The Little Fairy's Red Envelope Group

I'm asking for everyone's opinions. I didn't know that the heroine's name overlapped with that of the heroine in another book. I just saw it when I read the comments today. Do I need to clarify the heroine's name? Please reply. If necessary, I will start the process of changing my name...

It's been a long time since I've seen such a relaxed drama. In addition to the script, there is also the protagonist's own life, compare your feelings, come on

😂😂When I saw the red envelope group, I thought of the story about the red envelope in the boss's retirement.

Today I saw a cat that was about to be turned into sperm emmmm I had an ominous premonition Hurry up and bite the two pieces of wood! When you go up, remember to take the time to take me up with you! I like kittens now 🤫 The briquettes are too big, and it's inconvenient to carry them out But I haven't seen the briquettes have a good belly either Alas, I have no chance of being a kitten, so I can only carry the briquettes around the gai, and then there are a bunch of young ladies following behind me 😅 (This is true, a few months ago)

Oops! Everyone must pay attention these days Take care of yourself Those who don't wash their paws or wash their paws frequently should wash their paws and hooves frequently to be a clean picky girl Then I suggest that you mix a cup of light salt water before going out and after returning home, take a sip, and then raise your head and "Gulu Gulu Gulu Burp (swallow) 😠" Hahaha, no need to swallow, just spit out the "Gulu" after a while Then that's it. . . Hmm. . . Just take care of yourself Well, withdrawn By the way, remember to buy a mask

I think the author's plot ideas are not too problematic at the moment, but as the first copy of a book, it's really not appropriate for it to be so long. The beginning of a book is a critical period for building fans. Many people judge whether to add a book to a bookshelf based on the first few dozen chapters. So generally speaking, it is steady and ruthless. Most novels like to start low and go high. The so-called "high start" means to be cool and fast (especially to gain fans before charging), and there will basically be a small climax soon to attract the first wave of fans - such as the family competition of the loser style, the young man who broke off the marriage should not bully the poor, the reborn house fight requires the scheming aunt to win for the first time... Therefore, the first copy will not be too long, and the emphasis is on quick results. There is one exception, which is suspense reasoning. You can catch people by relying on suspense, and it doesn't matter if you keep your appetite a little longer. The dungeon of White Cat Tribulation has a very simple plot. Within two chapters of entering the dungeon, all the unsolved mysteries are clearly laid out, and even the only suspense of the man in black is clear (and the psychological description of the white cat is not used to pave the way for the emotional atmosphere of white and black, so we actually don't care much about who Xiao Hei is). There is no suspense in the palace fight scene. It directly tells the readers that Xu Yanru is the winner, and directly tells the readers who is on the same side. The most important thing is that the palace fight scene has no meaning at all, but it messes up the taste of the whole book. Would you say it advances the plot? Delete this paragraph and turn it into "Qingyang is seriously ill and plots against the cat demon, the master's boss behind the scenes." The logic is completely self-consistent. Then, here comes the point‼ ️Under such circumstances, I haven't even finished writing such a straightforward plot in twenty or thirty chapters... A lot of meaningless characters and meaningless dialogues have been added in the middle... First of all, someone may delete it from the bookshelf (for example, I lost patience). Especially when the plot is updated once a day, the slow development of the plot becomes very fatal. Secondly, I missed the best period for new books to attract fans. Finally, the writing style of this book is actually average. It can be written into an excellent novel (such as a cultivation chat group) by relying on imagination, plot, and interesting arrangements. However, the author is too slow in writing, like a spring that has been completely straightened and lost its elasticity. I don't know much about the working mechanism of Qidian. I don't know whether the author has his own editor. I just saw that this is the author's third book and he is an old author. This way of writing makes me very puzzled. As a member of the investment team, I would like to make some suggestions. I hope the author will work harder and write better.

Ning Shu!!! The name of the heroine in "Quick Time: The Cannon Fodder's Counterattack" is exactly the same!!!

The story of being rich and willful is so bland. In addition, I think the original owner will not be satisfied with you living her life for her. The original owner should be allowed to go back after the problem is solved.

The protagonist of "Quick Time Travel: The Counterattack of the Cannon Fodder Female Couple" is also called Ning Shu. This name makes a deep impression on people. I just finished reading this and saw that the protagonist of this book is also called this name. Come and take a look.

Wow, I really want to go home and smoke briquettes at this time Hmm! What a photo. _(:_∠)_