A Desert Island Survival Guide

Finished reading. The advantage is that the author's world view setting is okay, at least I don't see any obvious bugs. The protagonist's golden finger can also be used, with full map perspective and guaranteed resources. However, sometimes, it feels like the protagonist's golden finger is never online, such as when pirates come, but it is within the logical range and not too poisonous. After talking about the advantages, the biggest disadvantage of this book is that the protagonist's character is slightly ordinary. Although he is an ordinary person within the scope of logic, he can't find the bright spots. If there are any characteristics, the biggest characteristic is that it has no characteristics. My personal suggestion is that the author can add some sparkle to the protagonist through the plot.

Come on, write whatever you want, don't listen to those bullshit, every day this is unreasonable and that is unreasonable, you are so capable and insightful, just write it yourself! There are endless books with potential that have been misled by you! If you like watching or not, just learn the walking method of pi and leave.

I've been looking for a book similar to Minecraft, I hope it won't disappoint me

I feel that the plot is progressing too fast. The plot of these dozens of chapters can be expanded to hundreds of chapters. Now there are many dialogues that lack plot foreshadowing and it seems embarrassing.

I really like the genre of this novel, a virtual reality game novel with a high degree of freedom and high fidelity, so I especially hope that the author can write it well. I would like to give some small suggestions to the author. Of course, some of them may not be pertinent. I hope you will understand me. 1. Can the IQ of the protagonist and the IQ of the protagonist's friends be slightly improved? For example, Fan Luoye, this character should have the highest IQ in the known plot, but for such an awesome character to join the protagonist, I personally feel that there is not enough preparation. After all, isn't the new game company "Reverse War" following an elitist policy? Why didn't Fan Luoye find someone who had the same political views as him? Instead, the protagonist came to a studio that was completely unattractive. If Fan Luoye betrays him in the later stage, the protagonist will really fall into the mud. Even the finances are his own. 2. The protagonist's friends really don't appear on the stage. I feel that the protagonist is the only one who contributes in the whole team. It may be that the supporting characters contribute but are not written out, but this really makes them seem useless 3. All the protagonist's achievements are basically obtained by luck, which is the protagonist's aura given to him by the author. I hope In the later stage, the protagonist can learn lessons from what happened around him and improve his IQ and real strength, instead of just relying on luck 4. The function of the watch is not fully realized, and how did this watch appear? The possibility of this kind of prop being used is really one in a billion, right? Is it related to the game company or is it simply a cheat for the protagonist 5. Heroine, don't stay in the harem, don't stay in the harem. Either don't write it, or write it well. My personal suggestion is not to write it, just want to watch the game And the game is also related to PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds. This may be my personal problem. I don't know what other readers think

After much deliberation, I decided to post a post and just take a look (and gain experience by the way). This is my first time posting to the author, and I want to share my thoughts on this book. The main plot is currently written very smoothly, and some minor mistakes are not harmful (ps: shark meat is not delicious). The highlight of this book is introduced in the introduction. The hot virtual game flow combines with reality and incorporates elements of current popular games. It can be called the golden signature of this book. The current author must control the description of the emotional line; the story of Qidian Orphanage has been spread since ancient times. Many authors and even great writers cannot well sort out the description of the emotional line of characters, which has become a poisonous point. The current description of the relationship between the heroine (should be Yue Ling... Right?) And the pig's feet is not very natural. Personally, I think we should use our strengths and avoid weaknesses. Think twice before describing the emotional line. You can put it aside first. Don't rush. The author can make the highlights of the main line of the game more profound... I hope the author will continue to work hard and work well. I wish you all peace and good luck. My inflammation is over.

Leave the character information downstairs, and it will be refined if you adopt it. Excellent character stickers will reward you with some coins.

I think this second-generation rich man is pretty good, but Pig's Feet said it would be a pity for that woman to follow him? ? ? He is a liberal arts champion and the heir to a multi-billion dollar group. He is also well-educated. He picks up girls according to the normal plot. He does not look down on the people around him or target the people around him. He also said that if he knows the people in this store, it is not impossible to open a small stove for him. The pig's feet are not good. I think it is a pity for this girl to be with this rich second generation. Is it right to be with a loser like you? They are not forcing others, they are just talking. Where do you have the sense of superiority to think that the rich second generation is inferior to you?

I said why I felt that there were so few and not enough to watch. It turned out that I had not updated for three days, so I quickly made up for February 29, 30, and 31 😏

Yi Xiaoer, Qin Xiaochuan, stop pretending, brother, it's you. You big eunuch. Every time I read your book, I see enthusiasm, but you are a eunuch. Don't trade it for a vest, I don't know you.