Elf Shorts Boy

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I have a feeling that this book was not written by one person, but by a team.

I went back to the starting point for this book This book is really one of the top three pm fanfics in my mind Since a year ago, some straight male cancer authors and readers were so embarrassed that they uninstalled the article, I have never read Dianjia's article again I was recommended by my best friend to read this article, and I subscribed directly after reading the beginning , and sure enough, the following content did not disappoint me~ The character's personality is very comfortable (not like the kind of diao who gets mad at the sight of a beautiful woman, nor the kind of song bi that makes you feel suffocated to death, it is a very comfortable character), the bond between the elves, and the description of the battle are great! The most rare thing is the emotional aspect (referring to friendship, family, and the relationship between the elf and the protagonist), which is much more delicate than most starting point articles (I must complain about some articles here... If you know that you are not good at emotional lines, don't write so much! It poisoned me to death) Although many people complained about the slow pace, I actually think it is just right, just the facial expressions between some elves... It's really cool! For other daily life, the main plot, etc., The author can write according to his own outline~ Finally, I would like to express my original intention of Toya and Yukito x my original intention.

The early stages of this book are really good to read, and I can clearly feel the feeling of growing up step by step, bit by bit. Moreover, the writing style is very good, some daily stories are very warm, and the description of the environment is also very brilliant. But the characterization is a bit strange. The protagonist's sister is well written and the character is very distinct. However, the portrayal of the role of the brother was a bit too strong. In addition, the mother later revealed that she had hidden boss implications, which made it feel disconnected from the main line of the rise of common people in the early stage. Moreover, the main character's pace felt a bit sluggish in the middle period. He was still in school but took off for a few trips and took off immediately. He gained all kinds of fame and fortune (participating in the gorgeous competition was particularly bad), and his strength also improved by leaps and bounds. He was a few blocks away from his good brothers in the academy, and the feeling of growing and progressing together was gone. Also, the protagonist's ideal is to travel to various places in the world, but it felt a bit too boring and failed to capture what attracted us. This book is a pity. There was no recommendation in the early stage of the book, which caused the author's writing mentality to collapse a bit. In addition, he was entangled with various things. I felt that his status began to decline in the middle of writing after he came back from a long vacation. I sighed. However, it is still highly recommended in the early stage.

Author, I have a few questions and suggestions 1: Can you be a eunuch? 2: Can the dropped attribute coins be used by the protagonist? An IQ of over 20 and an agility of 6 to 7 are too inconsistent. And I remember that the original work also included training for oneself. It doesn't require the protagonist to be powerful, as long as he can protect himself. 3: Is the plot a bit watery? I'm afraid it will drag on for more than 500 chapters when the protagonist travels. I understand it before signing the contract, but don't be too watery after signing the contract. 4: In the future, the author will write original plots or combine animation or comic plots. 5: Of course it is the female protagonist issue that everyone is most concerned about. Single master or no master or harem 6: Don't forget the vulgar plot, I believe most writers understand it. 7: Maybe the author often forgets that the protagonist Goldfinger has a backpack function. 8: The choice of the protagonist elf should not be too ugly, just like the smelly mud. After all, most people can't stand it, including me of course.

Confirming eyes: a good book 😍

One of the best starting points for Elf literature

This is a farming elf fanfic with a slow plot progression. It may be boring but you can still read it. It may be interesting but the pace is too lackluster and you won't be able to catch your eyes after reading it for a while. It's a very confusing book. If you like slow narrative style, you can take a look at it and keep it for now. You can read it again when the book is low.

A small reward + soy sauce bubbling 🤓

The Elf novel is pretty good. It's not impatient or impatient. It's very comfortable to read. I feel like it has the potential to reach the level of Ting Shu. I fully support it.

The author should change the cover, this is not good 😅

Author, look at me, look at me! The one who gave me a reward of 10,000 yuan and a monthly pass was me. I never give rewards for pirated copies, so I just left a message 😁. I just want to say that the author's elf novels are my favorite, ever since the last one. Come on, author!

I feel like I've been too busy recently. This kind of training repeated every day can be summarized, and it's not an important content. Waste our expressions.

You can feel the author's progress after reading it. It's a pretty good work. Compared with the previous book, I feel that the plot is better controlled, the characters are also very three-dimensional, and the sense of scene is strong. However, the setting at the beginning is a bit confusing, and it is relatively slow to warm up. You will be surprised as you read on.

Let me tell you my personal opinion. I haven't finished reading the free chapter yet. The writing is very good, the author is very careful, but the writing is a bit slow. . Many things do not need to be described in such detail Personally, after reading the skills that the author foreshadowed and the very detailed and daily life of Bobo's training goals, I felt it was still a bit boring. I felt that after reading more than 500 chapters, they might still be developing in one area. Maybe it is because I personally don't like this kind of slow-burning novel style. Overall it is a very good novel

I hope the author can write a Digimon fanfic

The sauce is bubbling, and I sent a million-word congratulatory message!

This is the style I love, full of family and friendship. My sister didn't use too much force at all, she was cute but not unruly. The Pokémon are even more adorable. 🌹🌹🌹🌹

How about writing a beautiful novel in Chinese characters?

The protagonist wants to adopt a fighting pet. If you have any good suggestions, please leave a message downstairs.

The protagonist's name has a lot of meaning if you understand it in Japanese. Mumu means multiple trees in Japanese There is a saying: Don't hang yourself from a tree That (tree = woman) Liangren means husband in Japanese [Mumu Liangren=husband of many trees=husband of many women]? . . . What are you implying, author?

I want to ask, am I the only one who has a feeling about this book? Every time I open it, I want to read it but I can't stand it. Delete it! I feel it's a pity that I have the urge to open it every time, but when I do open it, I can't stand it. I summarized that this may be the shortcomings and advantages of this book (funny🤪). It is very interesting to read, but maybe I have read too many novels, and I have no patience for some novels with too slow pace. But this book has been on my bookshelf for a long time without being deleted, which proves that this book is very good. It just requires some patient readers,😅😅😅. PS: (The reason why I posted this post is simply that I couldn't bear it anymore. The author said that you haven't even finished the first semester of middle school after writing more than 400 chapters. You wrote more than 20 chapters for a club competition!! 😆😆) Don't worry about why I only read more than 400 chapters. It's just that I can't stand it until halfway through. I can read it for so long intermittently, which is good.

The author's writing is quite good. I don't know why some people keep making fun of it here. Unlike other Pokémon fan fiction, it's not like the kind of talent that suddenly becomes king-level or something. The talents of each Pokémon under his hands are as if they are invincible. The writing is very warm and good, and makes people want to read it! I support you, I support you, I support you. 👍👍👍! ! !

The author's writing ability is much better than that of the previous book, but it still seems inconsistent. The author writes about mobile phones, chat software, payment software Zhizhibao, shared bicycles, taxi-hailing software xxHitch, as well as live streaming software, cartoons like the story of Ring Bear, and some movies. These things make me feel that what I am reading is not a PM article. The sense of violation is too strong. In many places, I feel that this is a piece of writing that combines the settings of Pokémon with reality. The writing in other places is okay and more reasonable.

I have read some. I have been exposed to Pokémon for 7 or 8 years. I have also read a lot of fan fiction, but the cultivation of Pokémon in this novel is a bit strange? This gives me the feeling that the author doesn't seem to understand Pokémon. Why did Pidgey have to practice physical attack first? Pokémon fans who know the settings of Pokémon Mega basically know that Pidgeot Mega takes the special attack route. The plot is a bit delayed, but in the later stages it becomes a bit like the kind of mindless pretense and slap-in-the-face novel. If I were to write about the original Pokémon world setting, I would still prefer a plot where Ash goes on a trip like that. If you want to write a college-style novel, I suggest you write an urban Pokémon novel. In fact, I feel good about the urban background (except for the disgusting person who slaps the disgusting person in the face) and the original world background (except for the disgusting person who gives the mythical beast at the beginning). After all, most fan fiction belongs to the category of novice writing, and it is impossible to write as well as a master like Mao Ni. Currently being updated include the leader of Qingquan and Tingshu, Teacher Lu from Beichuan, the supporting role of Silent Elf, the Fifth Heavenly King, the Top of the Mountain... The ones that have been completed include Darkness Rising, Aaron, the legendary trainer... These are already the highest quality elven texts currently available. Personal opinion: You can actually watch it without thinking. It is suitable for those newbies who have never been exposed to Pokémon. Old players can't stand it. The poison points are a bit fatal. You can still read it if you don't have enough books. My request: As long as the setting in Pokémon is not adapted and the writing is too disgusting, it can still be read. It is considered average among Pokémon novels.

①Silly Hippopotamus——MEGA Silly Hippopotamus

I immediately ordered it and couldn't stand it anymore. I won't say much about the setting and writing. These are all decided by the author. I don't like dark genres, but the Qingshui-like plot coupled with frequent pretense and slaps in the face are not my cup of tea. The biggest dissatisfaction with this book is that the protagonist looks like everyone in this world is stupid and only I know best. However, I don't see it from the plot, where do you understand it? I just hit my head and an idea comes from nowhere, and then I am right. I got it right the last time I tried it, but it just didn't work. There is also a plot at the beginning where Bobo practices physical attack which is very strange. As a time traveler, Mega Bi Diao should know. And even if you don't take mega into account, Bi Diao has more special attack skills than physical attack skills. The strength of special attack and physical attack is basically the same. Consider mega a sure special attack. Also later on, Bobo was not defended, saying that it was special development to avoid mediocrity. I didn't look too far behind, so I didn't know what this golden finger looked like. But if there is no upper limit, it will definitely be full. If there is an upper limit, can you add physical attack? If you can't wash it, then the carving will be ruined, right? There are too many questions like this. It feels like the author doesn't know much about Pokémon. It's not just the game settings, it doesn't match the animation settings either. I personally feel that if you write a Pokémon fanfic, you have to have at least one side of the anime and game specials, otherwise it won't be a Pokémon fanfic, but it will become a Pokémon novel fanfic (or maybe a fanfic of a second-gen fanfic?). If you insist on writing about fantasy, it's better to write about fantasy. It will be a bit disgusting for serious Pokémon fans. Although I didn't order everything, I spent a little money and complained a little bit. If the author doesn't like it, just delete it.

I would like to discuss the identity of the protagonist's brother. According to the description in the recent chapter, the protagonist's brother Toya is currently a quasi-god trainer. When he graduated from the intermediate school, he was already three stars in the arena. In order to win over Toya, Kanto directly sent a quasi-god Yukira. Toya wanted to give Yukira to the protagonist, but the protagonist refused because he didn't want to waste his brother's opportunity. Then here comes the problem. Although I like this comparison now, judging from Toya's strength, it is a bit unreasonable for Bobo to be the initial elf of the beloved. When Bobo was chosen as the protagonist at the beginning, he explained that the family was a commoner and could not afford the initial baby tax. It was not that he disliked the Yusan family. Taking the one-star Liangren Arena as an example, there were tens of millions when there were many of them, and currently there are more than six million. When Momoya graduated from middle school, she already had three stars in the arena. You can imagine how much a game costs in an arena. When I first opened the book, based on the author's description, I thought that the beloved brother was a researcher with "special" interests, so I didn't dare to let the Toya Gang choose the initial elf. As soon as he appeared, he was a genius trainer. With such a brother, it would be a bit "forced to be a commoner" by giving the good man a civilian start. From the fact that Liangren can help Mushan help find the dragon bone, it can be seen that Liangren is not a pedantic person and is willing to owe others favors, let alone his own brother. In terms of the choice of initial elves, compared with a Yu Sanjia with high probability of excellent qualifications and a Bobo with uncontrollable qualifications, I feel that a good person would not choose Bobo. So it doesn't feel very reasonable to assign Toya the identity of a genius trainer. Note: I just want to discuss the logic, and generally speaking, the shorts boy is still very readable in the pm article. So please go away.

It's so unreasonable. The beginning of the chapter is about an ordinary family's starting elf being Bobo, and later it's written that the protagonist's eldest brother is the trainer of a quasi-king. If there are quasi-kings in the family, they still have no money to raise elves.