Lan Meng Wugong

It's so difficult for me. After seeing your character description, I feel a little embarrassed about mine. . . . . . 😰😰😰It's not a little bit, it's very embarrassing. You wrote well.

Here we go again 😏😏😏👍👍

How can you have characters but no pictures!

I will give you tickets every day. If I break my promise, I will change my avatarᶘ ͡°ᴥ͡°ᶅ

After reading it again, I found that the background of this story seems to be the ancient times (Taiyi guessed it after seeing Huanglong). I am not professional about female fans 😃, so I give suggestions from the perspective of male fans (🐶 to save my life) 1. In my impression, the ancient times were all about gods fighting (I read this from male fans, this is the first female fan book 😅) and the scenes are very attractive if they are shocking. 2. The characterization of this book is very good, but the characters change a bit quickly, and it is easy to forget who is who. 3. Uh. . I'll take another look. (Manual funny)

This is a book that allows me to read the taste of a classic, a book worthy of careful reading. The description is very delicate, and the language fits the context of the characters and the characteristics of the times (a common problem in many books is that ancient people speak modern dialects. This book cannot find such problems, which is very good). The details are also very exquisite. This is the author's first book. I hope you will read this book to become a god 👍. Come on, I will rise to the top soon!

I'll change my number and give the lady a ticket.

Will you love me if I give you a ticket?

Wow, the writing is ok, I like your atmosphere. Yeah, I have to study hard. Although I have only read two chapters so far, I will read the rest slowly. Let me make a post first. Come on, author, I can look forward to your future works.

The names of people in your book have been constantly challenging my Chinese language ability. I feel like I have learned nothing in nine years of compulsory education, and I probably don't recognize them. 😜

Dude, it's so difficult for me. I didn't listen to anything in the Korean class. I just did the coding. Today's class is like listening to the Bible. Woohoo, I may have to stop for a few days to make up for what I missed 😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓

Come on ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

The details are so great. Come and teach me soon. 😭My Chinese is not good

I came here, Laotie, and found out that you changed your profile. This profile feels better than the last one.

I'm here to visit and give you a recommendation vote. I haven't finished reading the book yet. I'll comment on it after reading it. I also want to make a small complaint. When I saw the title of the book, I actually thought of the English phrase "long long ago".

[Activity Post] I suddenly found out that I have 500 points of circle activity funds. What should I use this for? (￣▼￣) My brain is not enough.

The boss already has 200,000 words, but he still hasn't put it on the shelves?

I deleted a post on Tieba. I feel like I've lost some experience. I don't even recognize the short four-character book title.

I am really not suitable for female novels, or romance 😭😭 1. I think the writing style is okay, but the use of certain words is slightly inappropriate. For example, the death silence at the beginning is generally not suitable for this kind of embarrassment, but a bold statement made by someone in the hostile camp. 2. I actually think that the word "great god" has been turned into a somewhat humorous title like "worshiping the great god" by netizens, so it was actually a little bit inconsistent when I first saw this word. 3. Another point is that the remaining creatures are quite entranced. In the last sentence, I think it is obvious that the character stumbled when speaking because of nervousness. In this case, listening to entrance is not suitable. Overall, it is very creative, and the writing is also very good. The three points I mentioned above are just examples that I found. It boils down to a problem, that is, details. No one stipulates that those words cannot be used in this way. In fact, it is also possible to use them in this way, but you have to pay attention to the popular meaning. This attention is not difficult, like, Master, I think you must know that this title is more popular than the original meaning, so pay attention to their more popular titles, because readers tend to be preconceived. Except for some small details, there is nothing major wrong with it for now! Come on!

The content and plot are good and very attractive, but some small details should be described more to better portray a vivid image 🙂

Here I come! ! Love your books! The people inside are so cute! ! Created very vividly! ! Maybe some descriptions need to be more refined, but this is just my idea! Just do whatever you want! I'm committed!

Recently I have been busy with my graduation work Everything is in a hurry Qidian has long been uninstalled from my mobile phone The heart of writing has never stopped Finally tonight, in such a boring and sleepless night I downloaded Qidian again Then I came to you You are the only friend of Qidian I don't really want to face the two books I stopped I won't start a new book in a short time I can't guarantee updates because I don't have enough time. Secondly, I don't want to waste any more time Don't waste your enthusiasm When I write again, it should be a long and uninterrupted novel Copying Ten Thousand Dreams In fact, when I wrote the book, it was when I was at my lowest point My mood and psychology should be very unhealthy It's better to stop the book We want to spread love and peace, warmth and positive energy I wonder if you are still there my friend Are you there I miss you

Congratulations on the launch, first order to support, come on

Compare it to the young lady (*´∀`)~♥ I am heartbroken about my own internet speed

The lady who updates diligently. (*´∀`)~♥

I'm not used to the ending 😰

After finishing the book, give me a reward! 😁