I Smoke Comics in Konoha

Come on You write very well

The author really talks too much nonsense. A common problem for novices is that they want to express everything but cannot control the rhythm. The overall coordination ability needs to be improved. It is not detailed where it should be detailed, and it is too long-winded where it should be concise and concise. Writing a bunch of messy jokes will only make readers confused and unable to invest in the plot. However, the creative plot of combining American comics and Naruto is worth enduring and watching.

The plot is okay, but don't express too many of your own thoughts in the article. It's too dramatic.

I don't have the patience to wait whether or not I return to Naruto. Your updates are really slow.

People are relatively poor, so they have to make do~

Thanks for the suggestion of Fireworks Buddha. Let me tell you my opinion. As for the knowledge and equipment, I think it is very good. I am worried about whether it will become an invincible style... I will add it to my outline, but is it too difficult for mutants to research Orochimaru? In the entire Naruto series, how do you capture the Blood Succession Limit? Danzo and Yamato were all directly transplanted. At most, they considered suppressing the cells to allow them to fuse slowly. Orochimaru and Beiru were directly packaged and swallowed whole. On the one hand, the technology in the Naruto world is not so developed. They are too scientific. Biotechnology is probably equivalent to the level of the early 21st century. Electric? There are only electric lights, not even a steam engine, not to mention gunpowder. No matter how advanced the knowledge is, it needs the support of the industrial base. Not one or two geniuses can handle everything. You see, geniuses like Orochimaru can't even handle the blood inheritance limit of natural reaction. Look at Marvel, any cat or dog can study mutants and produce some results. This is the genome artificially inserted by the gods. Can you say that scientific research talents like Orochimaru are everywhere, and the second generation is not as good as a dog? Impossible, but without this condition, Orochimaru wouldn't be able to study it even if you gave him 10,000 years. Without a supercomputer, if you plan to rely on manpower to analyze a section of the genome... Then it just depends on luck. I sincerely feel that scientific research in Naruto is too unreliable. I also wonder why some people always think that Orochimaru's brand of black technology can do anything. But, what we are writing is still short. I will think of a way to study Orochimaru's research. If it can be achieved, I will tell you.

Human cloning (light cloning of the body) + the Yamanaka Clan's Heart Turning Technique can completely legalize human experimentation. Clone all the branches of the Otsutsuki Clan and then try to combine the Otsutsuki Clan's bloodline. Tailed beasts can also be cloned. After all, tailed beasts also have bodies. Or can tailed beasts' genes be directly fused into the human body? Just like Spider-Man, the Ten-Tails can also be cloned. After all, the Ten-Tails is the biological weapon of the Otsutsuki clan. Konoha, the source of scientific research funds, may provide the protagonist with Nini's knowledge and open an arms company. After all, Raikage Village directly created chakra cannons in the later period. In Fu Renden, the ninja world has also developed towards technological testing.

This is the first time a newcomer writes a book, I hope you all like it...

Again, Kishimoto is a manga artist who knows how to hammer Naruto? The setting background imagined by netizens is much more reasonable than him 🤭🤭🤭

I gave up after reading Chapter 24. 1. Even picking a name is so perfunctory, what kind of trick? What kind of protagonist can't remember the name of the class teacher? No respect for readers, no respect for your own writing, bad attitude, no professional ethics. 2. Force to be funny and forcefully play tricks. Once the plot is started, there will be endless nonsense; no priority is given to the plot and fighting, and the plot and fighting aspects are passed by. My so-called life insights and awkward chats between the characters are endless, and I cannot control the rhythm of the plot. 3. The reading experience is extremely poor. There is too much nonsense, which makes the reading incoherent. I really don't want to read anymore.

This book is really a scam. It was promised a comic cheat, but the first Spider-Man drawn was a powerful and agile hero, but he only had a spider sense to make an appearance from time to time. The brute force of pulling a train was simply gone. Dr. Lizard's knowledge only transformed the spider silk body armor. As for the ability of the Electro, the sense of presence is even pitifully low. Originally, the teleportation energy was externally released and the elemental body was added, but now it has become a thunderbolt enhancer, and it has not been clearly reflected. As long as one of these three is used well, the response will not be so low. People come in and want to see the ability of American comics. In the end, you can't even make two blooms. The American comic plug-in is a green foil.

Daily Guide recommends unfinished eunuch stories every day...

First of all, let me say that I have read Chapter 69, which is about the time-traveling Zhanmei, but I have not read The Crimson Eye. I stopped reading it. I read it through the chapter on The Strongest Martial Arts in the World. I was quite disappointed. Maybe it was a novice author. The writing style, story structure, plot, and sense of immersion were all very poor. The theme is good, but the writing is rubbish. I prefer Marvel and Naruto, but one of your writings is very watery and contains private information, and the other one has a very poor sense of substitution. I just can't read it seriously. I hope the author will think about it seriously. In fact, writing about Marvel characters will allow you to write a lot of things. You don't even need to bring them all in. The ability extraction of Marvel characters can work well with Naruto. For example, the perception of spiders will make you feel at home on the battlefield. , Stephen Strange's medical skills combined with medical ninjutsu, Sandman combined with earth escape, Loki combined with illusions, Electro with lightning ninjutsu, Thor combined with thunder ninjutsu, Spider-Man, Captain America's system combined with eight-door armor, there are too many things to write about. Even if you feel that there are too many abilities given at once, you can slowly unlock character abilities through killing enemies and achieving reputation. It's really weird to wear it back and forth, and it goes too far with the theme of the novel.

So what, pure strength is what makes Spider-Man completely destroy the captain. . . I'm still referring to the Dutch brother's little spider, who pulled the entire cruise ship from the middle with his own qualities, shouldered the pressure of a floor, grabbed Baji's robotic arm with one hand, and still won. The US team didn't dare to force it, and blocked it with a shield. (I haven't clicked on the comics, but I think the comics should also show that Spider-Man is stronger) With super strength, agility, perception, and such good physical fitness, he can compete with Kai who can't open the door~

Wow, it feels so uncomfortable. Someone wrote 10,000 words and got almost 3,000 votes... I wrote 3,000 words and got 26 votes... This gap is a bit big. Is there any way to make people see me...

Maybe you also saw that yesterday I spent an afternoon trying to sell Bilibili accounts at cxk... Or maybe you didn't see it at all. But what I want to say now is another thing. In the process of trying to join the group, I met three people who asked for payment for review. This is still a small matter. Twice, they asked girls to take nude photos with cxk peripherals. Even the management did not consider other people's privacy at all and sent me a junior high school girl to prove... Even the face was not coded! She is still wearing makeup and is a pretty girl. Although there may be very few girls who read my books, I can persuade them one by one that chasing stars is your freedom, but I really hope you can cherish yourselves and never do such stupid things! A manager saw that I was not a cxk fan and told me that he could sell it to me for five yuan a piece, but he had to wait. Do you still have a conscience? Do you know what you are doing! As long as these girls' photos are leaked, their future will be cast into a shadow! Alas, what is happening to people nowadays... I advise you to be kind... From today on, I will not talk about anything related to this star, and I don't want to contribute any popularity to him... That's it for now.

It was originally a good novel. Really. This is really a bit much to complain about. You can still have fun watching the complaints in the early stage. But the further you go, the more boring it becomes. . It feels like it's just for the sake of complaining. Not to mention that the word count has been mixed and it hasn't been released yet. Not consumed yet. I'm not qualified to say that. I hope the author can write better and better. Less complaints and more useful information

In the war years, family ties, seniority, and age are all useless! Only strong people speak! I really don't understand. Are all the people around the protagonist stupid? Facing a person with such a strong overall quality, he actually said something rude? It's like a circle of children playing house. If you punch me, I will forgive you. The protagonist is so generous.

I feel like I haven't watched Marvel and Naruto properly while sitting here. Spider-Man plus the ability of Electro can definitely reach the movie level after one or two years of training. After the original Spider-Man was bitten, his strength exceeded one ton in a short time. In Naruto, only taijutsu jonin or shadow-level ninjas have more than a ton of power, and only after adding chakra can they have more than a ton of power, but Spider-Man's pure power exceeds one ton. Although the ability of Electro is not as good as the Thunder Fruit, it is not much worse. Electro can directly transform into elements, so many physical attacks are basically ineffective. In the movie, Electro absorbed more power than his limit and died as soon as he changed from human to electro. If Spider-Man's physical fitness is combined with Electro's ability, the protagonist can torture other shadow-levels besides some special shadow-level ninjas. Esdeath's writing is too weak. The power that can freeze time and space is not as simple as the Kage level, at least it is the level of Senju Hashirama. The protagonist later gains the abilities of Aquaman and Storm. Aquaman's ability is super physical fitness, and he can communicate with marine animals. If we don't talk about comics, let's say that Aquaman in the movie is at or above the film level. Even if he gets Aquaman's power seed, it can't be so weak. Storm's ability is completely wasted. Storm's ability is not very strong at first, but she can still summon one or two lightnings. The two American comics that have been added so far, Marvel and DC, are both at the multiverse level. In the early stage of Naruto, they were not even a planet. They were just people from a continent making trouble. The two are not on the same level at all. If you are not careful, it may lead to the worst failure. Weakening one party or strengthening the other may become a poisonous point. Although I feel uncomfortable looking at many places, most of them are still very enjoyable. Come on＾0＾~

What is the concept of Spider-Man? The third generation of Spider-Man, when he woke up the next day, his physical fitness was almost the same as that of Captain America. Even though his head is not as big as the Hulk's wrist, at his peak he is capable of destroying the normal Hulk. Reference Loki and Thor after 5 seconds. Not to mention the spider sense and the existence of bugs. In the movie, it's normal to avoid danger (the air vibrates, and there is almost no solution in the atmosphere). In the anime, it becomes a matter of relying on the spider sense to chat with the audience (even more so than Deadpool breaking the fourth wall).

Why are you wearing it again? Some people are shameless. No matter what the book is like, if you don't like reading 😡, do you care so much about what others say?

It's another conversation with a sand sculpture in the sand sculpture system. Didn't the author feel poisonous when he wrote it?

I've read a few chapters and the writing is so childish. I really can't stand it anymore.

When I saw Chapter 4, I died from poison, what's more, it's a lot of nonsense.

Although he is a eunuch, there is an ending that is not the end. This is the first time I have seen such an ending.

I always feel that there is a problem. The protagonist knows the plot and should have judgments about many plots. I feel that the protagonist is like a cabbage who knows nothing and a prophet who knows everything.

Any first-line Marvel hero can beat Naruto!

Dead eunuch😡

It was a mess. The system is user-friendly.

Just graduated and fucked two jonin and two chuunin at once, awesome