The Most Powerful Punch in History

After roughly reading it, the writing is not very good and the description is not detailed enough. It is like reading an expanded outline. In general, there is little foreshadowing and abrupt turns For example Passerby A "I won't ride for you, no, brother, come on, I will take you wherever you want to go." Because the mountains in the distance were flattened by a punch Changed to Passenger A rolled his eyes, "I can't ride for you, no way." Lie just glanced at him and waved his hand casually, a gust of wind xxxxx the mountains in the distancexxxxxxx Passenger A's face xxxx body xxxx thought xxxx Until Lie looked at him xxx again, he xxxxxxxxx xxxxx That's about it. The specific description depends on the amount of literature, so I will expand the outline of this expansion In short, learn how to do it first For example, the protagonist punches, and the opponent is frightened You can add the protagonist's facial expressions, movements, demeanor and psychology before and after punching The opponent's facial expressions, movements, demeanor and psychology The changes in the environment before and after , the sense of the environment by passers-by in the distance xxxxx of insiders xxxxxx of onlookers xxxxxx of observers in the dark xxxxxx sensed in the distance Everything is to form a picture in the mind as much as possible. If possible, use some words with sound, it feels better to have a voice