible for the NPC Empress to successfully resist at once, that would be ridiculous. Therefore, in the early stage, the main focus was on describing the entire world, and the role of the empress was left out. Without the intervention of external factors, the executability of people's enlightenment through their own thoughts is completely unrealistic. In other words, the awakening of the Empress NPC cannot be achieved by herself. Therefore, the description of the entire world and various forces is a necessary condition for the Empress NPC to embark on the road to awakening. It is a very passionate thing for a person to game an era. But in this book, you will only see tragedy. This book is more suitable for people who have a certain thinking ability, a certain pursuit of social value, and a strong psychological quality. If you just want to have a good time, it is better not to add it to the bookshelf. Finally, this is not a cool novel, a routine novel, or a fairy tale novel. If you look at it from the perspective of a fast-food online article, then I'm sorry, but this is an insult to the book!

A: Do you want the pleasure of being controlled by others B: 😅 A: Do you want the frustration of being abandoned by others B: ??👍 A: Do you want to be played around with various interests of others B: 🤔🤔 A: You have... B: You have chicken feathers, are you afraid that you are not a dildo?

Piggy, wake up and send me the blade~

I can only say that writing this kind of article at the starting point is mentally ill.

This book is very innovative, but it's a pity that the author's writing skills are not good, so he cut it 🤭

Did my long post get eaten? ? ? Even if you want to complain about this book?

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The story is not complicated at all, it is nothing more than a story of humble people overthrowing the political rule of the Heavenly Palace. What is Tiangong? To put it bluntly, it is a space fortress built outside the earth's atmosphere by a group of immortal bastards using existing technology. Who are the humble ones? They are humans living on the earth. Oh, by the way, the surface of the earth has been made into a game park, and humans are all NPCs. The setting of this story: Five thousand years in the future, life science and technology will develop greatly, and human beings will not be able to die even if they want to. As long as there is one cell, they will be able to recover indefinitely. The empress is one of the NPCs. She is very popular among the citizens of Tiangong. The main reason is that this NPC can satisfy the many dark side psychological needs of players. ―――――――General background science popularization is completed 1. This is not a cool article, not the kind of one-shot and ten-line article. If you skip a little bit, you will not be able to understand the following plot. 2. There are not many main characters, but more of the portrayal of the general environment. The writing style is very cold and serious, and reading will cause a certain amount of psychological pressure. 3. This book contains sensitive content, but it is very obscure. It discusses the final stage of social form. 4. In the first half, the player "Liu Neng" is the protagonist, and the role of the empress will be weakened a lot; in the second half, after the civil strife breaks out in the Tiangong, the role of the empress will enter a positive description. If you want to see the empress killing everyone, you can change the channel. 5. This book is definitely not a fast-food online novel, nor is it a fairy tale. This book is closer to science fiction. I guess the author lost his mind and put it in the Xianxia category. 6. Each character has a set trajectory and is bound by the large civilization environment. Why can Liu Neng be the protagonist in the early stage? This guy is probably rebellious. Eighty percent of the author is also a person who wants to subvert tradition, so he wrote such a book that normal people can only say they can't understand. 7. Why do you say this book is ugly? Compared with speed-reading online articles, this book does not have a three-chapter mini-climax or a five-chapter climax, and there are no pretense and slap-in-the-face routines. Even if I wanted to shout 666, I would be afraid of deceiving the public. 8. This book is not for ordinary people like me. The author is very cold. He has painted the target readership to death. Only those who know a little bit about Marx and Capital can be judged by the author. Of course, this imagined ultimate form of society is still a world of the weak and the strong, and young and old men all know this. 9. The author expresses his views on civilization in a very subtle way. No matter how high-level the civilization system is, equality is all nonsense. This word just serves to rule. 10. The story is a good story, and the language of expression is very advanced, but this book is also very discouraging. Because, not everyone has the courage to look directly at tragedy! Actually, I would like to write a little more content, but since the author is a glass-hearted person, I won't criticize it too much. This melon boy is very tough-talking. He complained with tears in his eyes about why no one read his book. Then he turned around and went to set up a cool persona again. Okay, you are awesome, you are not making money, you are fulfilling your dream, you have noble sentiments, that's it! Finally, come and touch your head~~

HBO Westworld, HBO Westworld, HBO Westworld, it's very exciting and fun to watch. This is my favorite American TV series, and I hope to write a great taste of Westworld! Westworld is not famous for its Game of Thrones, but this one is also a well-made work by HBO. Come on! This drama is a bit mind-boggling, I don't know what style to write this idea in!

Come on, it's very well written and very humorous!

Happy Dragon Boat Festival! ! 😁

Happy holidays! Do you want to put it on the shelves?