A Toad Is a Toad

Story background: The "Kaiyuan Heyday" of the Ming Dynasty. Story style: I saw earlier that the protagonist's occupation is to be a policeman, and with the addition of the time traveler, I personally think it may be biased towards logical reasoning, since he is a policeman after all. Brief comment: At the beginning of the story, the protagonist comes into contact with some wonderful things because of tomb robbery, which causes him to travel to the Ming Dynasty era. Then our protagonist in Ming Dynasty is a newly appointed police officer with a huge fortune and married Bai Fumei. It can be said that the protagonist's life is over! What a blessing! ! . However, I personally feel a bit confused by the World Escort incident that occurred later... To sum up, the author's writing is smooth, which is very good, but there are insufficient plot links... That is to say, if you continue reading, these foreshadowings may be useful, such as the World Escort incident. If you continue reading this, it may be to foreshadow something, but! I want to ask the author a question! "Today, tomorrow, the day after tomorrow, who will persist until the day after tomorrow?" The final complaint is that the coherence is not strong enough, five chapters, three plots, three stories...(╯‵□′)╯┻━┻

Multiple parallel lines, rigorous logic, three-dimensional characters, fascinating and interlocking. I have read the latest chapter. What a pit, worth jumping into.

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Let's revise the first chapter. It feels like the protagonist died suddenly. You can describe your psychological feelings. . .

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Female blog (written by a gentleman), with great literary talent, less polish, and the style of a famous writer. Reading, it is fascinating! It tells the story of several small characters in the troubled times of the late Ming Dynasty. It is very profound!

Very nice. Cheers, author＾0＾~＾0＾~

The main line is confusing, rambling here and there, and there are details but not the overall picture.

I have received investment income, come on＾0＾~

Bug: Chapter 83, ninth to last section, Golden Dome Nunnery. Other words affect reading. You want to castrate a nun? How dare you!

I wanted to leave, but seeing the second chapter pulled me back.

This novel is written with great care. The author is not only writing about martial arts, but also about human nature. Every few chapters there are always some touching plots, here's a summary: There is a light in the darkness✨ There is warmth under the indifference🔥 There are very few words, but I believe it will be a good story, a martial arts story! The book that moved me, my favorite book I have read in the past two months! (Note: The pace is too fast after it is released, and many places feel abrupt. I hope the author can calm down and create.) 2019.4.13

It's not as refreshing to read as Xiaobai, but it's pretty good if you read it more carefully. However, according to my many years of experience in reading novels, this book is most likely to be niche. If you can, develop it in the direction of a script. If you are lucky, you can sell it for a good price.

Ahhhhhh, no more, I still have more to say...

Raise a book Hey hey hey

Take a pit and read slowly 😁

Cheers for you 😊

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To be honest, I was interested in reading your book when I first saw its title, because I like toads very much. Then I read your book. It was very well written. Unfortunately, the world is now dominated by novices and routine writers. Hey.

I have collected one. It has a great beginning and a good rhythm, but I would like to ask what the title means?

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Come on, martial arts will never disappear. Let's revitalize it together.

I think reading novels is simple and clear. There is no need to pursue complexity and change. It feels like reading a literary masterpiece. We are not literati, we are just ordinary people passing boring time. Why should we complicate our writing? Reading novels is a simple and clear way to kill boring time. There is no pursuit, it is just a scenery on the road of life. The book is a good book, but the author is too persistent. On the contrary, it's not good. It's good if it's mediocre.

My message is still there, any luck?

Why is there so much missing content in your book circle?

What exactly was said in Chapter 21 and it disappeared? I'm so curious that I can't bear it. I can't stand it. Where can I see it? 😆😆😆

Looking forward to the new book, hurry up 🤭

I've been revising the grammatical issues recently, so friends, don't worry, the plot hasn't changed at all!