Tool Nation

The setting at the beginning is very good and makes people want to continue watching. Collect it and keep it.

Black Star: Lao Mai, what do you think? Manison: It's okay, but I will never admit that this is my seed. Black Star: Come on, you must have forgotten your condom once. Manison:. . . . He is far from my Immortal Tool Nation.

Newbie, new book, hope you all can support it. If there is anything that doesn't feel good, I hope everyone can point it out and discuss it together.

Author, you haven't figured it out yet. I am a newbie, updated and unstable, and then I just want to wait for the contract to be signed, daydreaming.

Manison and Black Star were confused

The third is the growth system and the path of the hero's journey. You are quite confused in this regard, and I don't know how to write your outline, but since Tool Nation now uses the super god mechanic system. But I found that when you wrote the background of the story, you wanted to break away from the super god mechanic. I feel like this is a sign of lack of confidence in myself. Why break away? Why can't it be a kind of fusion and re-creation? I remember Star Wars. In fact, it was another kind of interstellar war novel that the United States was creating. The success of Super Mechanic proves that many people actually read the written system. The dual system has been created. All you need is to incorporate the thesis system into your system and create better stories. Since the name is "Tool Country", the story of Lao Maitou actually has a lot of room for exploration. Secondly, if you fail to sign the contract successfully, this matter will hit you hard. Signing the contract is indeed a way of proof, and the lack of proof does not mean that you are no longer good. People need proof, but they also need their own firmness in their hearts. Many things must be done by yourself before others can see them. If you don't do it yourself and give up, there will definitely be no results. With the way you are now, the reason why I dismissed you at the beginning must have been to see that I didn't make the wrong choice. You need to do a lot of things to prove him wrong instead of just admitting defeat. You have to know that it is not so easy for a novel to succeed now. You may have a lot of ideas when writing a novel, but you will find it very difficult to actually write it. Not many people watched it, and the signing was unsuccessful, but you have to know that this is actually real life. This reality is like this, not as good as we imagined. Our imaginations are beautiful, but the facts are cruel. We must also imagine the cruelty of the facts, not just the beauty. This book has come to an end. In fact, I still quite like your writing style and world building. I hate the feeling that the protagonist thinks everything is right, and then everyone follows his lead. You wrote out everyone's thoughts, which actually proves that you are a very mature author with your own thoughts. Your update rhythm is also very good. You are working hard to type the proof text every day. I hope you can have better results in your next book. At the same time, don't expect too much from yourself. It's hard for a newcomer to get ahead. You need to be more able to bear it, and then build the whole world before launching your new book. Sao Nian, you have great potential.

You should try your best to continue updating and then sign up. Let's talk about it again

Just because of your name, I will look at you

Come on

If you don't update it now, when will you wait?

You don't have oil, so why are airplanes powered by oil?

If you don't want to stick to this book anymore, then change to the next one and be decisive.

It's very well written, I really hope you can stick with it

I'm ready to go to another world

It's been a month since the break, and the new book hasn't been released yet. Do I have to confirm the internal signature before releasing the book? If you want to continue writing a book, just publish it and wait for the contract to be signed. I don't have the patience to wait for you anymore.

Whether he knows how to be a eunuch or not, he will still be able to finish the book

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update it~ You can just post a few sentences. If your investment is not updated for 7 days, it will fail. I really don't want you to finish reading this book.

Ask again, have you released a new book? Let me know, thank you😜

Are you still there? Where is your new book?

Can you tell me your new account number?

What is the new book? Can anyone tell me, thank you

Have you released a new book? Let me know, thank you

New book released? What's your name?

You haven't passed the internal submission, right? The new book hasn't been released yet.