Changyun Cultivation Record

Come on, great masters also have a new period. Don't forget your original intention and stick to your ideals.

Not bad, good literary talent, save it first

Thanks to book friends 161114204515949, Gun Stab My Sister's Heart, Jiangnan Cong Cong, and Paper Penguin for their multiple recommendation votes! Thank you! I wish you all your dreams and success in 2019. I also wish all book friends a happy family and all the best in the new year.

Mingren don't tell secret words, the recommendation vote represents my heart❤

I'm a newbie too😂, come on! Persist in!

Come on, come on↖(^ω^)↗

Vote again and keep updating!

Pay attention to punctuation and sentence fragmentation, it will be very uncomfortable if you don't handle it well.

Are you still fighting hard at this late hour? If you have a future, you will definitely become a god.

(Zerg Overlord) Come down for a return visit, come on

Come on! Vote again and wish you can enter the top 20 of Xianxia as soon as possible. It was 32 this morning.

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I would like to give a small suggestion to the author. You can put the content in a separate line to increase the reading experience and read it on your mobile phone. It is advisable to have no more than three lines in a paragraph

Very well written! It's a pity that I have finished this book and have saved it! Take your time and watch! Come on! Welcome to visit us again!

Is the author the big rat who has done game radio?

True to my word, I have collected it and will give you a recommendation ticket😬

You can read new books. Recently, I'm six thousand a day. I'm a little bald and can't read close books. But I have read the first few chapters, and the plot you want to express is okay. It can be regarded as a classic fantasy. It's just that the protagonist appeared late. Ping An and Changyun should be the protagonists. When I wrote about the small village before, it was a bit bland to express the background of Ping An's family background. It's not impossible, but now we tend to write from the point of conflict, which can quickly attract readers' interest. For example, directly write about going to find the tiger, meeting the disciples of the Immortal Sect at the house, and entering the Immortal Sect. The previous ones can be included in the form of narrative. (I just saw this, you can continue to update the new book, at least 30,000, it is really not 16,000, it is good to see if there is any shortcomings. What I said before may not be useful, after all, I write female videos, but I still rush out. 😂 I will read a few more from time to time, and then talk after reading them.)

When I wrote that the 70,000-page website was still not coming, I knew that there must be a big problem with the work, so I checked it again from the beginning. Sure enough, there were typos everywhere, the sentences didn't make sense, nonsense, and a lot of questions. I couldn't express and narrate the story in my heart well at all. I made up my mind to revise it from scratch, optimizing the details, defects, and leaving the content unchanged, hoping to give all book friends a better viewing experience. Thank you for your continued support! I will definitely work hard to learn from my experience and write better as I write. At the same time, I hope you can remind me if you find any problems while reading. After the optimization is completed, I hope you will enjoy reading it. I am very grateful... Thank you!