The Journey of the Predator

The writing is too immature and needs more contact.

Looking at it reminds me of a composition I wrote when I was a kid. . . . .

The logic and order of words make no sense at all. I don't even have double quotation marks when I speak. I'm so lazy. Why should I write a book? Isn't it good to lie on the bed and play with my mobile phone?

Sigh╯╰I want to support you, but your narrative style makes it difficult for me to accept. First of all, the background explanation is unclear and the dialogue method is confusing. It feels like it has been re-edited but not completed. There is also the plot. I have read more than 10 chapters, but I still don't understand the background relationship of the protagonist. Also, does the protagonist have a golden finger? The protagonist has traveled to the iron-blooded world. Can the iron-blooded technology achieve the ability to travel through time and space? The protagonist himself has the ability in this area, and in the previous chapters, according to the author's description, the iron-blooded world should have more than just the protagonist as a time traveler. But the descriptions by these authors are ambiguous and difficult to understand, so (*￣m￣) I will take the first step

Author, our requirements are not high. You write slowly, at least one page a day, and update every day. This is not high, right? No more eunuchs

If you say there is no heroine or genitals, are you human? Do you need to tell me how the author wants to write it? If you don't have any of the above, what else are you looking at? Just to fight and kill, is that interesting? In that case, how many people will read this book, so don't impose your own ideas on the author!

The author should work hard and not stop updating. Come on, you will definitely win.

The more I write this novel, the worse it gets. It's just random writing.

Come on. There are Alien novels, but few of Predator have been completed.

The Q&A you wrote is too rigid, like a machine, ah, ah, ah, ah, without any emotion.

Why are you so obsessed with smoothness and writing? It's not necessary. Really, look at this author's 11 books. In which of them is there no eunuch? Just by looking at his name, you can tell that he is so damn self-aware. I admire

Not to mention the plot and writing, it's full of typos, bad sentences, and poor punctuation. Even junior high school graduates are higher than this.

Young man, I have a problem with sentence fragmentation, but the subject matter is fine. Please be careful and don't write too badly.

Why are there no book reviews? I also want to read other people's thoughts on trying drugs. Book reviews are more interesting than novels now.

…The story is a good story, but the writing is messy

Hello, are you good at writing? I also kind of want to write about this genre, but now I'm writing an Armor Warrior Marvel fanfic.

I haven't read it yet, but I am very impressed by the fact that there are very few stories about the Predator as the protagonist, and even less well-written ones.

Of course it's open. More fun and more second-hand elements. Also do something like system transformation.

The author has written six books and they don't even have 800,000 words, which is amazing

I also wrote a Predator fanfic called The Will of the Predator when I was in the third grade of junior high school. I think I came across your book at that time. Unfortunately, I didn't know why it was banned later.