
White Dew Spot Moss
白露点苍苔
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 791k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia Romance
- Audience
- Female
- Subgenre
- Immortal Lovers
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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295Chapters
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After reading your acceptance speech, I found that you are so charming, and that sentence is also very romantic, "Even if I have reservations, I still love you with all my heart." I typed it from memory, so there may be some discrepancies. And the settings of your male protagonist and female protagonist are very stylish. She is an extremely upright person who believes in Ming Mingde and is old-fashioned with a bit of stubborn persistence. However, he meets a girl who is completely different from him. Originally, they were two different styles of people, but they fell in love. It must be said that it is strange. Wonderful and romantic. Finally, your thoughts on writing are also very touching. I don't know what "love center theory" and "circular narrative structure" are, but these two unclear words convey your admiration and seriousness for writing. Acting programs were very popular some time ago, giving the audience a glimpse of how good actors become good actors. The unremitting study of faith and professionalism is very, very touching. You remind me of the actors in that type of program. Anyway, come on.
Book review: Chicken Soup often says that people must learn to lose, regret is the only completeness, and injury is the most valuable lesson for growth... That's because we have no choice. What can you do if you don't give it a warm meaning for everything that has happened? Adults who pretend to be happy do not need to mock the crying children for their ignorance. When we make wishes on the shooting stars together, we only pray for health and happiness. I hope you learn to accept it, and I hope this skill will never be put to use.
Book review: You are the surprise that I have been waiting for, but it is a pity that someone is the joy that cannot be hidden in your eyes.
[Book Review] Writing Loneliness with Beauty: A Fairy Tale with Conception and Thoughts
To be honest, I rarely watch Xianxia. I have read a few of them for various reasons, and I always feel that the fairy tales on the female channel have a relatively unified approach from the narrative structure to the writing style and even the choice of words and sentences, which means typing. This is one of the limited fairy tale novels I have read that takes the so-called genre style of writing to its extreme. Because it is so extreme, the words are gorgeous but don't make people feel pretentious. The choice of words and sentences is very sophisticated, and the narrative techniques are rich enough. The author has good poetry skills. This kind of excellence is not the ability to compose poems with ease, but the skill of translating poems into prose. I have always felt that only those who are truly good at poetry can compose the entire poem like an aria without a single sentence of five characters and seven rhymes. I am only familiar with poetry but not proficient in it, so I write only half-literate articles and never write poems. The author's book is so sophisticated that there is no need to write poetry, and the writing has its own charm. A lot of imagery is used, and the descriptions from characters to environments are detailed and magnificent. Personally, I do not object to changes in narrative person, as long as the change is natural. In addition to the wedge, there is also a first-person chapter in the first twenty chapters. I personally think it is quite smooth and fits the atmosphere of the whole book. When I received the book review, I saw the author's purpose for this book. An exploration of loneliness, freedom, and boundaries. You can already feel it clearly in the first twenty chapters, but usually this kind of theme needs to be completed before the reader can fully feel it. It is very interesting to see the current story as a whole. The strange death of the fox and the bat makes it feel like reading the Classic of Mountains and Seas. Book lovers who like this type of book should not miss it. Suggestions: 1 There are many descriptions of the environment, images and characters' psychology, written in paragraphs. This is a skill in the traditional literary world, but in the online literature market, readers are very selective. They need to be calm, patient, and read slowly to understand the value of these words. Otherwise, it will give people the impression that the plot is moving slowly. 2 The heroine only officially appears at the end of Chapter 13. I personally feel that the previous content can be more exciting. After reading some books with really good writing, I discovered that good writing can easily cover up the excitement of the plot and the hidden theme. Therefore, many good books receive the most praise in the end just for their good writing. The author can further balance the proportion of environmental psychological characterization and plot. Of course, if this book is going to be published, I will pretend that I didn't say 😊 It's great, come on!
The author's writing is superb! The plot is also very interesting (。・ω・。)ノ♡, keep up the good work (ง •̀_•́)ง❤️
After watching it all night, I was first impressed by the writing, and then obsessed with the plot. The author is talented, and his writing and wording are poetic and picturesque, quite poetic. I admire you for being able to write a beautiful piece of poetry in a novel.
The clear water is startling in autumn, the yellow clouds are condensed at dusk, and the fallen leaves are scattered on the empty steps. The people in the bridal chamber are quiet, and the slanting moon shines lingeringly. The Double Ninth Festival is approaching again, and there are sounds of anvils and pestles in several places. Under the west window, the wind shook the green bamboos, and it was suspected that an old friend was coming. Sad. Increased despair, new love is easy to lose, past events are difficult to guess. Ask the yellow chrysanthemums beside the fence to find out for whom they are blooming. It is said that when one is worried, the wine must be poured out. Before the wine wakes up, the sorrow will come back first. After a long time, the golden waves gradually turned, with white dew and green moss.
Originally, I clicked on the words "white dew" and "moss" out of curiosity. The description of the dream in the opening wedge surprised me. The author's writing power easily surpassed all those who seemed to have achieved good results. Maybe it was because the introduction was cliche and incomprehensible, so it discouraged many people. I like your dreams, especially.
The book cover is stunningly beautiful, and the writing is breathtaking. Excellent ~
Not bad, but I have a small suggestion: don't make the paragraphs too long, otherwise you will be dazzled. Break it up a little, preferably no more than five lines per paragraph, and it will be much better. Come on, update, you will be awesome when you finish the book 😁
A breath of fresh air in online writing
As other reviews have said, this book simply turns poems into stories. I haven't seen such an artistic conception in many years. The article is worth reading carefully. The full text gives me the feeling of a humble gentleman. The narration is unhurried and the story is told smoothly... Ahem, my vocabulary is limited, but what I want to say is that after reading Shuangxue's book, I can't write anymore. My book is simply rubbish. . . . .
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The white dew fell slightly in front of the steps, the wind and moon were boundless and silent on my pillow. One hand touches all the moss ground, A room full of frost and snow.
The artistic conception is beautiful, the vocabulary is beautiful, the wedge is the first person to enhance the sense of substitution, and the paragraphs are slightly long and are not suitable for mobile phone reading. Good book recommendation!
Wow, I'll like the cover first, leave a paw print and take a look.
Collect it first, come and take a look at it tonight! You are so awesome, you have written so many books!
For the sake of the author, I dug out my account for many years, but it was still worthwhile to register a small account before ~ Bingzhan Liuli, that's me haha~ ( ̄▽ ̄~)~
The author has a better grasp of the language environment and has a rich accumulation of poems. You can add some lubricant and seasoning to make it more interesting and humorous. The writing is very good, I have saved it, keep it up.
Writing this kind of book requires a lot of background. Good book, good book! Very beak-headed.
It will be more comfortable to read if you widen the line spacing. You are very talented, I like it very much!
It's so well written, it's bound to be popular, I ask for a chapter recommendation 😍, oh well, if you don't give it to me, I'll cry, I'll bribe you, and I'll try my best to torture you 🤓