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The writing is okay, but it's a pity. Please work hard on the next book!

If you have any favorite novels, you can comment below. If the plot requires it, I will include it.

I've seen people review the book three or four times before signing a contract, and I've seen people write hundreds of thousands of words before signing a contract. What do you mean? It's meaningless to say sorry because you didn't sign a contract. Even if you say you want to re-send the book to Fantasy, it's better than saying sorry here! Not even a cover, not even a hundred chapters, I really despise it!

It looks pretty good. I hope the writing gets better and better. Cheers, author＾0＾~

I've read Chapter 47 and overall it's okay, although there are some minor issues that don't seem to be major problems. Secondly, I hope there will be as few female protagonists as possible. In fact, I used to like reading harem stories. After all, most men want to have wives and concubines in groups. But this is a novel. After reading more, I found that few authors can write good female protagonists. If the emotional scenes are not well written, it is like dropping a mouse droppings into a pot of porridge, which is disgusting. Finally, I hope the author will update more every day.

There are too many cheating disciples, and their character descriptions are not clear. After recruiting new disciples, it is impossible to tell who is who. It is recommended that the author highlights a few key characters or names them a bit special, such as the swordsman master Ximen, the pretentious boss Zhao, and Dantian Broken Xiao.

There's nothing wrong with the useless protagonist! With the Hongmeng Dao body, it takes three days to become an immortal, five days to become a saint, and ten days to destroy the Heavenly Dao?

I don't know why, but I always feel that the protagonist is out of tune with the world and full of a sense of violation 😥

Isn't it 😅😅, it must be one chapter every day?

Speed, the manuscript is saved, just waiting for you to explode, Xiong dei

The update is too slow and cannot be maintained.

How many protagonists are there in this book? If you recruit dozens or hundreds of disciples and then write them all, do you want us readers to live as long as heaven?

Brother, I'm just like you, I didn't sign a contract for 100,000 words. Just got bad news today. I still have tens of thousands of manuscripts saved, I don't know what to do?

In fact, the male protagonist is either 50-50 the same as Uzumaki, or he becomes a young man. There is no need for you to have a different hairstyle when you are an old man. Also, it's time to trick people into studying. Suddenly a certain inheritance came. At first I thought it was for the disciples you brought, but it turned out to be bigger and became the main plot of the protagonist.

This book is relatively good-looking~ and interesting~ but the chapters are a bit short~ It's a bit unsatisfactory to read~

The writing is quite good, but it's a bit lacking. I decided to vote for this seedling. After all, it's the first one. I'm a little excited when I think about it.

Has your job become more stable? This update is so uncomfortable.

There are too few recommendation votes. I have time to place an advertisement 😥

It's interesting, but there are too few updates.

The baby is too short to be raised.

Stop making trouble, author, you signed the contract after only 100,000 words. What matters when signing up is subscription, income, and value. Your book will be of great value later on. As the plot unfolds, you yourself are making big changes. Your article needs changes.

There's nothing wrong with your subject matter. If I don't sign you, I think it would be boring if your future plots were written like this. It's also unsightly. You have to make changes before you can sign.

This novel is really good. Look how much I wrote before I signed the contract.

I had a hunch when I saw that the author hadn't come up with a cover!

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Try to write the next book well. It is recommended that you continue to use this theme! It is better to be deficient than excessive.