The Pure Yang Junior Martial Uncle

Can I gossip about you? It's so hard to keep up with just one chapter a day! Author, can you please be a human being?! Do you expect me to be the one to break through your defenses and vanquish your enemies?

When I first saw the title, I thought it was a story about a junior uncle who achieved the Yang Shen realm, but after clicking in, I realized it was a JX3 (Sword Net 3) fanfiction. What a pleasant surprise! I used to love JX3, and I've read some similar fanfiction, but those weren't very good, and there haven't been any similar works in recent years, so I'd long given up hope.

Occasionally, you can play dumb to outsmart others, but this style is outdated or has become tiresome. To be honest, I skipped through your book mainly because it was too bland and lacked any sense of excitement. Especially considering you're a Pure Yang Sect Master, it's quite unsettling that you haven't returned to your sect for so long.

After reading the first twenty chapters, I found the protagonist to be incredibly indecisive. He hesitates and drags his feet when it's time to act, which is frustrating even though it's a rare gem among Jianwang 3 novels. Can't we all be more decisive and efficient?

I came here specifically for Chunyang. However, over 200 chapters have passed, and you still haven't reached Chunyang Palace. Are you planning to get married, have kids, and then the whole family goes back to Chunyang Palace? I can't find much of a Chunyang disciple's connection to the story. It's as if it has nothing to do with my great Chunyang, at least not with Chunyang Palace so far.

Regarding combat, I have a few preliminary thoughts and suggestions. Reality is different from the game. It's not that Qi Pure (a class in the game) can't engage in melee combat; in the game, that's for gameplay considerations. But in reality, you can't just stand still and cast spells from a distance with a sword like a staff.

When playing games, you're all incredibly clever, but once you transmigrate, you become complete idiots. Does that do justice to your master's teachings?

Keep up the good work, author! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

A load of nonsense, I don't understand a word they're saying.

Actually, you've been keeping a low profile enough. You could go all out and boost your reputation, then go and contemplate the Dao, create some martial arts, advance the storyline, and write about your daily life. Being too bland and low-key, always pretending to be weak while actually being strong, will only lead to worse results. If you can't write the martial arts world in your heart, don't force it. Try writing in a different direction; it might be more effective.