The Origin of Darkness in the Apocalypse

I've read the first few chapters and they're really well written😊Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The beginning is not bad, the creativity is good and it keeps people watching. The writing of the following chapters is a bit flawed. First of all, the trivial matters between the protagonist and the counselor can be brushed aside and the content of the end of the world can be started directly. Then there are some problems with the depiction of the end of the world. I feel that people in the end of the world are too happy, and the feeling of despair and oppression in the end of the world is not written. The people in it are as nervous as water pipes. Of course, it is also possible that the author wants this feeling, so the author should consider the content about the end of the world. Finally, "The Wonderful World of Fantasy" welcomes mutual comments ಠಠ

I found a fairy grass seedling, please come and water it.

When I saw in the comments section that it was said to be a juvenile grass jelly, I thought it was fake. After reading the article, I have to say that it is indeed interesting.

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It looks interesting! Looking forward to the counterattack of the protagonist later! ! ! Push down the beautiful counselor! ! !

The story is interesting and makes people want to read on The language could be more refined Come on~

The first two chapters had some minor issues but were very attractive, but the third chapter started to feel a bit stiff and unreasonable. The setting is good, and if you stick to it, it shouldn't be a hit. Overall, it's pretty good. Depending on how you write it later, you might consider revising it a little bit in the third chapter. Personal opinion, reader's perspective, don't hit me\(//∇//)\

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update me.

Come on, let's preach together! Welcome to put it back on the bookshelf. We will go a long way slowly and we need each other's support! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Accept the younger brother and push him to the counselor!

Not bad, support and have collected it.