Start from the Wasteland World

The author's writing and plot are actually pretty good, but the style tends to go off the rails. In the previous work, Game Place, I felt that the writing style was wrong after a loli ghost came out, and there was no atmosphere at all. When a mascot-like existence appears in the book and acts cute, the book loses its feeling, which is a bit unpleasant. It is not recommended to include plots in the article such as innocent lolita acting cute regardless of the occasion. This will lower the style of the article, resulting in many unreasonable plots and making no sense. I beg the author not to add any more forced cuteness. It doesn't feel cute at all but makes the atmosphere of the article disappear. I've wanted to do this for a long time.