Elixir War God

Hahahahaha this cover tricked me into clicking in 😂 Your account is gone

Congratulations to the author on signing the contract(•̀⌄•́)

The plot is not good, the setting is great, and the system is also good.

There are not many fantasy novels that I can read, so I'll read them and hope I don't die from them.

Author, you don't respect the old and love the young. Haha, you are called old man throughout the whole process. Doesn't the old man have a name?

Just this cover, your book is gone 😏

It would be best if you could point out which specific paragraph is not working. After replying, send me a private message with your account number and the floor number. It is difficult to make major changes in the front part, but I need everyone's support. I will try to avoid these in the future. Thank you all. Example 1: After reading Chapter XXX, I really couldn't stand it. Example 2: I feel that my IQ has been greatly insulted and XX is too unreasonable. Example 3: It would be great if it could be like XXX. Example 4: Typos in Chapter XXX.

The most important thing is persistence. One million words for a fantasy novel is just the beginning. If you are really good, you can really write 10 million words. . OK It's okay, not amazing, but I can read it.

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This cover is not infringing, right?🤭

The characters in the book are not absolutely good or bad, they just have different positions. Good book.

Be tolerant to newbies. It's not easy for newbies, but your attitude is still good.

The early stage is average, but the later stage is okay. It seems that the author is a novice, so take your time.

Why did you change your name?🤔 Personally, I think the name "Drug Master" sounds better Is it because "Drug Master" was banned, so I changed it to "Elixir"?

Praise! I will continue to follow, there is nothing to say about the recommendation vote.

The setting of the side effect value is good. Is the system upgrade too slow?

This cover, your number is gone

Finally, there is a fantasy novel that I can read. The setting seems to be imitated by King Spare My Life, but it is also innovative.

Recommendation votes are given, and the author cheers.

The author probably belongs to one of the better categories of high school essays. There are too many irrelevant descriptions of action and scenery. Now is a fast-paced era. Only novels that must lead out the theme as quickly as possible, create conflicts, and create excitement will have a market. For example, Dou Po is a classic, "Xiao Yan, Dou Zhi Qi, Third Stage". Who is Xiao Yan, what is Dou Zhi Qi, and what level is the third stage? The readers are curious and want to read on. But to be honest, don't be unhappy. The author is too sloppy and unclear. The first chapter is very important for newcomers. The first half of the chapter has almost no real content and the kidney failure story is not really funny. I suggest that the author can directly describe the scene after time travel and just write a few quick flashbacks. Although it is very cliché, this is indeed a better start. For example: Xiao Ming looked confused. You must know that he is a glorious socialist successor from the 21st century. Why did he drink a bottle of expired medicine and end up in the wilderness? Previous life: (Add some funny descriptions) Then write some funny actions of the protagonist (you can also introduce the main topic without writing). Of course, you don't have to do exactly what I say. It is most basic to have at least one cool point or one funny point in a chapter. After all, short videos are now starting to last for 15 seconds. No one likes this kind of slow-paced description. After reading half of the first chapter, there is nothing. If it weren't for the creativity, this book would be completely disappointing. Unless you can achieve the substantive quality of Sanzha, the author can read more popular business articles. The main purpose is to constantly introduce the following to make the reader feel that there is always something to do, but the description of the scenery will have the opposite effect. If the author is not short of money and is just passing the time, just ignore his interests and hobbies. Business since (｡･∀･)ﾉﾞYou can't have it both ways.

Regardless of the plot, the theme and system settings do have highlights.