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Five tons of weight, I miss the big flower

I saw the author said that this book did not do well. Although he did not ask for votes in the end, since you have mentioned this, you probably still want votes and want to be recognized. At least you think that this is a good book. I also think this book is good, a very good book, but although the book is very good, I wanted to give up the book several times in the middle. Where did the impulse to give up the book come from? First: The protagonist misses a lot of news because he doesn't read the light, which leads to a crisis later. This is the first place where I want to abandon the book. But when I saw this, I sneered. I felt it was too nonsense, or very uncomfortable. Although I know that this treatment is to lead to conflicts and subsequent plots, I cannot accept your treatment. The negligence caused by not checking the news has brought trouble to myself. It is really uncomfortable, but where is it uncomfortable and why? Uncomfortable, I can't put it into words, it's just uncomfortable anyway, for example: it's too random and the logic doesn't make sense, but the point is still the fact that it makes the protagonist look very mentally retarded. Things that can be avoided as long as you are more careful, have a negative result. I avoided it by mistake, and it feels like I was deliberately ridiculed by the author. I always feel that this treatment makes the protagonist weaker. I originally wanted to write a long paragraph to scold you, but then I thought about it, forget it, I am too lazy to type. As for voting and favorites, I will talk about it later. The second time I want to abandon the book, it's because the protagonist is too unconfident. It's not that there's something wrong with your handling. It's completely understandable that the protagonist would think this way. After all, facing a glorious civilization, you are still confident and think you can defeat it. That's ridiculous and stupid. But the protagonist is always unconfident like this, which is very annoying! I don't want to watch it. The protagonist is not confident and is afraid of this and that. I would rather see the protagonist work hard to improve himself. In other words, I would also like to see the author be more positive when dealing with this problem. Instead of always talking about the protagonist, how unconfident he is, write more about how hard he studies and improves himself. In short, the negative descriptions and emotions revealed in the text are very uncomfortable. I would rather see something more positive. Of course, there are advantages. The plot is very reasonable and real. It doesn't forcefully pretend to be a slap in the face. This is what attracts me to watch it. However, for one reason or another, it is really not exciting enough, or it is not exciting enough. It is not fully expressed. The same plot uses more pen and ink to describe some positive and heart-warming things, which is much more comfortable than negative ones. It feels like It's because it's too real, but it makes people uncomfortable. After all, if you look at the rankings, you will know what the readers who come to Qidian want. There is no need to change the plot. The plot is well written and very attractive, but the handling of some places is not very comfortable. Some things that are more enjoyable can obviously be written more pleasantly, but they are not expressed. Some negative aspects can also be avoided. In short, after reading the latest chapter, this book is indeed a good book, no worse than the books on the list, and much better than most novice books. However, when I was asked to vote, I did not have this idea or the urge, because the protagonist did not make me empathize.

After reading it, I actually think the setting is pretty good, but it's too wordy and seriously hinders the reading experience. It's a bit uncomfortable for me to read it as I'm used to short white writing, and I probably won't read it again in the future. After all, the author's style is already like this, and it's a bit difficult to change it. So this is the end of this breath of fresh air in the online literary circle. I hope the author will continue to work hard

If we talk about the ratings of healing articles, "Life Is Hateful of Water" ranks first. No one should have any objections~

Author, you have a new book, you should mention it in the old book, otherwise the readers of the previous book will not know about it.

I quite like the name Zaoforget Academy.

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Very interesting article, very interesting, keep up the good work

The idea is great, but the writing style is different from ordinary people. In a large piece of text, only a few sentences after the colon are really useful. The rest are the author's conjectures and emotions. The era of online writing emphasizes refreshing and conciseness. Perhaps after some modifications, it will be more suitable to take the physical route.

The pace is so slow. There is only one chapter for answering the phone and one chapter for chatting. The word count is not high and there is really not much information... I'd better read it after you get used to it. I feel a little tired from chasing...