A Mortal's Legend of Demons Wandering Around the World

I am also a new writer, so let's learn from each other if we don't understand, so let's work together! ＾0＾~

Do you dare to vote for me? I'm the only one who's betting, crying to death

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Good article, the author has a strong writing style and a strong sense of immersion

It's so beautiful, but it's a pity that the book is too thin now. Collect it first, fatten it up and then kill it!

Please share. All the magic in this book has real-life knowledge and logic in it. It cannot be cast randomly by just making up a name. Everyone is welcome to correct the mistakes.

In Western terms, do you think it is more appropriate to call the master a mentor? I'm just saying... Nothing else. By the way, the writing is so fluent. The male protagonist seems quite young. Can I add Q to chat?

Hello from the first one 😚, I am the second one

I was hooked as soon as I read it. I really loved reading it. It was so immersive and it was written so vividly.

If you have any book friends, can you give me a shout? Let me know I'm not alone, please

``It's more fun when a loli appears😚

The writing is getting better and better, thank you very much.

I just like reading this type of writing, it's so cool! ! !

This book is based on DOTA2, LOL, King of Glory and Heroes, describing the rise of a mortal and the world of sword and magic. Because it is based on reality, this article has a strong sense of substitution and picture, and is brilliant. Want to know the interesting things that happened to many heroes in this world? Let's watch together.

Let me tell you my feelings. I just read the beginning. I have to say that it is not very attractive to readers. I feel that the author wants to slowly pave the way for the tranquility before a war breaks out. Personally, I suggest that it is best to start the battle directly, because the protagonist's combat power is too low and he will gradually stay away from the battlefield and become stronger through opportunities. It's not that the author didn't write well, it's just that readers are impatient now, and the beginning is not attractive enough to make it difficult to read. I'll keep reading and see what the next description is like.

It is not easy for people to survive anywhere, and there is no pure land anywhere these days.

From the perspective of a veteran who has been in society for several years, the author is probably not very old, so I won't say much nonsense about the entire plot setting and writing. Although there are some flaws, at least there are no major flaws. I feel that the biggest shortcoming is that the personalities of the characters are not distinct enough. Sigurd should be the protagonist and Dawn should be the supporting actor, but it feels like the priorities are reversed. Judging from the author's description of Sigur, he is quite similar to Zhang Wuji. He is simple and easy to trust others, gentle and kind-hearted, and he can be regarded as emphasizing love and justice. But I really can't remember him, because his personality can be said to have no characteristics, no righteousness, no thoughtfulness, no cheating, no cunning and cunning. On the contrary, Mingxiao's support was taken for granted. Anyway, I didn't see that he was a little touched and wanted to repay. The setting of Dawn should be a genius with a monster IQ, which can be seen from the food price war, but I can't figure out why such a person who is good at investing would spend all his money to support the other four people? For a partnership of several months? Please forgive me for being a bit scheming. Maybe it's because of Sigurd's talent. Well, what about the remaining two who are just soy sauce? Perhaps it's because these protagonists are young and relatively innocent, so in the eyes of a social person like me, their childishness is a bit off-putting. I hope the author can make the protagonist's character more distinct and prominent, preferably memorable, so as to increase the reader's sense of involvement. The plot should be handled more tensely. For example, the plot of sneaking in to eavesdrop and being chased by the black ghost can be more twists and turns, showing Sigurd's ability to adapt to situations. Finally, please encourage the author. After all, he is much better than me. I want to write but I have been fishing for three days and surfing the web for two days. I have no perseverance. No matter what the result is, at least the author is making steady progress on the road to his dream. I wish him good results! If the language is inappropriate, please forgive me! ——The idle reader.