Picked up an Island

The writing is very good at the beginning, but it really falls apart at the end... The emotional scenes are too toxic... Some female characters are really uncomfortable. The idea of ​​cloning yourself is a little hard to accept. Some people conclude that reading online articles is "enjoyable", but the protagonist of this book works as a coolie, while the clones are eating, drinking and having fun in this world. It is really... Very unpleasant. Goldfinger has grown too fast, and many pitfalls have appeared. According to the development trend, the protagonist is probably preparing to compete with the country. The author may not have thought well about some of the content or may have expressed it incompletely due to insufficient proportion. The overall content in the early stage is very good. There is a book with the potential to become a god, and the emotional drama can continue to be watched. I really like Yang Chaoyue's role and the image he created is really great, but later it still fell apart/crying and laughing. The front is worth a look, and the back, if you can stand it, isn't too bad. The author has great potential. The first book is already good compared to most novice writers. I look forward to the next work and hope the author will continue to work hard! By the way, is this going to be a tj? But that's fine, I'll start over with the next one and write far more than this one. Don't lose heart, keep going. ——The above comments are only personal opinions summarizing personal reading experience and are for reference only.

I can't read the realistic part of this book and just skip it. But the island part is quite interesting

If it was 5 years ago, this book would have been very popular, but now it is a bit late. Farming literature has inherent limitations, that is, it is easy to be stereotyped. Even if harem elements are added, there is not much room for development. Twenty years of online writing and countless works. If you want to reach higher, the most important thing is not how many elements you can incorporate, but the writing style.

I feel like this book is going to collapse, the women who have already appeared can't figure it out, and even made one themselves.

As an old bookworm, this book is quite interesting, and the plot concept is okay, but the plot has always been too smooth, and it is difficult for impatient people to keep reading. The city is the main line, and the alien island is the sub-line. The sub-line drives the main plot very well, making readers not bored! Although there are occasional slightly toxic points, it can be accepted or even ignored! Some chapters contain malicious plots! Let's complain here about being forced into marriage. This plot was serious at the beginning and is still looming now, which makes people very worried. After all, many readers have reached the age of marriage. I would like to ask the author to take care of the feelings of us readers. End this story as soon as possible. It is very painful and watching it is even more painful. After all, it is better to die as a Taoist friend than to be a poor Taoist! Don't get us involved, either! It is better to suffer alone than to suffer in public! It's better for you to suffer! We express our annoyance to you, this scheming boy or uncle!

If you like to catch the sea, please update more. Urgent, urgent, urgent. Reward first. Don't stop updating

I don't know why I don't want to see it anymore when I see that the system can recruit people and build villages with pig's feet.

I just finished reading twenty chapters, and the book is quite enjoyable. One thing is, can this sentence be broken up a little better? There are many places where the sentence can be finished in one sentence, but a comma is added in the middle to break it into two half-sentences, which looks very awkward. I don't know if there are any changes in the later chapters, so just keep reading.

Wow, it's been a long time since I've seen a new book that appeals to my taste. Come on, author.

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After reading it, the pace was a bit fast. Some plots are a bit toxic. But it's still good. The author should stick to his original intention and the readers' opinions can be listened to, but they still have to make their own judgment. I took a look at your update time, 🤫 which is disappointing.

The author's ninety-eight chapters let you eat 😡😡😡😡

I'm sorry that I made a wrong post and hurt the author by mistake. Here I say sorry and I will express my apology with actual actions later (I was confused. The covers of the two books are very similar and both are about farming. I accidentally clicked on the wrong one 😓)

Come on, buy stocks. Which stocks do you support? I support Transcendence stocks.

If you have the conditions, go abroad and buy some guns, ammunition, and medicine for self-defense. Anyway, you are not afraid of the sea, and you can install them directly in the space.

Highly recommended... Beast buster, caltrops... Make some special caltrops, with longer nails and better materials. The last spike is barbed. On both sides of the power grid, on the only way to get close to the protagonist, there are places where wild beasts may appear. For defense, this is more suitable than thermal weapons. A person who has not undergone strict training can exert much power even if he has a hot weapon in hand. Once the beast's feet are pierced, no matter how powerful the beast is, it is finished.

I think it's better not to rush to confirm the heroine. I've seen so many movies that it crashed because of the emotional drama. Cloning is okay. Cloning oneself is a bit toxic, but I can understand that there are only so many hours in a day. I have to write about the island, and reality has to show up. Without a clone, I won't even have time to rest. Good luck to the author.

If you write about a real-life female star as the protagonist, those who don't like it will feel resentful. But if you write about an original heroine, no matter whether you like the star or not, you won't feel resentful. And it also prevents fans from being obsessed with you? Why write about a real-life female star as the protagonist?

I would like to give the author some advice on the direction of this type of novel: I picked up an island, and the focus of the plot development is to explore the island and discover unknown species, how to obtain known things, and combine the development of reality to make the items profitable. How to deal with the development and use value of the island? The plot of the island is interspersed with some dangerous incidents. The author should not write it as a drama of urban emotional entanglements. It sounds like pig's feet are ambiguous and noble, but in fact it is a bitch.

Based on my experience as a bookworm for many years, this book will definitely collapse in the end.

There have been a lot of comments these days, good or bad, all of them are refined. Meeting is fate. There are not so many glass-hearted people in April. As long as there are no ginseng attacks, I will not delete or ban, but I am not an old author. I really can't avoid being criticized o()o. With everyone's understanding, I have banned the blind date part (ノ๑`ȏ´๑)ノ⌨ I have read all the opinions you have raised with me. They are indeed very constructive. If the plot I am thinking about is reasonable, I will consider adopting it. In addition, the book will continue the daily life on the island~~ I heard from everyone that if there are too many descriptions of women, the yin energy will be too strong~~ Okay, I try to control myself ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ﾉﾞ No more, I will update the code word.

What the hell kind of book is this? Can you read it? It's so addictive, every time I see the main character eating seafood, my mouth will water after I've just finished eating. Too poisonous

😅What kind of operation is this, and the author also rewards me for playing it! 👍

I liked it in the beginning, but the emotional scenes in the back were really confusing. Ma Chunchun's characters are more plump than Beyond.

To be honest, is the pig's foot too weak and the system just like this? Going to another world? I have a strange feeling when I look at the pig's feet that look like chicken. I hope it can be strengthened as soon as possible.

I finally understand why I can't be the protagonist. If I were the protagonist, I would just sell fish every day. If I want to be big, I don't have partners. I just need enough money.

It's been a long time since I've been here, and it's really broken. It's such a good daily novel. If you write it down, it's at least a fairy tale. It has to do so many weird things (cloning, wearing multiple clothes, the aura of a king, disgusting emotional lines, planet weirdos...). It's really uncomfortable to think about it. I really like this book. The previous writing is really good. Doesn't the protagonist have to be the king in the real world?

After seeing Chapter 142, I can either break it off completely, love simply, or fight till the end. Or pure and single. I originally thought I just couldn't write emotional scenes, but the more I watched it, the more disgusting it became. This was not meant to be an in-depth article. So, author, please either write more fun, or write about desserts to feed the dog food. I wish you better and better as you write. I'll take my leave first.

When I saw there was a hiring mall, I knew that this book would be impossible to read in the future. It was basically out of my mind. I hope the author would be careful about opening cheats.