The Girl of Eternity

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Another promotion date~July 21 Welcome everyone then あ, welcome everyone at any time! 7/19/19 —————————————————— Dear book friends, good day, "The Girl of the Eternal Flow" is recommended again. I can't help but share happy things with everyone. Not much to say, I will definitely work hard to present more exciting works. Thank you everyone. 7/12/19 —————————————————— Dear book friends, good day, "The Girl of the Eternal Flow" was recommended on June 30. When I received the notification, I felt a mixture of fear and surprise. Although the first volume has been written, some settings of the second volume are still in tangle. In short, we need to keep working hard, I will definitely try my best to present good works to everyone. 6/28/19 ———————————————————— Good day, dear book friends~ "The Girl of the Eternal Flow" will be recommended again, The novel will be updated daily starting from June 16th, it has been almost a week now. As a preview, two chapters will be updated in one day in July. Thank you for your continued support. 6/22/19 ——————————————————

[Rating]: 82 [Book title]: "The Girl of the Eternal Flow" [Author]: Shi Huaxia [Number of words read]: 17w [Commentator]: Wild Moyuer [Introduction]: Only those chosen by fate can take over the flow of eternity and gain the power to divide the time and space of the three realms. The escapee who longs to be cared for; the guardian who longs to be protected; the lost man in the mirror... As expected, people cannot break free from the shackles of desire. Unsettled, between right and wrong, love and hate; closely related, between you, me and him/her; unforgettable, whether to choose to commemorate you or forget you, are you willing to find the truest self? Love and hate entanglement, fantasy adventure, wonderful stories unfold... (Friends who like European costumes, architecture, mythology... Must not miss it) [Book Review] [Impression of the Work]" If the novel is compared to a girl, the first volume of this novel is like an elegant aristocratic lady, and the second volume is like a series of muses. " The background description at the beginning of the work is very impressive, and there is a feeling of a two-dimensional girl comic. The scene descriptions of Shi Hua Xia in the first volume are very stunning. The smooth switching of scenes such as the Central Church, the Holy City, the Royal Palace, the Inquisition, the Garden, and the Imperial Knight Academy make people feel like they are not reading a book with chapters and chapters, but colorful pictures frame by frame. The overall style is semi-modern and semi-retro. The complex patterns, white swans, neat suits, court dances, flowers of thorns, blackberry-flavored fruit wine mentioned in the book... A series of images can easily bring people into that environment. The description of European clothing and architecture in the article is very detailed and attentive, which improves the "temperament" of the book by more than one level. In addition to the smooth scene switching, what makes people feel like watching the picture is Huaxia University's good color matching. For example, blue rose, brown red, silver, mint, champagne, and lotus root pink appear in the article. Special points. Compared with the second volume, the first volume lacks the sophistication of a lady and is more mysterious, adding elements from Greek mythology, such as the goddess Venus. Of course, there are also the legendary magicians Merlin, King Arthur, Vivian, etc. The first volume also mentions the sirens, which has a feeling of Greek mythology. Look at the back of the table of contents for the Sun God Volume. If you like Greek mythology, this book is not to be missed. [Style] "Girls' comic-style Western fantasy world." This is actually different from the traditional Western fantasy. It lacks an ancient medieval flavor. Because the author's writing style is more delicate and the language style is full of girlish flavor, it is more like a Western-style girl's comic style, which is very suitable for Loli girls to read. Maybe because of the short story, the world view and layout of this article are not big, but Hua Xia does not need to pursue grandeur. The style of this book is mainly exquisite. [Setting] "The collapse of time and space leads to turbulence in time and space. The Eternal Daughter Ji travels through different cracks in time and space and participates in different mythological stories." The human world, the flow of eternity, the fairy world, the cracks in space and other planes constitute the pattern of this book. The first volume of the story is mainly a prequel introducing Ji, the daughter of Eternity, who was considered a thief because of her special ability to travel through space. The background of the story in Volume 1 is mainly the human world, imitating the style of Western Europe. When the heroine experienced a series of things such as war and death, she finally became the daughter of Eternity in order to restore the order of time and space. When those who originally died appeared again, the memory of Ji had disappeared from the world. The second volume begins with Ji becoming the daughter of Hengjiu and going to experience the time and space rift. The story of this time and space rift is naturally our existing plot. There are three questions here: 1. There is no problem with this setting, but the style and writing of the first volume are very different, so readers need to adapt to the change from the human world to the mythical world when reading. 2. Also, readers know that the plot of the story should not be described in large lengths. Although appropriate mythological plots and characters are easter eggs, writing too much will affect the reader's perception of the main plot line of the book. 3. Qi and Bai look like modern people. The word "facial cleanser" appears in the original Western European writing style. The words "school girl" will make people feel that they are drama, and it will easily affect the reading experience of this book. It's as if things that were not originally from the same painting style were mixed together, and the elegance that it should have been lost. [Character] "The heroine with the temperament of an aristocratic girl, the male protagonist of the blood race with mysterious origins, the gentle but powerful brother." [Ji]: In the beginning, she is a thief, murderer, counterfeit, and monster in the eyes of others, and is known as the "Silver Fairy". However, Theodore's description of her in the book is quite appropriate: "She is a silver-haired girl who looks weak but dares to stand up to others; a little book lover who often curls her lips when reading books; a rapier user with excellent sword skills; a delicate one who can oversleep. The eldest lady is a crybaby who cries for her brother..." She was brave when she was in the court, but she was fragile when she heard that she wanted to get married, and she was cautious when she liked someone. The scene where she asked "Brother, can I like you" after drinking blackberry wine was very well written. After becoming the daughter of Hengliu, I can see that she has matured a lot, and she will no longer be so humble and cautious when facing Louis' feelings. However, her personality is still more like a little girl, and she can gradually change in this regard. [Read]: To commemorate, I chose the name carefully. This is the image of a gentle older brother, a nobleman loyal to the dynasty, and an outstanding young man who strives for the glory of the family leader. You can use many words to describe an outstanding man to describe him, but such a man chose a political marriage and died hastily because of the jealousy of another woman. The last scene was handled particularly well. He recalled the scene of the special episode of Children's Day and remembered the era that should have been lost in Imperius. The emotional expression was very delicate. [Louis] A vampire who has lost his memory. His personal image and language style are not like vampires, but like a large number of classic male characters in shoujo anime many years ago, such as Qi Xiu from Tokyo Cats, or Ji Dou from Guardian Sweetheart. The story about him has not yet fully unfolded, so I cannot make too many comments. [Plot] The general concept is quite good, I will focus on the next few issues. 1. The description of the war is relatively sloppy, almost ending quickly in the form of oral narration, as well as Lin's sudden illness, the hasty death of Nian, Carol, and Hawke, and the lightning revenge of Ji. The pace is too fast. Readers who explain quickly will lack a sense of involvement and even lack resonance with the emotions shown by the heroine. The explanations at the beginning were quite detailed, but the style of painting suddenly changed later. The overall rhythm of the first volume feels like a group of noble ladies sipping black tea elegantly, discussing clothes, perfumes, and architecture, and then a tornado blew them away and left them with nothing. 2. It may be due to the weekly update, the time interval is relatively long, and the connection between some chapters is not natural enough. 3. As mentioned before, in the second volume, the balance between the original story and the original story of this book should be grasped, and there is no need to describe the original storyline in large quantities. In addition, the character painting style in each story should be consistent as much as possible. For example, it is best not to have Chinese slang or Chinese characters.

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I like it very much. The writing is clean and refreshing, and the writing is smooth. It's quite good!

It's so well written and so enjoyable to read!

Creative, beautiful and worth collecting!

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After reading it carefully, my first impression was that it was unpopular, the subject matter seemed niche, and the writing was very Western. If you like this kind of thing, you really like it, if you don't like it, it's true... But I am commenting on this book from a male perspective. To comment on this book in one sentence, it is getting better! I felt that the next few chapters started to attract me and made me want to read on. The above are all personal opinions, come on! ! To collect and to invest.

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I read the latest chapter in one go and quickly got into the role. I thought the pace was a bit fast, but since it's a short story this shouldn't be too much of a problem. Also, when I read the latest chapter, Lin may have done something outrageous because she was jealous of the heroine. I don't know what the author's thinking is, so I will predict it according to my own thinking. If it were me, I would write like this: Lin was dissatisfied with the heroine because of jealousy, but the heroine saved her once in a subsequent incident. But even so, although she was grateful, she was still jealous of the heroine. Finally, when the male protagonist was assassinated, he used his own life to give the male protagonist a chance to escape. In this way, her death will remain in the hero's heart forever.