Invincibility Starts from Immortal Grandpa

In fact, the author gives you a suggestion. It is better to write this type of novel in a light-hearted way. There is no need to forcefully add some brainless villains to show off the protagonist. This kind of novel is so common that people nowadays can probably guess the routine... If possible, try to write about daily life, or add some normal villains, friends of the protagonist, etc. This feeling should have a good effect. But this is just a personal suggestion. The author can refer to it. There is no need to change it if you don't want to change it.

I thought it was good at first, but after reading two or three pictures I couldn't stand it any longer. The author should go and screw in it.

When I saw the class reunion, I couldn't stand it anymore. I couldn't stand the pretense, or the pretense.

This fashion show is really disgusting, and then the protagonist's sister-in-law doesn't leave after she comes. Doesn't he work? Especially the most disgusting thing is the fashion show

So I don't know what's going on, but all the women before and after like it😍

There are too many people who are pretending to be slapped in the face. You have fought in the city and then in the province. Next time, you are going to conquer the whole country. After you have conquered the earth, what are you fighting?

Oh my gosh! Every chapter is pretentious! Even more so than Chen Beixuan. I can't afford it. Slipping away

Xue An's appearance four years ago

Invincible Immortal, immortal, will his divine power be revived on the day he dies, and his invincible cultivation in his previous life return? I have read a novel before. The protagonist is invincible in Hongmeng, and the prehistoric era is too lonely. He goes to play rebirth, but he is killed during the rebirth process. Then the moment he dies, he recovers, his divine power returns, and he returns to the top. This is why he dares to play rebirth, because no one can kill him. This is where the confidence lies. No matter how the years change, we are still invincible 😁

There are no boys in the nanny's articles, they are all women, I really want to 🤮

It hasn't looked good since Chapter 1000. A dignified Immortal has become powerless and likes to show off. The upgrade is too slow and there is a lot of nonsense. Don't you have any treasures from the previous life? There must also be a few immortal emperors following the subordinates and forces in the previous life. Where were the various treasures and warehouses in previous lives? Could it be that he is a bachelor immortal?

Immortal emperors are included in novels about cultivating immortals, but I personally feel that these immortal emperors have no sense of weight at all. They are basically some garbage realm with the name of immortal emperor. Among the novels I have read, the immortal emperor written by Chen Shuidong has the weight and responsibility of an emperor, and can bear the magnificence of these two words.

Forced onto my bookshelf, damn it! ! ! !

Forcibly added to my bookshelf, the starting point is getting better and better

The beginning of this book is that the protagonist Xianzun failed to advance to the saint realm. If he starts over, he will not only be promoted to the saint realm, but there will be other realms after the Hunyuan saint realm, such as the heavenly realm, which is the Taoist ancestor. This stage should be in the Holy Realm, which is above all the heavens and worlds. Then break through the realm of heaven and reach the realm of the great road, and be on an equal footing with the great road. It should be in the realm of chaos at this time. That is, the sea of ​​chaos, countless universes. The Dao realm can also be referred to as the Chaos realm. This kind of powerful person can be called supreme in the Sea of ​​Chaos. Taboos exist. He is immortal and difficult to kill. As long as there are people in the world who care about him and there are still people in the world who remember him, he will definitely be able to return. Only by not thinking about him can he be killed. The other way is to kill him in the past, present and future in order to completely eliminate him. Above the realm of chaos is the primitive Tianzun realm. What is primitive? It means that everything can return to its original state, including the universe and the surrounding universe. All in all, it is an amazing existence. Above is the Hongmeng Realm. This kind of existence only exists in the legendary Hongmeng Realm, and maybe no one has heard of it. Above is the Hongmeng controller. Above is the transcendent, that is, the existence beyond the realm. It is not in the realm, invincible, and far beyond the current realm.

After failing to escape the tribulation and returning to Earth, he found his wife and daughter living in a doghouse. Immortal Lord collapsed instantly. . . . . The smell of advertising is too strong

The protagonist treats people and saves them, and then they make sarcastic comments. The protagonist still stays there like a bitch. How can a supreme immortal be so bitchy? Since it is a Wuxiang Fairy Village, then you should write the domineering power of the Supreme Immortal. There is also the female classmate star who confessed her love on TV and caused trouble for the protagonist, and then others always harmed the protagonist. The protagonist did not kill her every time, and it just went back and forth. Is it interesting? If you insist on persisting, you hurt me, I will let you go, and then go back and forth like this, I guess I can write the ending.

It's not wrong to pretend to be cool, but it's your fault to write a book with kindergarten-level logical thinking. You'll give readers goosebumps all over their bodies.

If you spend more than two hundred yuan to read a novel, will your head be caught in the door?

Who dares to publish a book with this level of writing? Who gave you the courage!

It's so poisonous. I originally wanted to regain the pleasure of reading cool articles 10 years ago, but this time I almost died from the poison.

Why is the Immortal Emperor so lazy? When a cultivator is with a mortal, doesn't it feel like her body is covered in mites?

Why are the protagonists in today's books all invincible, but they are all people who kill people if they disagree with each other? Logically speaking, a person with high achievements should have a big picture. How can a person with a big picture be a narrow-minded person who cares about human life? The author should first improve his own quality and study more about human nature. Don't distort human nature and mislead unknown people just to make money with code words...

This introduction is interesting. It's like this: "I have been in the army for five years and haven't returned home. When I returned, I found that I have a three-year-old daughter." Does it feel similar to the introduction? ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃElegant

Write something! How dare you charge votes for such a terrible novel!

If you kill him decisively, send him to the hospital; if you kill him decisively, send him to the police station. Kill decisively and inflict serious injuries.

Now look at how the Immortal Emperor's nanny flow is a bit troubling 😰

My favorite novel about cultivating immortals was finished on March 2023. I finished reading the last chapter on August 29, 2023. The ending is also reassuring. I think this theme can be used for a second part, and the ending can also be changed. Xue An is a half-author, and he can return to the heavens, and he can make a second part using the story of his longing for immortality. The background is not very big.

He was slapped in the face at the beginning, he pretended to be cool at the class reunion, and he was still able to act in a clichéd way.

As I listened, I suddenly became aware of the peptide bond. There are still many holes to fill in. Let me help the author fill them in. In the ancient times, the Tathagata inner demon Wutian sacrificed his body and soul and sent his will out of the heavens under the pursuit of the Chinese gods. He came to the Yuanyu world. There is no time and space here. The universes here are as many as sand, and the Chinese universe is just one of the countless sands. Wutian's will found that many universes quickly turned dark and then exploded. The explosion produced a lot of black matter that spread towards the surrounding universes and then infected the universes it encountered. Wutian discovered that this black matter can actually It remained in Yuanyu Realm for a period of time. When Wutian got closer, he found that it was a black viscous liquid and named it Black Water. After Wutian absorbed the Black Water, he turned into the first generation of Evil Mist and returned to the Chinese universe. He used the Black Water to quickly create an army of Evil Mist to attack Heaven. Heaven suffered heavy losses. The Jade Emperor managed to create a small universe with half a step of creation and enveloped the entire Heaven. All the high-end Evil Mists and Chinese gods were blocked in it for ten thousand years. The Jade Emperor left After he ordered the third princess to reincarnate with the Conferred Gods List, she waited for the person who could break the situation. The third princess reincarnated An Yan and fell in love with Xue An, and then triggered the Conferred Gods List hidden in the soul to infuse the Chinese people's ten thousand years of accumulated luck into Xue An, and then sealed the deal. The God List sent Xue An away from the earth according to the preset settings and set up a time barrier to block the earth for 3000 years. 3000 Years later, the Red Lotus Immortal Lord Xue An was reborn and returned to the earth. His strength increased rapidly. Wutian finally broke through the small universe and killed the Jade Emperor. After the death of the Jade Emperor, the throne of the Heavenly Emperor was vacant. The God List inspired Xue An to obtain the Heavenly Emperor. Since then, the gods of the five elements and six realms have bowed their heads, and their strength has increased to the half-step creation level. Xue An used the main god system to quickly create an elite confrontation. The army of evil fog lasted for thousands of years. Wutian's strength reached the limit of creation, and his realm was infinitely close to the creation god. In the battle with Wutian, Xue An understood the truth of the world and proved the creation god's position. He defeated Wutian and completely destroyed the evil fog. The whole book was completed.