Journey to the West: Thunder in the Sky

After reading it, let's talk about it, go to the upper right corner of the Westward Journey Party. It is impossible to travel to the West, and it is impossible to travel to the West in this life! Please pay attention to the upper right corner of the party. I'm afraid you will be angry to death. Can you believe that the protagonist led people to kill Zhunti and Nüwei? Can you believe that Tongtian and Jieyin got together? Please prepare quick-acting heart-saving pills when you watch the show. If you are smart, you will lose! The setting of this book at the beginning was quite exciting. I thought I would see a different prehistoric world, so I immediately ordered all the paid chapters when I saw them. But... Not to mention too much, it's a pity that it's over. I personally feel that I am reading two books. I personally feel that the core setting of this book is different before and after the protagonist is sent to the outside world. I have expectations and disappointments. In short, the author has worked hard, but it is a pity.

I feel a bit like that, ancient Chinese

You were persuaded to quit in the first chapter. You said that the protagonist fought in the Anti-Japanese War and was known as a fierce general. Even if he is not a general, he is not much different, right? When such a person retires, the country won't arrange for him to be a security guard? He also asked his children to unplug the oxygen casually

It's so ridiculous to write a novel. The protagonist is mentally retarded and has just traveled from the main world to the ghost blowing lamp. He doesn't think about how to get benefits and improve his strength. He is still there to help ordinary people, feels pity for others, and accepts disciples on behalf of the gods of the main world. I think it's not easy to survive one episode with this IQ.

Author, are you showing off your poetry again? It's so embarrassing. I just looked at it casually and actually killed Zhunti. It's so awesome. You even called me Senior Brother Jingyin. How the hell do you have common sense? Sanqing is a disciple, and Jingyin Zhunti is a registered disciple. Let's talk about saints. Saints can also be killed. How awesome~~~ Goodbye, bye,

Even if the founding fathers had no guards, they were killed by their own sons and daughters... He was still a rookie, and he became dissatisfied after being called a "grand master" by others. He was still preparing to teach the Dharma. Is this how God understands "immortals cherish life, and immeasurable people"? Why didn't you think of "the law should not be passed lightly"? Extremely poisonous!

An old man with pig's feet is stunned to ask you to write with the mentality of a teenager 👍 Strength Chapter 1: Persuasion to Resign

I was so embarrassed that I felt sick. First of all, the titles and poems of each chapter. If you don't have the writing skills, don't write these. The later you go, the more perfunctory it becomes. I haven't seen many such titles and poems written in modern online articles. As for the good writing, haha😒, no. Also, how did you define the protagonist's character? He had just gained strength and was still very weak, so he pretended to be a saint. I won't say anything else, others have said it in the comments.

The names of Jiang Han and Jiang Zhen are enough to persuade me to quit, but I have to choose Jiang Han Zhen.

Grand Master Wen Zhong can be called an ancestor?

Not good-looking, the plot is awkward and blunt

I am still a noob, but when I teach others the technique, everyone asks the protagonist for the technique. Want eunuch

? They got into a fight for no apparent reason. Would it be such a loss of face to reveal their identity? Is your Tianting Lei Department a side sect of some kind of demon sect? This is not how you look for things by force, right?

As a reader, I feel that my IQ has been insulted by the plot of "Hao Stupid Coin".

Looking at the beginning, the few chapters of Journey to the West are pretty good, but why did the style of painting suddenly change... It would be great to just write about Journey to the West

I hate books with multiple protagonists, and there is no female protagonist. How many people are gay?

But the protagonist's activities are too strange. The world of immortality is full of dangers. Instead of having the power to protect yourself first, he keeps going to the most dangerous places next. Moreover, his cultivation level is not high, and the treasures are not well hidden. His behavior is a bit too deliberate.

There is an error in Chapter 60 that I hope the author will correct. It was not 500 years between Sun Wukong's birth and his return from Buddhist scriptures, but 800 years. Also, in Chapter 6, Sun Wukong was not born in the Western Han Dynasty either.

Apart from the perfection of heaven and earth and the equality of all races, everything else becomes more and more ridiculous the more you look at it.

Wouldn't it be nice to write about it in Journey to the West? I have to add Zhutianliu. Now Zhutianliu is all bad. Take a look for yourself. Apart from those few books, are there any other current Zhutianliu that have good results?

You basically don't need to read this book until you get to Yangshen. Whatever is written later, it feels like a different person. A good book can actually make you burst into tears. Real cowhide.

I just got the cultivation method. If I don't practice, I will go to other worlds What do I think?

Forced wisdom, regardless of whether you are in a mythological system or a prehistoric setting, if a person who has just started to participate in Journey to the West to measure tribulations and travel across the heavens to preach, I have no idea what you are trying to express.

Is this introduction interesting? How are there any connections between the modern world and the world of Journey to the West? How do you understand this timeline? What is the relationship between modern gods and Buddhas and the gods and Buddhas from the Journey to the West? Don't all the gods and Buddhas who have contact with Journey to the West know the ending of Journey to the West? Why do such illogical novels always appear now? Elementary school students can't write like this!

The first time I showed my love and filial piety, the character of the protagonist fell apart. This is so awesome. Is there any author like you who writes novels like you?

The plot concept is okay, but the writing is indeed a bit poisonous, mainly in the behavioral settings of some protagonists. Although the sentences are not as poisonous as other readers said, it can only be said to be barely bearable.

It seems that in some parts, the level is erratic, sometimes high and sometimes low.

All I can say is that the plot logic is too messy.

What settings? What a mess it has become, can anyone continue to read it?

Even if you become a fairy, your protagonist's life is not as good as that of an ordinary person.