
I, the System Maker
我,系统制造者
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 370k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Alternative Fantasy
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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158Chapters
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I'd like to make some suggestions by the way (is that considered a suggestion?)
After reading more than ten chapters, the protagonists all build the system for the sake of building the system, and send tasks for the sake of sending tasks. Publish some meaningless tasks that have no benefit to you, but you have to pay for it. From an objective point of view, this protagonist is really a good person. In addition, I feel that the author's subject matter is very good and has a good idea, but making it funny for the sake of being funny is not very interesting. Secondly, the protagonist's ability to analyze and modify data seems to be overkill. With this ability, omniscience and omnipotence would be no problem. Can I understand it this way? The data of an item is a combination of a series of formulas and constant variables (if it is knowledge, it is a series of information packages). For example, by inputting external environmental variables (temperature, pressure, etc.) And internal constants (properties) of the object oxygen, the morphological properties displayed in the three-dimensional space (liquid, gaseous, molecular arrangement, etc.) Can be calculated through the formulas in the data. Some chemical reactions can be regarded as a combination of formulas to form new formulas, which will lead to the production of new items with different physical properties. Can you think of the protagonist's abilities this way? (What I said may also have bugs) In other words, if the protagonist has the ability to parse items into data packets and can modify these data packets, then as long as he can learn to understand these data packets, there will be no problem in converting energy and matter into each other. As long as there is energy and data model to create things, right? Even directly modifying the human body is OK, right? Just make sure you have enough energy. Do you feel like the Lord God? So the system does not need to publish some meaningless tasks at all, right? If it insists on publishing tasks, it can also be distributed globally. By publishing tasks, high-end talents in various fields can have protagonists. Every task has meaning (in terms of the big picture). No matter whether the protagonist is setting up an organization or doing something else. And the tasks of this system can be a big help (the task of the main god is to help the main god do things, and these things must be beneficial to the main god). What does the protagonist do five good deeds? It is completely useless to him and he still needs to pay.
My day
Nima⊙∀⊙! I'm a eunuch, fuck, I've been subscribing to the end, but I'm a eunuch? My day... Nima⊙∀⊙! I'm a eunuch, fuck, I've been subscribing to the end, but I'm a eunuch? My day...
After reading dozens of chapters, I think it is a very good novel. It seems to be the first one written by the author. It is very powerful, but there are still some parts that cannot withstand scrutiny, such as Luo Zhu's cooking. In reality, there should be very few parents who know that their daughters are not good at cooking and still want to be a chef. They do not train them, but use praise to encourage them... (Because my father is a chef, I have deep feelings about this.) But it's harmless, just pay attention to it. Also, the idea is very good
Let me briefly talk about the poisonous points
First of all, the plot feels too white, and secondly, the characters. I feel that the old man who cultivates immortality has a low IQ, especially the part in the city, which is so poisonous that I even wonder if I am in the creation of the world? Second, I feel that the protagonist's friend has some problems with his IQ. No, not only his IQ but also his EQ, it has lowered the lower limit of human EQ. After getting a system, he feels that he is awesome every second, and he is too straight. It is close to the explicit hint, but he doesn't even feel it at all. The protagonist also has this problem, he is no longer steel, he is a diamond-like straight man! Third, this book is not only white, but also has a running story. It does not create any pleasant points. However, considering the author's writing style, if it were written in a pleasant way, it might be more poisonous. Fourth, it feels a bit confusing. There is no clear main plot. The protagonist is still a weak chicken and there is no talk of becoming stronger. Generally speaking, there will be main plots such as becoming stronger. Just meet an individual and throw the system into the plot, which is not very interesting. Generally speaking, I hope the author can improve these poisonous loopholes as soon as possible.
Give me a secret reward
When will the protagonist improve his strength? ! ! 😡
You can still take a look at the first 100 or so pictures, but at the end, some kind of clairvoyance appears, predicting that the protagonist will be killed in the future, and there is no interest at all. I can say that I have no mood to continue reading. Are you trying to lower my IQ by trying to revive spiritual energy? Also give subsystems to everyone with spiritual roots? Sorry, it doesn't make any sense anymore. It's not as good as the daily fun of these dogs and the protagonist's classmates. After the spiritual energy is revived, it can be said that there is nothing to watch. It's boring. It's a failure. Sorry, I won't accompany you anymore.
The protagonist can create a system for everyone, collect what they have learned and know, record the data, and then use it to create items, and then they will be invincible.
She had just come out of prison. In 2007, she was in a bar. Someone at the opposite table whistled at her and invited her to drink with her. I drank too much, so I pulled out the dagger I brought with me and stabbed her. It lasted fifteen years. I remember that when I went in, there were people all over the street. It's about praying to Buddha, it's cold on a lonely sandbank, etc. It's been fifteen years, things have changed. She came to see me once last year and told me she was getting married. I didn't tell her about commutation of her sentence. After a brief chat, I turned around and left. In the past 15 years, I have farmed, raised pigs and made clothes. , My heart has long been calm. After I came out, I went to see her downstairs once. She was very happy, and I was also very happy. It was time for me to think about my life. I had a dream last night. The problem was that 15 years ago, there were familiar streets and familiar scenes, but I just couldn't find the familiar ones. Man, I woke up crying in the dream. The past cannot be taken back. Now all that is left is nostalgia. I am almost 30 and suddenly feel confused. I often can't sleep at night. I sit on the road, drinking wine and smoking alone. I don't know how to take the road ahead? The night before her wedding, I secretly came to her house. I saw the words posted on the window at the door of her house and the lights in the house were on. I didn't dare to disturb her, so I squatted downstairs and smoked one after another. Soon it was daybreak, and the sound of car horns and firecrackers could be heard in the distance. I knew it was to pick her up. The wedding car came, she was going to be someone else's bride today, she looked very beautiful today, I watched her get into the wedding car, the firecrackers went off, and the car drove away. I was still following behind the convoy, and suddenly my phone rang, it was a text message from her, don't send it, I will be yours in the next life, okay? Forget me, I cried heartbreakingly that day. Not long after, she told me that she saw me squatting downstairs and smoking non-stop that day. She also cried all night and didn't sleep. I have no regrets. Whether it's success or failure, it's all in vain when I turn around. Life or death. Life is too short for a hundred years. Why should I be obsessed with a result? The only thing I want to do now is to go home and charge my phone. The phone is out of battery and I can't continue editing.
It is recommended that the author let the protagonist collect and modify the data! The protagonist of the data collected by the host works behind the scenes to figure out how to change the data. For example, as long as the data collected by the system can be converted between data, soil can also be converted into elixir, and then the system will not be short of various items. If I really had such a system, the first step would be to collect all the data of everything around me. And you can learn it directly by collecting the knowledge (the book says that you have directly mastered the introductory knowledge points, which means you have understood and can apply it). How many months do you have to spend in the library? ? Reading history makes people wise, reading poetry makes people smart, mathematics makes people thoughtful, science makes people profound, ethics makes people solemn, and the study of logic and rhetoric makes people eloquent. Haven't you heard this? 0.0 I hope the author writes better and better (✪▽✪)
Good-looking and good-looking. It is recommended not to add too many strange power systems, but to build up the system logic one by one. I am looking forward to developing a system expert. Come on⊙∀⊙! , I am your first fan
The author is not very experienced in writing. If you have any suggestions, you can share them in the comment area, and everyone will read them. (╥╯^╰╥)
So where does the system in the pig's feet come from? The mysterious man behind him smiled...
I cried because of my stupidity. I wrote it for nearly a month. Today, my book friend reminded me that I found a typo in the introduction o(*≧д≦)o!!
The author should wake up and take a good look at what he has written.
It's not that your pace needs to be accelerated, but that your pace is too fast. Many plots that can be used as exciting points are changed to new plots in the middle of writing. The readers have not yet been able to take a breath, and you are depressed again. The characters that appear in the introduction are almost complete in less than ten chapters... Your rhythm is very messy. I guess I didn't make an outline and just randomly pieced together the existing inspirations in my mind. Take time to make an outline. Of course, it's okay if you don't. At least the character settings must be worked out. The plot must be coherent and full. Before that monk came out, who would have thought that your next chapter would be so jumpy? The idea is great, but it would be a pity if it failed to be written.
From a new perspective, I think it's good, and the theme is very novel, but in my opinion, the plot is draggy, has no highlights, and leaves people with no sense of expectation. I didn't even understand the main plot after reading the first thirty chapters.
The creativity is okay. I've seen it a lot before. But since the data can be modified, I didn't expect it to be copied? ? ? ? "Everything is created in disguise." I feel like this book has no main line. It's all about creating a system based on what the people around me need. I have no plan at all about what I want to do or how to develop, and I just muddle along. Either become stronger or change the world! This type tends to be the invincible streamer type. I hope you can plan it well.
The Xueba system is actually the most basic starting point of this system, resource sharing and information sharing. As long as you work hard, you will be rewarded~Ten people taking the same course together is simply cheating.
Thinking of a system provider?
Digging graves. If he had a medical miracle. Remember to dig me out