Reborn in the 1950S: One Big Happy Family

I voted for two pieces and recommended them to you 🌹🌹, come on

What I want to say is that everyone is welcome to comment on the good and bad. If you have any ideas, you can also leave me a message and I will insert it appropriately. If there are still investment opportunities, you can invest and ask for votes and collections.

I'm here to vote 😁😁

I have been updating continuously for more than a month, and every day is 4,800 words. Why am I not given the honor of updating more than 3,000 words per day for 30 consecutive days 😭😭

There were many unreasonable things, many excellent relatives, and excellent villagers. The more I looked at them, the more angry I became, which affected my mood and gave up.

After reading the first chapter, it was so impressive that I immediately sold it. Then there was a direct violent conflict, and the person suspected of being the male protagonist died suddenly at the beginning. Then the progress took off, and the protagonist got the golden finger directly by "chance", without wasting any pen and ink. I thought this was too quick. I haven't seen such crisp and clear writing in a long time. Then the plot was so fast that the protagonist died at the end of the first chapter... Oh, it turns out that he was reborn. This is all foreshadowing. From the beginning, the actual plot is very different from the previous one. Slowly swallow Damn it, I was thinking that you might as well be reborn directly at the beginning, and then slowly spit out the bad things from the previous life in the world after rebirth. This way, it will be more interesting to intersperse. What you wrote...

New writers need everyone's support for new books. If there is still money that is useless, you can invest and sign a contract to ensure the completion of the book.

After reading two chapters, I don't know much about Five Zero, but I have a few comments: first, there is a God's perspective in the article (this must not appear); second, there are too many background introductions at once, and it will be difficult to remember; third, the dialogue is long.

Because I don't really like this genre, I can't give you much advice. I just personally feel that the plot in the front is a bit flat and some sentences are not smooth, but the rest should be fine. I also personally feel that the number of words in one chapter is too few. .

It's good-looking, but not satisfying. Come on.