Master of National Style of Entertainment

A few brief comments. Let's start with the title of the book. It feels quite satisfactory to me. At least it mentions the main plot, which is entertainment. However, the Chinese style somewhat limits the content. The introduction is okay, but there are typos, so the author needs to be careful. After reading the first seven chapters, the writing can be classified as fluent, but the storytelling ability is too poor. You obviously wrote this on a whim after reading a few entertainment works. The plot is cliche, there is nothing major wrong with it, and naturally there are no highlights. There is no problem in writing a copy of the article, but if you immediately introduce a new branch line when a small plot branch has not ended or even started, and there are only three branches in the first six chapters, it can easily cause confusion and trouble for the readers. I personally suggest that you first write the small plot of copying the Internet article, finish it first when you need to show off or slap in the face, and then introduce a new plot, rather than rushing into it all at once. You need to strengthen your study of story rhythm, come on! If you think the post is annoying, you can delete it, I don't mind.

This is an author who writes about fun. It is not recommended to read it before finishing it.

This book can't be written yet🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

Come on, author, it's relatively rare to write about Chinese-style entertainment. The subject matter is acceptable, so work hard.

You have no conscience, why don't you come back 😭😭😭

Come on Ahem! I vote for this book every day. You don't want TJ. But having said that, there is a chapter in the book about updating 100 chapters at once, which is a crazy hint 🤭🤭🤭

Chapter 13: Treasure, not Kwai Treasure...

I can't stand it after reading a few chapters 😤

Self-pleasure? Why do you look so embarrassed? . .

Is it ok to search on my own website if I don't know about the music ghost tailor?

The subject matter is very good, but the writing style is too poor and there are too many unnecessary plots.

This article is so plainly written that you really don't need to use your brain to read it.

A small suggestion: The author is too subjective and may be a bit conceited, giving the impression that he cannot listen to other people's opinions and suggestions. It's okay to write comments and comments like this, as long as it makes you happy; but I personally think it shouldn't be like this when writing a book. I read most of the chapters and it feels like you wrote a long review of what you thought and said! The purpose is to tell us that this is how we love! Be careful when using names of famous people.

Recommend a book, the main protagonist of China Entertainment. If you are interested, you can check it out. I write music and Internet articles, but his style is different.