Reloaded Tianshi Zhang Goudan

I can't hold it in any longer. The latest chapter really made me sick. Author, you are walking on a tightrope right now. If there is a little bit of wind from left to right, you will fall to the ground and fall to death without being able to get up.

The early stage can be discarded in the later stage. Personally, I came here to read the supernatural and thought it was a good book. Alas.

As an author who has written two books and is currently writing a third, I should check what I have written before each upload to see if there are any mistakes that need to be corrected. Isn't this what a writer should do? After reading only four chapters, I found many typos, wrong use of punctuation marks, even incomplete sentences and unclear expressions. How can the reader continue reading? When I read a novel, I have to imagine and correct the wrong parts in the book. Why? I'm not doing Chinese homework.

The story is good, but it obviously has a lot of flaws First: In the early stage, the protagonist kept hesitating about the recruitment issue, and it was unnecessary hesitation, which is very annoying Second: The protagonist's IQ dropped from time to time, especially when it came to money, which also shows that the author did not consider the reality of being a normal person when writing the book. In other words, the protagonist is desperate for money, and the rest are just garbage. To be honest, this kind of protagonist will always be highly toxic in the plot. Secondly, most readers will be annoyed by this kind of protagonist I hope the author can fine-tune the obviously toxic plot.

Gone! ByeﾉBye~ I can't stand it 😰😰

Author, I mourn for you... There are so many works, but now only this one is left... I read the novel you wrote about Primitive Man for a long time... I completely understand your mood, because I am the same, there used to be a 1.5 Million word novel... Now it is gone Click on my avatar to see, I only have one left... I feel sorry for each other, and I mourn in silence.

I have been reading for so long and have been waiting for rebirth but I didn't see the protagonist die. Then I suddenly discovered that the name of this book is "Reinstalled Celestial Master Zhang Goudan" instead of "Reborn Celestial Master Zhang Goudan". . . . . . . . 😂😂😂😂😂

Why does it sound like the rhythm of a harem? . . Is it a harem? Can anyone tell me the spoilers? I will withdraw from the harem 😥

It's very funny and strange, even this chapter is very strange... Can I say that after watching half of it, Amway went to watch BL all night in this chapter? 😅It has been five years since corruption...

Clearly a very interesting book. So many people say it's not good. It's really haha.

It was because of your book that I gave myself a bad title. Everyone complained, and it was all your fault, Zhang Goudan! 😡

I shaved my head today. I feel that only a bald head can deserve the name Chen Baichuan.

This name is very fresh and refined_(:::з∠)_ Raise your hand if you see the name.

In recent years, cinnabar has been restricted, and there is no way to buy it! The principle of traditional Chinese medicine is that kings and ministers are Wu Zuo. In modern times, some people with a professional background have accepted the death truth and used a single medicine to make it... It has caused many lives, and many materials have been banned... Our ancestors have always said that medicine is divided into three parts poison. If each prescription contains part of the toxicity, the prescription often has its own antidote to remove the poison and preserve the essence! But the Westernization mentality is too heavy, ah, that's it... A certain drug is toxic, a certain drug causes cancer, the official bans it, etc... On the other hand, in ancient prescriptions, doesn't it have the effect of inhibiting cancer? A prescription that can really kill people will be passed down? Most of the prescriptions that can be seen now are for the nobles (the inheritance of ordinary people is probably not complete). I can't say that the efficacy of the medicine is very good, at least it can't kill people, right?

Author, please don't forcefully use the halo of intelligence. The higher-ups are not mentally retarded. Earth masters and Goudan should be integrated as soon as possible. It looks too inconsistent!

The title of this novel is so catchy. Although I don't know the content, the image of a heavenly master wearing power core armor, holding a mahogany sword in his hand, and affixing talismans on the shield appeared in my mind!

Every time I read this kind of systematic novel, I feel a little confused. Don't you want to search for loot? Every time after a battle, you pat your butt and leave. Why don't you search so many STs?

Why aren't there a few of them?

Uncle, I have been watching pirated copies for n years, and finally gave them all to my uncle for the first time. Please update 😭

There are so few updates in one day, which is not enough to read.

I've been keeping it for a while and was ready to watch it, but I didn't dare to watch the whole limited-time offer. I'll order it after I've passed it.

The writing is very good, the characters are well-established, there is no facial expression, and the plot is not cliche, keep it up.

The first few dozen chapters were pretty good, but then everything fell apart.

Brother, my writing is too slow. Please update it quickly. I will give you one dollar a day for 30 days, which means 30 is faster. As a first grader, I have tried my best, and you should try your best too 😎

Several people said that the first 50 chapters were good. After looking at it, I found that it is a very vulgar routine, so vulgar that it can be said to be poisonous, and the operation is inexplicable. For example, is Schrödinger's second-hand domestic machine bad or good? The cowardly little security guard got special powers and ran away when he saw the police. The psychological description is that he ran away and found a place to show off his talents. The difference between before and after is too large, as well as negative IQ operation. It's obvious that he can't run away from the gun, and he can't hide after running, let alone show off his skills. Everyday slicing routines, daily black ZF ZF hides the truth every day, and the concealment methods are still very low-level. Delete post? A bunch of people saw it and deleted the post? There was more than one incident and the post was deleted. Are you deceiving yourself? All kinds of unreasonable little things happen one after another, A bus driver who is running away on his own? No one opens the door? Is it difficult to open the bus door? Where is the brain? It is an emergency escape measure that is played on a loop on the bus. The bus that was crowded before can now let a security guard whose whole body is on fire run from the back door to the front windshield? Others still squat down to make way? What the hell is everyone squatting down to make way for? Is it the little security guard who can avoid everyone with his agility in an instant? Or super standing long jump?

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After reading fifty chapters, I can only say that hay is poisonous, and all kinds of forced intelligence are not wanted to be controlled by the official government but also want to take advantage of the official government. Moreover, the content of the first fifty chapters has a great plot conflict with the prologue of the chopping of copper corpses, which is impossible to reconcile. It's suitable for reading without thinking, and don't find faults, because once you find faults, the book will become unreadable.

Let go of primitive people and be harmonized?

I feel that the background setting of this book is not good. In fact, it is most suitable to place it in the Republic of China period! ! In the modern setting, this plug-in is of little use, and the powerful government agencies make it difficult to conceal one's identity. This plug-in is very practical if it is set in the Republic of China. Moreover, the Republic of China government has limited regulatory capabilities and the protagonist has more room for maneuver. Just be careful to avoid some sensitive topics! !

Don't write about Liu Rong. The emotional scenes are quite embarrassing.