Alsufi

Especially for human beings, the classification of categories and categories is eye-catching. It is clear at a glance but unclear. At least this is the first time I have seen such terms. The ancient-style nomenclature of Hoshizongriji Temple and Yuji is also unique, allowing people to feel a local flavor while stepping into the stars. The opening scene of Andromeda running towards the Milky Way is really the finishing touch, making people feel a kind of vast and delicate romance that belongs to the universe. Now let's talk about the shortcomings. To be precise, it should be called shortcomings. It's that the title of the book is really... Although it directly uses the name of the protagonist, it really doesn't have anything eye-catching about it. And generally, the names of the protagonists are as simple as possible. Two characters are best, but three characters are also acceptable. Four characters will test the reader's patience in memory, not to mention that using too many characters will be suspected of filling the number of words, although they can be shortened to Al and Su Fei. The introduction also has this problem. Although it explains the main plot in the early stage, it is difficult to catch the eye. It also makes people know that the protagonist needs to suffer a defeat and be captured at the beginning... The introduction and the title of the book are the two biggest reliances of a new author, and they must be cherished. There are no other major problems. The author's style of writing science fiction can be considered relatively sophisticated. Just be careful to separate too many paragraphs. "Praise to the Holy Light", we are both newcomers and encourage each other.

The Andromeda Galaxy is heading towards the Milky Way, so wonderful.

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