Wanderers in the Long River of Time

As an author chasing investment in his own book, I feel a lot of pressure. What should I do if I lose money😭😭😭😭

I also want to be more refined. I have been short of books for a long time. This book is good. I will get 4 recommendation votes tomorrow. Not many. Don't think too much about the author.

433, 200, 407 Has anyone joined the group to chat and play games with me?

Oh my god, I was almost finished writing the Underworld chapter when I realized that the Yin and Yang volume was mixed up, which was heartbreaking! Just leave it as it is, I don't want to change it, it's uncomfortable!

Picking up ruthless people is a failure, everyone knows ruthless people, so don't bother yourself. How many lifetimes have you lived to blush over trivial things? You've never seen anything like this before. After looking at a few pictures, first of all, the pig's trotter was positioned as a boss, but when the ruthless person appeared, he became a bitch. The difference is huge. I guess no one would have a problem with you dating a heroine from another world, but you can't be ruthless. She is the number one brother-controller in the world. She lives in this world just to resurrect her brother, and other things have to take a back seat. Believe it or not, if killing the pig's trotters could resurrect her brother, she would immediately chop the pig's trotters to death.

I will also build one myself. If there are any brothers who read, please give me some advice...

The title of your book, author, is not science fiction-y enough. I suggest changing it to "The Wanderer in the River of Time". I hope it will be adopted.

It's all over, don't be so lazy when writing the next one 😜

Or import it from Low Mining City?

Hoho, there's a cover. ੧ᐛ੭

The idea is very novel, and the beginning is well written, but the rest is not so good. The writing is too plain, and many places look very dramatic. The whole book has no sense of immersion at all. I can't adapt to it, so I say goodbye. It's not a waste of money for me to give you three recommendation votes.

It's too messy, and there's also a problem with the setting. The beginning is awesome, but I can't understand it after a few chapters. First of all, why does the protagonist still need a physical body when his soul has solidified? Can't you practice without a body? With these tens of thousands of years of soul power, you can be a big boss. Also, your body is made from some fairy beings. Wouldn't it just blow him up if you go to a low-level world?

Nuclear bombs are so awesome that they can't escape. The third generation of the super god universe can be tough. If you become an immortal, you can't just open a space channel.

The book is good, but the beasts are probably being raised even after the first update, so not many people will read it.

From the first few chapters, I feel like I can't get into it, it's too white.

Boss, can you write about Jiangye World? I really like Mo Shanshan, Don't Stallion 😳. The boss will be popular

Come on later! After reading what the author said about the outline, I felt bad.

I feel like the author is so wild that he flies up and to the point of death. Waves, waves, waves, waves, waves.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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