Spirit Mania

The writing is pretty good. The rebirth system combines cultivation with the city. Although they are all bad street routines, but you can grasp the rhythm and write an enjoyable article. In addition, I beg the author not to be a eunuch.

The protagonist is really kind. Logically speaking, such an unscrupulous boss should not be led by a middle-aged boy.

I want to read a novel, but I can't write it! The idea is: (Live broadcast type) The earth is a magic-free earth, there is nothing extraordinary, just ordinary boxing. One day, a huge crack appeared in the sky, and a dilapidated small town rushed out from the middle, like a 90-square-meter house. Then all countries were shocked and wanted to take it for themselves. They sent planes or (any) other methods to automatically disintegrate within 1,000 meters of the small town. Then this small town floated around the earth at 3,000 meters in the sky for three months. News from various countries It has been hot news, and then our protagonist appeared. The protagonist Brother Bao is an outdoor live broadcaster. Today, the small town floated to the protagonist's city. Many anchors like Brother Bao were live broadcasting below. Just above this city, the small town spread out its glory and disappeared. Everyone was stunned... Get the golden finger... The protagonist returned home, and then Later, he received the memory of this golden finger. This golden finger was made by him in his previous life. In his previous life, he was an ancient farmer. Because of the war, his two sons died in the war and his wife also died of illness. He fled into the mountains for refuge. In his previous life, he picked up a small world in the mountains when he was more than 70 years old. It was originally a martial art. When he got old, he was too lonely. Then he started to cultivate immortality alone and met many people in the universe. Civilization, after ten thousand years, he doesn't want to live anymore, he is too lonely, and then he fights by himself, disperses all the memories in his soul, and starts a new life. After reading this memory, it will also disperse in the protagonist's soul, leaving only the hope of living forever with his relatives, and then starts his journey of live broadcast to cultivate immortality. Why should he live broadcast to cultivate immortality for others? Because you want your loved ones to live forever, everyone should practice immortality together. In this way, it will be no surprise that your loved ones can live forever and will not be greedy. The protagonist always wears a mask during the live broadcast. Anyway, others can't tell the difference. Then he collects resources while collecting pretense points. The live broadcast tools were stolen from a high-tech civilization in his previous life. There are various high-tech technologies for live broadcast production, such as refining Weapons, alchemy, and everything are available in all worlds, because the earth is magic-free, and spiritual energy can only be found near the small town. It cannot be practiced elsewhere. Parents can get a small jade pendant given by the protagonist that is made from the origin of the world, so that they can practice faster than others. As the town slowly upgrades, there are more and more. The protagonist goes to other planets from time to time for live broadcasts and opens fairy cities, not just on the earth...

Ah, a new book has been opened. Hurry up and grab a seat. Fortunately, I didn't want to delete the book.

Damn, it was so enjoyable to read. It's a refreshing novel that I must support.

The sand sculpture made me laugh to death 😃

Oh my god, the second chapter is so self-indulgent...

I followed the author's last book, but it was not to read the book, but to give the author some suggestions, because in my opinion the author has great potential. The first one is to think more about the overall direction and plot before writing. A successful novel must have major setbacks, so even if it is a cool novel, it is not easy to succeed. There will be nothing to write about after writing. In addition, it is not recommended to write too much about the government. If you don't have a lot of confidence, the writing style can be improved, but this is not a way to make a qualitative change. In fact, it is more important to create a character. What kind of person he is, what he will say and do, if he can be portrayed well, the level of the book will immediately improve.

I hope the author can persevere. It's not easy to find books now, and it's even harder to write them. Don't be like the eunuch in the last book, okay?

Unless the author buys traffic for this book. The writing is really bad, no creativity and no fun. . . It's simply dark cuisine, and the author himself doesn't even know what his strengths are! The early plot of the last book was well written.

I hate the system that automatically releases tasks and rewards. If the system has this ability, why not just turn the protagonist into a God and play around with the system? There is no sense of immersion.

Too watery, slow to update, few words, like a whip in the throat.

Waiting for fattening up, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

I feel like this system is so arrogant, it's better not to offend him. Can't the male protagonist just practice on his own? Hundreds of years of memory can't compare to a system? Isn't it the origin of the world? When the male protagonist becomes stronger, he will still have as much as he wants!

The subject matter should be good! It's just that the character of the protagonist is really not to be complimented. He prefers the aloof senior brother, who is simply called a showman. As for the school beauty part, there's nothing wrong with it! The system is originally a loser. It's like you've been eating hot pot for a month and haven't eaten it to death. Now someone pays 10,000 yuan for you to have another meal. I can only say it's delicious. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch and promotes it more. Too few people will read it.

How should I put it? In fact, the themes of this book and the previous one are similar, but it might actually be better if they are combined. Some of the details, emotions, and characterization of the previous book are more mature than this one, but the plot of this book will be more attractive. After all, the rebirth invincible flow is better than the direct invincible flow.

Alas, it seems that another book is coming to the palace.

This book has 5-star reviews (o^^o) and it can fool everyone!

I didn't want to read the introduction when I saw the task of picking up a school beauty. Why not pick up a kind-hearted classmate who saves people and disfigures them?