Yu Banxian

The author's word count is top-notch. I resisted and read 130 chapters. The more I read, the more I read. The full text is 70% of the word count, and you are particularly good at it. Get up every six o'clock and practice singing for 20 minutes, run for 10,000 meters for class, practice iron water for badminton training in the afternoon, four-sport training, music class, and go to Aunt Yuan for dinner at six o'clock in the evening, interspersed with continued chapters... Each chapter is written like this. How do you feel when you look back?

The writing is good, but it's too detailed and wordy, and the protagonist's growth is too slow.

There are so many words in each paragraph, it's like a short composition, which makes one's scalp numb when reading it.

Read it carefully and feel good about reading more chapters. It's comfortable to read evenly.

Is this because the work is out of date or has it not been updated due to regulatory issues? Or are you going to open a new book? Come on, no matter what, at least your article is meaningful.

Can I push my own book down? It's not much different from this book, please give it a try

A touch of song, a touch of hard work, a touch of cultivation, a touch of life 👍👍👍

I watched 30% of the time and finally couldn't stand it anymore. I felt like vomiting. The story about a bunch of brats was written as a conspiracy. The male protagonist has lived in vain for more than 50 years. It's too childish. The male protagonist can get involved in all trivial things. It's too fake.

The advancement is not obvious. With perfect strength control, the human body can exert 3 companion strength and speed, and the strength consumption is reduced. Too much emphasis is placed on athletes and they do not even master the most basic knowledge, and the improvements are not effective.

Why do a group of middle school students always have dinner and drinks outside? Isn't this too fake?

After reading three chapters, my first reaction was that it was extremely long-winded and uncomfortable to read. I don't know if it's the author's ability to express himself in writing or something else!

If you write slowly and in detail, you are right, it will be interesting. But your writing is too detailed. There are a lot of things that are not of much importance, and a lot of trivial things can be written in a lot. This will make you tired from writing! Others are tired of watching it! To remember so many details, isn't it just like going to school

Haven't you noticed that this book is updated on time at 7.36 Every day? It's obviously written by a machine. I don't know if it was written by a machine.

The progress is too slow, and irrelevant scenes are written too carefully.

Come on, the author writes so well, one dream lasts for ten years

The biggest flaw of this book is badminton!

Brother, you apply for a contract!

Qian Zhang has just graduated from junior high school...

The word number of water is not ordinary water. . .

Oh my god, I suddenly feel that I signed the Eunuch contract and am looking forward to it, or I should learn from you.

After reading more than 70 chapters, I feel that this novel is just a fairy tale romance novel, and it's also very long-winded.

It's too long-winded. I read dozens of chapters, and then I read the following chapters. It's too long-winded, not nutritious, and boring to watch.

Although it was watery enough, I really looked into it. Read carefully, great book. I hope the author will not give up

Someone has a recommendation and voted for whether he is awesome or not.

This makes me feel like it was written by artificial intelligence

Author, you can't put the cart before the horse. The main plot is cultivation, but it turns out to be the main plot of athletes! This affects reading too much!

3.87 Million words completed👍The author with the most perseverance at the beginning. Power generation purely for love is awesome. The next Ten Miles Sword God must be you.

To be honest, the writing is very good. The themes of badminton and cultivating immortals are very good and novel. However, the diary-style writing method is not mainstream. It is a pity to end it here. It is certainly long-winded. You see, the ordinary world only has 200,000 words in a lifetime, so I focus on the key points and key plots, and the online writing and group portraits are not very popular. The 1.5 Million words in this book are normal, and the rest is just water. Hope the next one is better. Sincerely, salute! I wish you better and better as you write!

The writing is so detailed. I love it. I like this kind of novel that is written in detail. 😍😍😍 Too many novels nowadays are written very hastily. I was surprised to see such a book.