Runaway Fugitive

The author's writing style and layout are above the standard, and overall it's quite comfortable to read. But there are still problems. Here are a few points for reference only: 1. The title of the book is straightforward enough, but not attractive enough; the introduction is interesting, but it does not highlight the characteristics of the protagonist. It is a bit complicated and confusing. 2. It can be seen that the setting is borrowed from One Piece, but it has its own flavor. However, the author made a mistake that is easy for newcomers to make, and the golden finger was too hidden. The golden finger should be the protagonist's eyes, right? Every description is sketchy, the rendering is not straightforward enough, and the superpowers that have appeared are not very unique. This mode is more appetizing. If the master has the foundation, it will be no problem to play like this. For details, please refer to Gunmei's new book Nightmare. But when newbies play like this, it's easy for them to lose their virginity. Authors who write books seriously and have something in their minds are rare, but the author doesn't seem to know the rules. I hope this book will be successful. If it is poorly written, the setting and context of the book can be clearly explained in the next book. The writing style can be subtle, but the breaking point must be straightforward, that is, all the attractive things should be revealed in the title and introduction.