Advance Team from Other World

... It starts to get toxic in less than 500 words. A future army of 300,000 people 100 years from now, if it breaks into another world for 20 kilometers, it will be intercepted and all supplies will be cut off... What is the concept of 20 kilometers? The broken tanks of World War II were criticized for their short range of 200 kilometers on full fuel, and their off-road driving of 20km/h was only an average standard. The deployment width of a division in World War II was 10-20 kilometers. It was difficult to squeeze 50,000 people into the distance set at the beginning, let alone 300,000. 20 kilometers away, we even wandered in front of our house. Even if we were to be taken back, we would be able to escape... It was really a primitive army...

The author, let me give you a suggestion. Don't write about the intrigues among several mixed bloods or any other messy stuff. Otherwise the book will explode. The book should have as much positive energy as possible. It's not that there are no intrigues and intrigues. But what we want to see is that the characters in the book are heroes, not a group of five-category pig feet whose starting point is relying on the system.

If the door to another world is not open at home, how much price will China have to pay to participate?

After reading about 20 chapters, I feel that the author thinks too simply about the country. Either no one knows about the source plan, or it should be announced early. Why does the protagonist know it, but he still keeps it secret and casually tells his teammates? Doesn't he know that knowing too much is harmful to his teammates?

This subject is very novel, but the story on Earth directly dissuaded some people.

"Fantasy Different World" fan? In fact, I prefer that the door to another world appears in a user open area. It feels like a pity to directly replace that giant rock and lose a natural wonder.

The subject matter is very good. But the characters and dialogue in the first chapter are so caricatured, so toxic.

It's not bad, but starting from the fine points, many of the clips are explosive. If it weren't for the subject matter, it would have run out earlier.

The logic problem is very serious. Thousands of years ago, aliens who could use teleportation magic to travel to and from the earth did not even know that the earth did not have magic power. . . . . He still doesn't know anything about the earth. . .

It's so miserable. I'm the second most direct fan of all my subscriptions. .

I support Brother Ya as always, and I especially like the heroine Bai Yue. Come on, Brother Ya, please give me Bai Yue's sketch.

Author, you are so awesome and still writing. I'll take a look at it when I have time. Just when I saw it, I was already in charge. . .

It is not easy for the author to submit a book and recommend it for support.

Could it be that the author wrote more than 4 million books on a single computer?

How come you get dumped? If nothing else, what about the Air Force? With 300,000 people instead of 30 people, wouldn't the large group's military power and air supremacy be lost? Writing a book is not for you to write nonsense. The underlying logic is broken and you still write nonsense.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

If you open a small account, please tell me.

I admire the author for being able to write so much on this subject. However, it is difficult to write this kind of two-term war between modern VS magical weapons. There are too many contradictions and it is difficult to reconcile them. The high martial arts abilities of individual soldiers in the magic world can be seen as superheroes in movies. Individual soldiers disperse and attack major cities on the earth to cause destruction and destruction. With the physical strength of the five scum of the earth, how can we defeat it except for the encirclement and encirclement by the army? Then the industrial troops on the earth's side are scouring the ground with firepower and striking globally, but the other side is also helpless. Generally speaking, the magic world is strong as an individual, while the earth is strong as a collective. In group operations, relying on the earth's three-dimensional combat system of sea, land and air information, it can absolutely crush the magic world. However, no matter how strong the system capabilities are, it is difficult to stop the magical lone wolf with all kinds of strange abilities.

The author calls the door in his home the entrance hall?