Mist Age

"I promise you a moment of glory, and protect the palace in your heart! "I promise you a lifetime of magnanimity, and defend the faith of your soul! " "I promise that you will be famous for a hundred generations and be a model for the common people! " "I promise you to shine brightly——! "Facing..." "The direction of heaven!"

I would like to write a small book review First of all, I think this book is a very good book. In the current situation where Xianxia, ​​urban and so on are more popular. This book is quite novel and the writing difficulty is much deeper. And this book also meets people's expectations.                                                                                                                   I just looked through other people's opinions, and some people said that this book is a bit dark on the line of the No. 1 Scholar Stone. But I personally think it is not the case. The core conflict in this line of Zhuangyuanshi should be the conflict between study and school bullying. At first, Zhuangyuan Shi studied hard and wanted to get rid of poverty, but he was bullied on campus and had no choice but to endure it. In the end, his grades plummeted. These are things he should not suffer, and he should resist! But there was nothing he could do, so he lost. (Some people may say, won't he call the police? But in a social context where powerful people can influence the police, can he?) At this time, Shi Tiexin is here! Shi Tie is a person who worked his way up from the bottom of society. I think there is nothing wrong with him relying on his own strength to obtain a stable environment for himself; there is nothing wrong with using his own strength to resist school bullying! This is the only way for him to survive at the bottom of society, and it is also the only way for the weak to complete class crossing. The author has already said it very well in the interview with Little Dog Dan. In Shi Tiexin's speech, that sentence was: Establish a heart for the world, establish a destiny for the people, carry on the unique knowledge for the saints, and create peace for all generations. These are the original words of Zhang Zai (an ancient Neo-Confucian master). I think they are a major ideological climax of this book. The speech in that chapter has a very high ideological level. Unfortunately, this level is not continued in the following text, and the protagonist's ideological level does not change much. I think it has surpassed many novels in character creation. The protagonist's catchphrase is very good, and his personality is also distinct. But later when I saw the character of Youyou and the champion stone, I felt that it was a little imperfect: the two people are still different in nature, one is an eccentric student, and the other is a explorer who is good at disguise. Still different. There are three world lines, and two of them can be considered late stage. The main world line also seems to be starting to show its prominence. Then I would like to make a small suggestion, hoping that the "combat power" system can be stabilized. When I first watched it, I thought that the mind was very powerful, and few people can be perfect. I thought that the protagonist had a big trick, but later I found that I had misunderstood, and the fun was gone. Subscription and come back after the 7 days of free time. I am really a sinful prostitute. (1.8 Million words, 90 yuan, hmm TT)

What can I say? It's a complete routine! Just change the name, change the place, change the level of upgrading the skills, and nothing else needs to be changed. It will just look like another novel. Well, that's it. Let's talk about the points that I think are poisonous The first one is water. I saw it on the shelf. I can only say that other books are watery from the middle to late stage. This book is watery from the beginning. I haven't read it since it was put on the shelf. I don't understand it. The second thing is, don't worry about anything. There are people who praise people around you. They talk about the opposite of pig's feet. People don't believe that pig's feet can do anything. Then pig's feet pretend to be cool and slap them in the face. I think this is the most poisonous point of this book. It's like people who don't praise people can't write about the opposite? Won't it create conflicts? No more conflict? Of course, apart from water, the other problems are not serious. Many people even like to read pretentious articles. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. Well, that's it.

See that the exemption is limited, let me write a warning for new readers. This book can be said to be slow to warm up, or it can be said to be confusing at the beginning. I also felt very confused at first. If I hadn't thought of "Extraordinary Twins" with Zhu Yu first, I wouldn't have had the patience to watch it. So there's no need to force it on those who don't want to read it. However, for readers who have expectations, you will not be disappointed. Unlike some books that say "it will be great after chapter xx", the writing style, plot twists, characters and jokes in the previous chapters of this book are all good. The chaos and "water" in the first twenty or thirty chapters are exactly the image and ambush of the protagonist, and a way of unfolding the complete world. That feeling of not knowing what is going on is consistent with the protagonist's confused confusion about his own situation. After the fifty chapters, the plot gradually gets better, the development of Golden Finger, and the plot twists all make people laugh (I didn't expect learning to be so exciting), and the world is gradually revealed. Some people think that the protagonist is stupid and can't figure out things like time travel and golden fingers. But the protagonist is not the reader's God's perspective, nor is he someone like the Earth Traveler who knows the tricks. According to the author's background and experience, these behaviors are completely consistent with the characters. So it's not about bragging or making excuses to cover up the previous shortcomings. Rather, according to the routine of ordinary online articles, the first thirty chapters will be condensed into three chapters to get to the point of fun as soon as possible. So in comparison, these thirty chapters seem slow and procrastinating.

As for the twins, are you still updating? They have been waiting for the queen and the teacher.

As expected, this book is just for coping with life... Starting from the "bulk literature" mentioned earlier, this book is no longer good. After all, isn't the protagonist talking about himself? Now the more successful the protagonist is, the closer he is to the protagonist in "bulk literature"... Which further proves that ordinary people cannot succeed. In my personal opinion, this book is a failure. Even if it is a short story, the opening is also a failure. The author felt that his writing style declined after the first book "Twins". I think the inner demons chapter is the peak, with delicate emotions, passionate fighting, and changes in peaks and troughs. However, it was rejected by readers. After that, I feel like there is something missing. I only hope that the author can rise again, regain the strength of the inner demons chapter, and write good works. After all, people have to be in tune. I will always support them until then.

I can't afford to book it all, but I will definitely vote for the recommendation, and I will definitely make up for it later. Finally, thank you to the author, I have learned a lesson.

This is a book for us to study hard and stop reading novels.

There is a category of online articles that apply routines from fantasy novels to our familiar daily life scenes to produce a very funny effect. For example, Xiao Ming, who was only in the first grade of elementary school, solved the math problem of the third grade of elementary school. Then the teacher and classmates took a breath of cold air and said another sentence: "It's so scary." This novel has a bit of this meaning, but the effect is somewhere between a normal drama and a farce. I don't know if the author intended it. I feel like it's either more realistic or more comical, and it feels a little weird to be so neither up nor down.

I followed the last book and have read more than 10 chapters of this one. Can I say that the content feels very exaggerated~~😒😒

The dragon-elephant prajna skill of extraordinary twins suddenly wanted to see all the settings, but I found that I couldn't find it on the Internet at all. I'll give it a try, and all book friends can help me supplement it 😁 To practice the dragon-elephant skill, you need to absorb the essence of the skin, flesh, muscles, and bones of beasts into your body before you can practice it. To enter the deepest parts of the world, ivory and elephant bones are also needed. The stronger and more ferocious the beast used, the better the effect. (You regard it as evil and a precept, and when you do it, you will feel that you are doing evil and breaking the precept. If you feel guilty in your heart, you will torture yourself and be unable to extricate yourself. The heavier the guilt, the harder it will be to get rid of it, and the deeper the evil thoughts will be in your heart. But if you don't think it is evil, then you are not doing evil, and naturally there will be no evil thoughts) The first level of Prajna Gong - sharp ears and eyesight: improves people's five senses in an all-round way. Vision, hearing, and smell are all improved. The second level of Prajna Gong - clear seeing falling snow: super vision, the vision is further strengthened, with slow vision, and the flow of breath can also be checked. The third level of Prajna Gong - drizzle hearing: super hearing, the hearing is further strengthened, and the subtle sounds that are mixed together can be distinguished in detail The fourth level of Prajna Gong - the subtle and wonderful? The first level of Dragon Elephant Skill - The second level of Dragon Elephant Skill - the state of the whole person: the realm of exerting all the ultimate strength The third level of Dragon Elephant Skill - The fourth level of Dragon Elephant Skill - Throw an object weighing one hundred kilograms three feet high (twice the standard) The eighth level of Dragon Elephant Skill - restore the true self, let the body return to the optimal state that one's own genes can direct. The Dragon Elephant Skill? Layer - Network of Power, Dragon Power Seed

Letting go of oneself is really letting oneself go

😅😅Did I not read it carefully? I always feel a little confused.

Shou Shou, remember not to change the style of your next book casually. Whatever route you take, just don't change it from beginning to end. The style at the beginning will attract people who like that style, but they may not like the style after you change it. People who like your style after you change it may turn away when they see that the style at the beginning is not suitable. After all, everyone has their own preferences.

Let me first explain that I am a prostitute for free, and I finished reading it today. I started reading the novel in junior high school, and it's been seven years since I read it. Not to brag, I have read a lot of books, but very few of them left an impression on me. Shou's extraordinary twins count as one, I'm sorry Shou Shou, I haven't subscribed to your chapter until now. However, I will make it up to you. After all, I am very grateful for the touch and pleasure you have brought me... In addition, this new book is very well written! ! ! You are really in trouble, come on, longevity

All the monthly passes are given to you, so be happy

Hey! Didn't you update yesterday? !

When I finish this article, I will add one chapter to the next, and I will slowly make up the previous ones.

It's the same nine-year compulsory education, why is what you wrote so unfair?

The author applies to restore Twins. I have a lot of books back on my bookshelf. Let's give it a try. This is my first book.

As the first post, why don't you elaborate a little bit 😏

Seeing the recent limited exemption, many new book friends have expressed their opinions. Here are some opinions from a fan's point of view: Everyone's taste and appreciation of words are different. You can say that this book is not to your taste, you can say that it is not attractive at the beginning, but to directly say that it is garbage is a bit too much. At least in my opinion, this book is more interesting and fascinating than books such as Mystery and High Martial Arts. Everyone has their own favorite works, and it feels a bit arbitrary to start complaining after reading less than half of it. Next, let's objectively analyze the work itself: First of all, everyone said at the beginning that they wanted to quit. After reading the comments, it seems that the main reason is that the rhythm and timeline are a little confusing, and the plot is a bit poisonous. But I personally like the description at the beginning. In my opinion, unlike other novels, Mist is not a straightforward introduction to the setting. Instead, it describes the incongruity and contradiction between oneself and another soul, and gradually reveals the worldview and setting through the communication with Zhuangyuan Shi. I don't think the plot is poisonous either. Different worldviews have different behavior patterns. If I really want to say it is poisonous, I think cultivation novels that kill people and seize treasures at every turn are more poisonous... I feel that this kind of writing is very immersive. It feels like the veil of the unknown world is slowly being unveiled, and there are new surprises in every chapter! Many readers may be accustomed to the fast pace of Qidian, so they are less interested in this kind of slow-paced works. After the opening chapter, the atmosphere of the whole book changed instantly, and various characters and settings continued to explode. It was very exciting to read! In terms of style, it is somewhat similar to Gintama. It adds a lot of funny elements to the daily life. The author has a good sense of rhythm in this aspect. I personally like it very much. After breaking away from daily life, the descriptions of serious plots and fights are very powerful. Whether it is the battle between Black Lord and Fujiwara Kyokushin that burns everything, or the dejection of the champion stone after learning the truth about the woman in red from Ling Xing, it is so exciting that I stayed up all night to read it. There are probably no more than three books that have fascinated me in the past ten years (the last one seems to be Heroes? It happened to be criticized for the opening problem, hahaha) In the current plot, the protagonist has grown up and begun to gradually show his talents. I am looking forward to the confrontation with the real genius of the solar system in the future. It will definitely be exciting! Finally, we also welcome all friends who come because of the limited exemption. If you like this book, you can join the queue of waiting for updates every day.

Let's do a little survey How many of you came to see Misty because of your twins?😁😁

How many people want to restore the extraordinary twins? If so, please give me a thumbs up.

- Number One Stone World: - A world line where fog does not exist - In this world line, under the influence of external forces, China has split apart from Dongliao (Northeast), Mongolia (Inner Mongolia + Outer Mongolia), Stan ( ), and New Tubo (Tibet), leaving only the eastern coastal and central areas. - The time of the Number One Scholar Stone is 2020. At this time, Donghua Kingdom has only been 10 years old. It is still poor and weak, and its development situation is equivalent to that of the 1980s in this world. (Some phenomena in the article that seem incredible today are actually due to the limitations of the times) - The World of Black Lord: - There is a fog, but no saint preaches. The development of this world is dominated by pure technology. The Black Lord Era (2025) is a bipolar pattern between the two hegemons, China and the United States (because of the fog, the entire world line is about 20-30 years ahead of this world) - Previously, the two sides had continued friction and engaged in extremely fierce proxy wars in the Asia-Pacific region. They signed a ceasefire agreement in 2014. In 2020, the two sides once again chose Japan to launch a proxy war on its soil. In the next three years, the entire Japan was reduced to anarchy. In 2023, the two sides signed a treaty again and evacuated the Japanese island. Since then, Japan, without a consenting government, has become a world of gangsters. - Main World: - On January 22, 1919, in the Qing Dynasty, the solar system rushed into the fog, and the Mist Era began - On that day, the Origin Sage gave a sermon (in Chinese, presumably Yang Qi), taught the cultivation methods to everyone in the world who could speak Chinese, and opened the path to martial arts cultivation (strength skills, Nian Qi). - Then there were the scientific saints who combined knowledge with martial arts and created the six basic mental skills (knowledge such as mathematics and physics), the time and space saints who created the "secret realm" (even if you die in the secret realm, most of the damage you receive will be recovered after leaving the secret realm), and many sub-sages formed the stars in the sky and illuminated the world - In this world line, Chinese culture has assimilated the rest of the world's cultures (who said the exercises are all in Chinese) until the establishment of the Human Federation in 1941. However, until 2019 (the 100th year of the fog) when Shi Tiexin is located, the people's wisdom has not been truly enlightened, let alone everyone is equal (after all, there is no Marx, no ) - In this world, knowledge and energy are strictly restricted from spreading to the bottom. In this world, the ascending path at the bottom is extremely narrow, there is almost no class communication, and involution is serious. However, because the great power belongs to itself, this structure is extremely stable - ps Because a saint has written copyright protection into the law of heaven, any attempt to spread knowledge without the permission of the copyright owner is tantamount to going against the law of heaven. Jingqi significantly raises the price of "healthy and refined food" and at the same time provides cheap food made in processing plants with only a little bit of essence as an alternative

The recent updates are really impressive, and you can see the author's recent intentions. I hope this book can take advantage of this period to get more attention. At the same time, the recent plot has begun to feel more exciting. Different from the depression of being hanged in the early and middle stages, I can begin to feel that Lao Tie is embarking on the road to rise. It is very exciting to watch! Not much else to say, I feel the sincerity of the recent update, recommend + monthly ticket + 10,000 rewards 😁

Great conscienceヽ(•̀ω•́ )ゝ

I don't know how you felt when you started reading Chapter 2. When I first read it, I thought this book was not very good. Then, it became really boring. I read it patiently. Maybe it's because I'm still a student, so I prefer the part about the Number One Scholar Stone. Because the part about the Number One Scholar Stone is closer to my life. Not only that. I was even more fascinated by that strange realm. This is not the first time I have read a book that takes reading as its realm. But when the world line where Shi Tiexin went to Zhuangyuanshi started, I was very curious about what kind of world reading is the highest honor, and what kind of world the exercise books for young geniuses are all excellent. Of course, I don't unanimously agree with the protagonist. Just like He Zhang's father in the book, I also admire him. Then comes the world of Black Lord. In the world line of Heizun, Shi Tiexin (Heizun) is a small (big) gangster in Tokyo, and his destiny mission is the third front. In the world of Heizun, he met Zai Zhuangyuan Shi. Ling Xingjian (xian, I prefer this pronunciation, thank you) who appeared in the world line was nicknamed Youyou, and then the world was revealed here first. Finally, I saw Shi Tiezhu's world line, and in that world line, it was more like an auxiliary existence. , In the end, I succeeded in chasing Ling Xingjian. Of course, this book is not perfect. (For me.) In this world line of the book. There was a drag racing competition, but I skipped that part directly. I felt that the writing was very complicated, and the characters who appeared in that part were just gifts to the protagonist. 1/4 Or 1/5 of the magical power, so I'm not too interested in that part. And this book, overall, is a kind of food for me. Friends who are not good at reading can insist on reading it, and finally ask for more refinement, thank you! (Looking at the number of my first subscriptions and the number of words, it's not too much to give them more details)

In terms of writing style, Shou Shou can definitely be ranked at the top of the starting point.

14 Monthly passes, isn't it worth adding more 🤓