Mecha Journey

A book worth reading, wonderful

I just saw the 3-month assessment and the elite students selected from a population of 10 trillion. I can't stand it anymore at this level.

After reading more than 40 chapters, I feel that the protagonist is a scumbag without mechanical weapons. He was fucked by a few gangsters and ended up in the hospital. He is so useless. This is the most useless reborn person I have ever seen.

Come on, stop writing. This is not a rear admiral and captain. He is a useless person. What is the biggest advantage of being reborn? Have you ever been a soldier? Check the information. More novice than novice

After reading more than 40 chapters, if I want to be with a woman, I might as well make myself super strong and reborn. I am just a fool without the advantage of foresight.

I want to read mecha stories, but few people can write them well. I miss the skeleton elves.

You really shouldn't write about rebirth. It's better to set it up with the protagonist dreaming about his own life. After all, the dream has no real sense. The protagonist is childish because he is childish. How can he be so childish when he is reborn?

The story is not bad, but you are writing about a major general in his thirties or forties? ? ?

The protagonist is just a useless student, far from a soldier.

If you don't strengthen yourself first and make yourself stronger when you come back from rebirth, it's useless to calm down.

This lousy book should use this rebirth to pick up women. He can try to become stronger and seduce women as hard as he can. The main point here is to kill insects. If you try this hard, it is highly poisonous.

The biggest failure of the rebirth story is that you really become that age when you are reborn. When I was reborn 20 years ago, I behaved like a child again.

To be honest, the author has written hundreds of chapters like this, and I admire it. After reading the golden three chapters, everyone will know what the hell he wrote without even reading the following chapters. This man is also a man of great perseverance, but the three golden chapters are just like that.

3000 Witness it

Isn't the protagonist reborn? Why does it feel like it has no effect?

You might as well write about a modern person who travels to the interstellar era to work hard. As long as you write it well, it will definitely become popular!

It's natural that I got poor grades. The writing was procrastinating, with no central point and no interesting points. I wanted to highlight the mecha and the protagonist, and there was also a bunch of inexplicable technology interspersed in the middle. I didn't even know what you wanted to write, and the whole thing didn't capture people's attention.

I couldn't copy the review I wrote on his novel, so I had to take screenshots. It was so tiring to key in words! It's not easy to gain experience!

Let me take a look. I recently watched Pacific Rim

Human development of science and technology should not focus on one, at least other types of science and technology should not be too different.

I think the plot is really good, but forget about the characters The setting of the mecha is also good, I just treat it as watching your dream, come on

The further back I look, the less I can stand it.

Overall, the protagonist really has no bright spots except for the mecha part. First of all, physical fitness cannot be improved by potions alone. There must be exercise methods, exercises and the like to improve physical fitness. It is impossible to rely solely on running and devil training. No matter how well you write or practice, it is nonsense. On this point, you will lose everything.

The author has just created a group for all authors to chat and share their writing. If you encounter problems, you can come here to solve them. It is a QQ group called "Share Your Writing Experience"