
A Wandering Planet That Can Travel Through Time
会穿越的流浪星球
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A novice novel with poor pacing and cliched creativity.
The author successfully destroyed the system's numerical system in two chapters, and it makes you feel like you have to spend so much effort to deal with a zombie even if you have nuclear fusion. The author lacks a basic understanding of the operation of government agencies and is unable to build a convincing social system. My blood pressure was high at the beginning. Is the author saying that our world is just a grassroots team, or does he really believe that the management of billions of people can be decided and implemented by a few people? On the one hand, he said that he advocated the great unity of mankind, but on the other hand, his work was full of feudal lingering, and his ideas were quite reminiscent of the Chiang Kai-shek bandits. Pandora is full of personal heroism, Cybertron just lets it go, and Marvel has supporting characters whose combined IQs can't finish kindergarten. What's more, they went to another world to explore the path without basic biochemical isolation, and the Resident Evil world crushing game ended in a terrible battle. If not, I would have thought he was a Saudi prince. Moreover, the technology jumps so fast that I don't need to use it in actual combat. I just want to sacrifice a few supporting characters to forcefully impress, and finally get revenge in a hypocritical manner.
It was quite toxic in the early stage, but very enjoyable to read in the middle stage. If you don't deliberately criticize it, it is quite good, but it feels a bit watery. In the later stage of Three-Body World, the author began to show a lot of his original strength, and some things in the early stage have a sense of hindsight. Many things in the beginning are put together, and it feels quite shocking It took more than half a month to finish it. It feels more wonderful as you go to the end, and the overall level is constantly improving. To me, it is still a very good book.
Illiterate people writing science fiction are so poisonous 🙂🙂🙂🙂
After reading the book reviews, I found that many smart people are reading this book, which is about sociology and technology! Science fiction novels are originally based on fantasy, and this is about time travel! If you don't like the book, just don't read it. Why are you here trying to gain a sense of presence and write a review about the author? ? ? I just feel sorry for the author. If you don't accept it, scold me. 😆😆😆
When I saw Resident Evil, I felt that the author really didn't have enough imagination. Even if the biochemical monster you set is strong, why does the army have to go through the entrance? Just like Rainbow 6, demolish the ceiling. Just keep demolishing it to maintain external fire support.
It's very sb, especially the dialogue with the three-body world, which is simply an insult to people's IQ.
It's a pity that this book does not achieve both reasonableness and smoothness. People who like Liu Wandering on the Earth also like the kind of grand, epic-like writing that tends to be reasonably and thoughtfully set. These are not mutually exclusive with the refreshing points and imagination required in online novels, but the author is obviously just riding on the east wind of "The Wandering Earth" to write a novel that is refreshing. All kinds of bugs and poisonous points, I can't stand it anymore. As a new author, I'm actually pretty good, but I just can't handle it in many places. Come on!
I don't know if today's chapter is the end, but I'd like to commemorate it after reading it in advance.
I accidentally searched for this novel when I was a child. At that time, I thought the title was very interesting and interesting, so I kept reading it. Although I am short of money, I can basically only support the author by chasing the revised version, and I read the book silently, unless I can't help but complain and post a few chapters. Let's talk about some of my personal feelings about this book: Let's talk about the advantages first. Generally speaking, first of all, the selection of materials in this book is very clever. It can be said that it caters to the tastes of readers who are interested in this aspect since the popularity of Little Broken Ball. When writing this book, it can be seen that the author has really done his own thinking and is not copying everything. This is especially obvious from the recent chapters. The author carefully thought and constructed the theory of why the whole story can be connected in a line. This can be regarded as a new idea. Then for me personally, the author's choices of several worlds are basically quite popular. Generally speaking, I feel that I have a certain understanding of them and I like them and are interested in them. Finally, the author consciously shows the description of the entire spirit of the wandering earth civilization instead of reducing it to just a background, which is worthy of encouragement. Everything has its pros and cons, and the author is not a genius or great writer, so it is inevitable that this book will have shortcomings and regrets. Now let me talk about what makes me feel bad about this book. 1: The author is sometimes too deliberate in this book. Several times he just forces the plot to make me laugh, and it feels like it is just for the sake of humor. In some places, it even forces sensationalism, which feels very inconsistent, and it will be bad after you experience it. Two: Although the title of this book is very clever, for readers who are not very interested, it is suspected of being too popular, and they will be naturally disgusted. Three: The author's writing style is sometimes really uncomfortable. Some of the writing is too dry, some of the plots are too plain, and sometimes it becomes a running account. At this point, I can only wish the author to write better and better in the future and make progress. I originally wanted to say something, but I couldn't figure it out for the moment, so let's leave it at that. Generally speaking, this book is just hay, barely enough food for those who like it. If new readers are interested and free, they can also read this book. If they suit their taste, they can subscribe to the original version and support the author. Well, just sauce.
The setting of this book is okay, but the writing is not that great. Yes (it's a bit embarrassing to read) I hope the author's writing skills will improve while writing. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
Re-evaluation after two months
I wrote a short review on September 18, in which I criticized the author's narration of the story. After two months, I will talk about my feelings again. To put it simply, it is: I have made obvious progress and am getting better. First of all, the characters began to become fuller and no longer so flat. Secondly, the story begins to become interesting, and it is obvious that the author has worked hard on the description method and detail processing. Of course, this may be because I am more interested in this story (NieR: Automata), and 2B's description is more in line with the setting, so it gives me this feeling. But in the final analysis, the author's story has accumulated a lot up to this point, and it is normal for the characters to undergo qualitative changes. I am afraid that a story or a novel will come to an end, and the protagonist and main supporting characters will still be rigid and rigid, more like puppets and tool people than living humans with flesh and blood. By the way, I want to complain. It seems that the author insists that the protagonist accept 2B as RBQ. It is possible, but it involves the depiction of the emotional psychology of men and women. A little carelessness can be a poisonous point. The author should be cautious. That's about it. Now we have reached "Star Wars". It seems that the starting point is "Rogue One". So what is the real goal of the protagonist (camp)? I hope the author will consider it well. "Star Wars" is also a huge world, and I hope the stories here will be interesting. If you write well, votes and rewards are indispensable.
Science fiction becomes fantasy
①It is understandable to speculate on hot spots. ②Science fiction requires IQ and logical reasoning, fantasy... This book is very popular, that's all for me
It's wonderful. It refreshes the world view. I'm used to reading science fiction, but I'm a little unaccustomed to the literature about cultivating immortals. I feel that cultivating immortals is so childish and far away. It's a kind of guess about the laws of the universe, and it can be self-justified. Although I feel there are some flaws, the author is a human being and not a god, so I can understand it. Anyway, thank you author, thank you for enriching my spiritual world.
Here is a book review. I am an ordinary reader. I don't have any malicious intentions. I just want to say something and don't criticize others. I have read more than a hundred chapters from the first chapter. The first part is okay, the protagonist's IQ is still a little online, and we don't investigate some scientific issues, but in the later part, when it comes to driving the earth as a cannon to make an emergency stop? ? ? You don't want to use the force to break the earth. Not to mention this, I'm just a little confused. The most important thing is, can't I live here on the surface? ? ? Um? ? ? Excuse me? ? ? What to do when meteorites fall? The surface of the earth cannot thaw immediately. There will still be water accumulation after thawing. How can you live in most of the oceans? ? ? You said that meteorites cannot reach the far side of the earth, so how do you thaw it? Can the Chinese sun be more powerful than the sun? ? ? It takes hundreds of years for the human sun to thaw. How can you be so nice that you can get it done as soon as you come in? Why do you, the protagonist, still keep pushing me? Ah? Did you feel good about yourself in those chapters? Famous words! Is this online? IQ, has it been disconnected? It's still science fiction, my God, there is no basic logic, is it inflated?
I came, I conquered, I harvested, I left. . . . Why does it feel a bit like space locusts?
I feel like the author is a little too impatient. You can see some details in Pacific Rim, such as the part about killing Gherroth. Gherroth cannot be killed. As an outer god, the younger brother who was driven out by President A cannot be killed by a small breaking ball. He already belongs to the conceptual range and cannot be killed. As for the sound of the celestial body... It can make President A uneasy... You tell me it is just ultrasound? ? ? Then, the author should not write about Blizzard games. First of all, Blizzard is a fan of Cthulhu. There are Cthulhu elements in games such as Warcraft, StarCraft, Overwatch, etc. This thing is no joke. Boss C appears, directly sc, and the earth hits gg. These are all normal operations, understand? At least Ghroth appeared in Overwatch, and the two Cthulhu bosses' dependents or entities (the celestial voices heard by Sigma) really need to be supplemented by the author... In addition, the energy source of the Spear of Adon is the stellar reactor. If the author writes about interstellar, the technology tree will collapse...
The author's writing was okay at first, but the more he wrote, the more utopian it became. Maybe the author's initial thought was that the protagonist was a good leader. But this article is written like a swarm of insects. The pig's feet are the female insects and the rest are workers. The pig's foot is the emperor, and everyone else is a cog that makes up the empire. Of course, it depends on how the author wants to write it, but if the current trend continues, this novel will be nothing more than a mindless and enjoyable novel dressed up as a wandering earth.
When I first saw this introduction, I felt it was very interesting, so I couldn't help but click in and take a look. After reading about 50 chapters, the protagonist's positioning is too embarrassing. Before the time travel, the protagonist was just an ordinary person, a layman who wanted to be limelight and hope to be the center of the world. For a person who carries a civilization with him, civilization is his support. However, in the book, the protagonist's personal heroic characteristics are too obvious, and an ordinary person dares to fight for his life after time travel. This is too blunt. Also for a civilization, no matter how desperate it is, the future of the civilization cannot be handed over to one person, at least not all hope. What the protagonist should do is to believe in the earth, instead of hiding what he knows. At least three cobblers can stand up to Zhuge Liang, let alone the top leaders of the civilization. The advantage of the protagonist lies in the various abilities given by the system and the foresight of the world. The disadvantage lies in his own IQ and ability. An ordinary person, no matter how confident he is, knows the gap between himself and the real elite. You are already bound to the earth, so what if you tell others everything? The next thing I want to talk about is the earth. To be honest, the main body of this book is more like civilization. Civilization is not the pendant of one person, but the dream of a group of people; progress is not dragged by one person, but the efforts of everyone. The idea of traveling through the earth is good, but there is a problem with this theme: What is the role of the earth? This depends on the author's skill. In the end, it's all about being awesome.
Farewell. I read it one after another for about half a year. At first it was fresh, but then I felt more and more uncomfortable. After seeing NieR, I really couldn't stand the Automata part. This book gave me a feeling of a Ubisoft open world game branch line. The scripts are different, but the general logic is similar. The protagonist goes to investigate, the protagonist encounters monsters, the protagonist summons teammates, the protagonist leads everyone to victory. Then the mission is completed, the protagonist chooses mission rewards (various technologies and so on), the protagonist changes equipment and is strengthened, just like Assassin's Creed Syndicate When it comes to Odyssey or Far Cry, the side missions of Ghost Recon are equally homogeneous. But why can I play for twenty or thirty hours? Because it is supported by the main mission The plot of this book (regardless of scientific rigor and logic) is just like the side missions when you play these games. It is enough to play through it once or twice. Although the names of other dungeons are different, the general idea is similar. The remaining problem that everyone has criticized is that the protagonist has too much role. I don't think the problem is big. It's just an act game with the name of real-time strategy or 4x strategy In the end, I bought a refrigerator, but I don't know how to refrigeration. I bought a house, but I don't know how to build walls. Everyone is welcome to discuss rationally. If you are a trainee, please don't criticize. You are not a consumer, even though I know that you are all high-level VIPs and you are all big readers and small comments 😂
Personal opinion: Many book friends and authors have also discovered that technology is advancing too fast and cannot be controlled. You can read Big Eyeball's three books. The layout is getting smaller and smaller, but the writing is getting better and better
The first chapter almost poisoned me to death. Quantum superposition can only exist when there are no observers. Liu Peiqiang, are so many people on the earth dead? Quantum superposition state, to put it bluntly, is like a wanderer who is away from home. When his parents do not contact him, his life or death is unknown. Quantum collapse means that if his parents call him or meet him, he will of course know whether he is alive or dead. It is not that mysterious.
Revealing some secrets about the author's connection to the worldview
I think the author has a very good idea. Why are people so obsessed with being realistic? How can the world of Marvel and DC be embarrassed by the words "real" and "science fiction"? However, the author has a very good point that he wants to express. I wonder if anyone has felt it: if you look carefully at the plot, it expresses a secret. Human science in many planes seems to develop according to certain deliberate rules and tendencies. Some planes are good at biogenetic engineering technology, some planes are artificial intelligence, and some are spiritual heterogeneous network technologies. These technologies may sound familiar to everyone! Next, the technological development trend of our real industrial revolution is based on these choices. Today, human science is developing in a simulated environment. In some human dimensions that are lagging behind us, they are staring at the development of a certain technology in our world and directly applying our technology to them. When we think about it carefully, we are horrified that the environment we live in is just a simulated world...
This book is very powerful
To be honest, after reading the book, I found that this book taught me a lot. It has profound meaning and profound connotation. In the "black, damn black" universe, there can be such a prairie fire. I am deeply moved. Among all science fiction online books, I would like to regard it as the strongest. (Any comment on this book should be condemned)
I don't know if you have played the game Stars? I have only read the first hundred chapters, and I always feel that the development of the protagonist is like playing Stellaris. I wonder if the author is a Stellaris player?
Come on, author, I'm waiting for you to finish the new book.
It's great to watch. I'm really looking forward to the next plot. I came here from a pirated website to support it. The author is a big fan! 👍👍👍 When I become financially free in the next year, I will definitely subscribe.
To make a complaint, it is better to use so many accelerators to imprison sophons with electromagnetic fields. The reason for Trisolaran Earth is that the technology is not up to standard and the ability is not enough, but wandering on the earth is fine.
Watching it back again, I'm still shocked. Although there are various setting patches and I'm thinking-like plot, the momentum is coherent. That's enough. Next, is our story.
It just happened to be finished today I've been chasing it for so long and it's finished I feel like I can open another book later It's like "Douluo Dalu" Trick you monkey
It's a pity that the front part is quite poisonous. If I just blur it out, this book would be more perfect. The back was pretty good, so I couldn't find any books to read, so I just carried the ones in the front.
(Long comment warning) Authors should pay attention!! !
It's okay so far, but the positioning of the protagonist is a big hidden danger. This can be seen in the comment area. Some people want the protagonist to be dictatorial and save trouble, and some want to go into darkness. There are also many people who have the same view as me: The coalition government is also the protagonist, and it should play a greater role. The protagonist is of course very important. He has a golden finger, intelligence about different worlds, and his own forward-looking views. He should be far-sighted and know the hardships and dangers of the future. But at the same time, he cannot hide the information. He should discuss what he knows openly and bring together the wisdom of all mankind to achieve the best result. Unfortunately, the protagonist currently only uses other people as tools. Of course, it is still at the beginning of the novel, but this situation mustchange as soon as possible. The actions and decisions made by the protagonist should not be decided by him alone. The author cannot help the protagonist make decisions. In this environment, the protagonist's independent actions and choices, even if they are reasonable, will give people a bad feeling. It will feel like the protagonist is deliberately highlighting the power and intelligence of the protagonist. Generally speaking, this is true in novels where a single protagonist fights monsters and upgrades, but in such a group-traveling science fiction background, it is simply poisonous to an individual. The protagonist has become the author's spokesperson, pretending to be cool, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, everything is perfect, everything develops according to the will of the protagonist (author), and everyone else is just a tool. It's really too poisonous! ! In just 53 chapters, the plot has many problems 1. When it was proposed to tame the flying dragon, no one (especially the scientist group) questioned it. Even if the situation forced it, the protagonist should be asked about the method he planned to use to tame the flying dragon and try to provide help. 2. When driving an engine, no one questions it. The engine is the lifeblood of mankind. No matter how powerful and prestigious the protagonist is, the driving level of the protagonist should be assessed first. 3. When the protagonist chooses one of the three, as mentioned above, there should be an open discussion. If the protagonist thinks that the higher-ups cannot be trusted for the time being and has considered it carefully enough, and then puts it aside first, and then asks about the relevant content in detail, judging from the book, can't the "Chinese Sun" be directly activated? Wouldn't it be beautiful to choose "space citizens" again? (This aspect should be a loophole of the author. Whether the system's technology changes the cause and effect or is realized in other ways, a patch should be made to improve the setting) 4. At present, the protagonist's image is very bad. From all aspects (even the introduction), it can be seen that he is just a common person. The supporting characters are much better than him. If he is the kind of selfish king who only respects himself in the world. It's like the protagonist led the army to become the emperor in ancient times. If this were the case, it would really poison people, and there would be no reason to continue reading. I think the following points should be changed: 1. Protagonist positioning: He is the most important character, which cannot be denied. He should play the role of a prophet. He should share the system, other world and other information for people's reference, clear up blind spots in people's thinking and provide new ideas. But at the same time, we cannot put all our hopes on him. 2. Positioning of supporting roles: A single supporting role may not be very important, but supporting roles are extremely important. They are readers' reference for the world. They are also human beings and should have their own behavior patterns, their own thinking, and even decisions. Don't underestimate the supporting characters. By making the minor characters come alive, you can make the story more attractive. Just the perspective of the protagonist will make people tired, and different perspectives have different charms. The supporting roles should be equal to or even more important than the protagonist (the most important thing in portraying characters is to be substituted, and only the author can write characters well if he is substituted) 3. Emphasis: The protagonist can have children, but not too many. To be honest, the pace at the beginning is a bit fast, but then it can be slower, and the grand scene of the collision of world views is carefully depicted bit by bit. This is a bit difficult, will take time, may update slowly, and may even be stuck. But author, you are now popular, but your popularity will always fade. Why not rely on your writing and plot to retain a core group of readers? Believe it is worth the money. Finally I want to say Smart Star Players +1000 (*´∀`)ノヽ(´∀`*)