Sad Frame

The world view is great, I hope the author won't write a bad story or the eunuch will be unfinished

Here are my thoughts after reading Chapter 10. I apologize if there are any discrepancies in what follows. In terms of genre, some book friends have already said that there is no need to mention it. Now it seems that it has a bit of a surrealistic color, such as Gundream, and is more science fiction. The emotional relationships and conflicts of the characters are still very obvious, and the writing style is relatively smooth and not stiff. These are all advantages. What makes me feel a little lacking is that the characterization is not full enough. The characters who have appeared up to Chapter 10 have had their backgrounds and emotions dealt with, but the explanations are not so full. Regardless of other supporting characters or secondary characters, as far as the protagonist's character is concerned, it does not feel like he is afraid of death. It can be said that he is a bit cowardly (in the case of anime characters, he is a bit like the tutor and the protagonist of the Super Power Academy), the type that scares the pants when encountering things (the protagonist's legs are mentioned many times), and given the background of the article, the protagonist has lived in it for more than ten or twenty years. Wouldn't he be fucked to death earlier? After all, it is already a social background of cannibalism. To put it simply, the explanation is not clear enough - why are you afraid of death? Why save your life? A shining point in your character? The above are just some personal opinions. Old readers of this book can take a look. Newbies will probably be persuaded to quit. After all, it is not a good article.

Not bad, very interesting. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Looking at the introduction, do you want to write it as a three-body wandering earth type? ?