Walking God

After raising them for a week, they were slaughtered. I finished reading it in one afternoon. Let me talk about my feelings about this book. The opening chapter is very gripping and the writing skills are solid. The best thing the author did is not show off his writing skills. The descriptions in many places are very detailed, and the artistic conception can be revealed by just highlighting the key points. The bad thing is that the foreshadowing is a little long, and a few chapters feel a bit watery, but not very low-level. Being able to see and see is also a wonderful and mysterious operation. There has been a lot of action in the last 20 chapters, and the connection is very good. The holes in the early stage have been almost filled, and then a huge hole has been dug. The descriptions of the fight scenes in these two chapters are very specific, unlike the stream of consciousness that is purely based on imagination. There is description and space, and the description of battlefield cuts is also good. The technique is quite skillful. The overall score can be rated above 9 points at present. If it doesn't fall apart in the later stage and the villain doesn't become too cliche, then this book will be stable. It may not be a big hit, but it will definitely gain a wave of stable readers. Come on, author. Automatically subscribe to shelves.

The writing style is very good, which is quite unusual among the current online articles. Personally, I think this kind of writing style is more suitable for reading paper books, just like the dragon chasers back then. Now it doesn't feel like it on the mobile screen. I look forward to the physical book of this book. Then, keep it and come back later Author sister, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง😁

Thank you to everyone who clicked on this book. Xiaoxie has a few words to say here. 1. God is not a mainstream style, it is fresh and fresh, but it is not pretentious; 2. It is slow to start, the first three chapters explain the origin of the protagonist and the formation of his character. It doesn't start until chapter 20. Friends who like to read exciting articles, I'm sorry to disappoint you; 3. I saw comments saying that I couldn't understand what the first few chapters were about, there was no main line, the context was unclear, etc. Let me state here that God is not an upgrade and growth type, and there is no set reward for completing a goal. Sorry for those who like to watch only one-line plots with straightforward writing; 4. In the process of entangled with the grudges of the past life, the protagonist encounters one incident after another, and then unlocks multiple maps. The early stage preparation is long, and the later reversals will be large and numerous; 5. Slightly group portrait. There is no so-called supporting role. Of course the protagonist is important, but every character who appears is useful and plays a major role in the key plot. (PS: It was my first time coding the first book, and I gained a lot. I knew that I was shallow and ignorant of history, so I read a few related books. My grades were not ideal, but I felt the warmth from strangers. Now, we are no longer strangers, because you are already in my heart. Sincere thanks! I wish my friends of God peace and success!)

Ji is the surname of Emperor Zhou. Is Xiaoji related to the Eastern Zhou Dynasty? Kita Yayoi looks like a Japanese name. . . They must have come from the same place or the same time and space as Xia Sang. Xiaoji said that Fusu is Xia Sang's lover in this life, so they have followed her for many lives? Are Natsumi and Yayoi lovers in their past lives? I think Yayoi wants to take Xia Sang back. She must be related to something important in that time and space, or the safety of the race.

The first wave of welfare in the Shenming Book Review area~ Let's step on the building The Gods and Gods are getting restless, are you all ready? The target is 2000 ducks, I wish everyone happy!

Those who were bombed by local tyrants, please raise your hand.

Judging from the surnames of Ji Rongyuan and Kita Yayoi and the large number of Han Dynasty antiques they collected, their birth origins must be very sophisticated. One, Ji Rongyuan. His surname is the surname of the ancient Zhou Dynasty, but he claims to have been born in the Hedao Valley in the Lingnan Mountains of Guangxi, which is very problematic. As we all know, after King Wu conquered Zhou, he established the Zhou Dynasty on behalf of the Shang Dynasty and enfeoffed all the princes in the world. Most of the Zhou royal family was enfeoffed in the hinterland of the Central Plains. Even the Yan State was enfeoffed in the northern frontier to defend the country and guard the borders, but it was also the Zhengshuo of China. And Ji Rongyuan's ancestors or himself (who may have lived forever) were sent to Guangxi. They all knew that Guangxi was a land of Yi and Di in ancient times. It was called a barren land that even the Chu State, which was regarded as a barbarian by the Zhou Dynasty, disdained! If this is the case, how could the descendants of the dignified Zhou royal family be born here? There must be great suspense here... Second, Kita Yayoi. His surname can be speculated to be the descendant of Chi You in ancient times. It is said that after the Battle of Zhulu, Chi You was defeated by the Yan and Huang emperors and retreated to the south of Jingxiang. It is not surprising that their descendants are found in Guangxi. In addition, Kita Yayoi and Ji Rongyuan had a close relationship. It is not surprising that the two met in Guangxi. They may even have some blood relationship when they were born! As for the two of them and Sang Xia, they should be from the same clan. Perhaps when the family was in chaos, in order to protect a certain secret, the family sealed the secret in Sangxia's soul, and this secret has always existed with Sangxia's reincarnation. In this life, the two finally tracked down the location of Sangxia's Yuanshen, but there was no sign of Sangxia's Yuanshen waking up. The two wanted to awaken the Yuanshen as soon as possible to find the secret. In this way, the two of them had an entanglement with Sang Xia...

The author is new to Qidian. This is the first book in Qidian. There will definitely be many areas for improvement. Xiaoxie is also very humbly accepting everyone's opinions. If you have any good opinions and suggestions, feel free to mention them. However, if there are any unintelligent comments, don't blame them for deleting and banning them. Please try your best to take care of the new seedlings and leave a piece of pure land for Xiaoxie to write with peace of mind.

Ah Sang Chicken should be from the same family, but they were involved in a great chaos. They had no choice but to seal the family secrets into Ah Sang Yuanshen. However, as time goes by, the mark in the Yuanshen will also dissipate. Following the breath of the mark, the chicken revived in the valley to find the chicken. In order to unlock the content of the mark, the following story begins.

My brother said that starting from today, I will give out red envelopes every day. For Xiaoxie and for the god Yuzai, I started promoting in the circle. Everything I did was so... I won't say anything, dear brother. I also want to thank everyone who is reading this book. I wish you all a good mood, good luck, and everything goes smoothly every day. Yeah

Whether reading, speaking or writing is good or not depends on your personal taste. It's boring to keep scolding. I've been busy flying around for the past two days, so I don't want to take advantage of me anymore. I mean, brother, you are pretending to be arguing about silver, saying you can't buy it or not. What nonsense, you don't have to spend money to buy silver when you make it at home. What's the point of being sour and stubborn? I just like the author's writing style, personality, and good temper. If I'm happy, I'll give him a big reward one day. Don't even do business with a starting point like yours, all of them will run away under your orders. Read the book carefully and don't like to take detours. It's fun to bully a little girl, Gray Skin.

I haven't read the book yet. Since it was recommended by Eagle, I'd like to collect it first. If it's good, reward me, subscribe and then follow up.

Vote all seven recommendation votes, come on

From now on, anyone who messes around will be banned and deleted. Please bring evidence when you come to troll!

The story structure is very complete, the plot is rich, and the characters are full-bodied, which shows the author's skill and praise.

The description of the bullshit is detailed, and it is obviously a nonsense, and there are a lot of emotions. It can be seen that the author wants to be a literary youth, but he can't grasp the degree well, and it seems too bloated.

Tell me your personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. The previous account was so disgusting that it was abandoned. This book is indeed a bit special. In fact, I first clicked on it because of the cover. The result was a pleasant surprise. This kind of writing is like strange-flavored beans, it gets better and better the more you read it. However, the author's style of writing has changed a bit, making people think that someone else wrote it. Some people say they can't understand things like reading compositions. This is just a matter of personal taste. In fact, I really enjoyed reading the first two chapters. The characters are explained very clearly, even the tree that is reborn is also explained. The perspective of standing means overlooking all living beings, looking at life from a microscopic perspective and looking at the entire human process from a macroscopic perspective. This is already very relevant, at least I understand it. And I personally like this technique very much, it is very advanced and not pretentious. The characters in the first few chapters are a bit off, the writing is very raw, but it gets better after the next dozen or so chapters. Overall, looking at it now, it's pretty good. Especially in these recent pictures, the fighting in the crowd is also very high-level, and it is not completely transparent to passers-by. Many books of this type treat passers-by as if they don't exist, and they look fake. After reading the words of the author's real girl, this one still has potential. At least the battle scenes are very graphic and logically written. Very interesting. Full subscription support, come on.

There are fusu in the mountains and lotus flowers in the hills. If you don't see Zidu, you will see madness. The first time I learned about Master Fusu was Qin Shang, a game I played when I was a kid. Before I start, I'm looking forward to the author's Fusu❤️

When I read this introduction, I felt that the author is a woman.

Kita Yayoi's phrase "Took my umbrella, but forgot my person" is a pun, implying that he and Sang Xia are undoubtedly old friends in their previous lives. When Ji Rongyuan introduced himself, Kita Yayoi specially wrote the three characters "Jirong Yuan" with water on the table to explain the origin of the name to Sang Xia. It was definitely not just to answer questions, but more like deliberately trying to make Sang Xia remember these three words. Therefore, he boldly guessed that Sang Xia's previous life may also come from the Lingnan area of ​​Guangxi, and he is more likely to be Ji Rongyuan's same clan. The humanoid light that separated from Kita Yayoi's body wanted to merge with Sangxia, but was bounced out. There is also Kita Yayoi's hostility towards Fusu. It is speculated that Sangxia and Kita Yayoi's previous lives may have been an unmarried couple who had a marriage contract but did not love each other for the sake of family mission and interests. Therefore, after Sangxia fell in love with Fusu, she had great resistance to Kita Yayoi in the depths of her soul and refused to wake up. Xiao Xie's imagination is too big and he really can't guess. He can only talk nonsense like this. Don't hit me! 😜

I bought the comment, I bought Baiyin Meng, no need to thank me, it will be deleted soon.

I'll give you a reward. If you can, I'll post an update. I want to see the plot behind it.

As the emperor who unified the six kingdoms, Qin Shihuang didn't even find a way to live forever. How come you have so many people here? This setting is really unbearable.

May the beautiful and cute little evil have a healthy Dragon Boat Festival, go to bed early, and have a good night and sweet dreams!

The writing style is a bit rough, and it will look smoother by deleting some redundant words. For example, the beginning of the first chapter: Chronicle: Qin State Shangjun in 210 BC - This sentence has a linguistic problem, Shangjun cannot be included in the chronology. It should be changed to: 210 BC, Qin State Shangjun. Wind, very windy. ——Change to: The wind is very strong. (To be more effective, the more concise the text, the better.) For example, at the beginning of Chapter 2: Everything was so sudden, as fast as being blown by a gust of wind. ——Change to: Everything happened so suddenly, like a gust of wind blowing by. (The meaning of "quick" and "sudden" are repeated, which makes it redundant and awkward to read). There are also many words that are verbose, redundant, and have grammatical problems, so I won't list them here. My humble opinion, if you don't like it, please delete the post.

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Congratulations on the launch, happy Easter egg. Eat melon

With Fan Wujiang gone, will this book survive?

After returning from the exam, I bought my monthly ticket and was relieved🐶️

I forced a full introduction before the first chapter came out, which is very boring.