Rebirth Card New World

The character of the protagonist is not well developed. He is not like a reborn person. After three years of hard work, he still cannot forget his feelings for Zhao Ying and feels indecisive.

It has the feel of a game, without the feeling of the end of the world

The amount of updates you make already makes you look like a great master!

I don't like reading this kind of rebirth article anymore. We all know the development process and it remains unchanged. .

I don't know how to put it, but this character is very unpleasant to watch. It's obviously a cool article

The protagonist has been reborn, but we still need to spend 30+ chapters to give the protagonist time to develop in advance? There are no monster invasions in the 30+ chapters, they are all welfare chapters for the protagonist. These 30+ chapters can be said to be useless. After being reborn, the protagonist needs to advance into the game development. Writing like thisis very ugly and ugly.

Cooperating with the government was the highlight, turning the senior sister into a zombie with poison, and seeing the ghost of the school beauty almost gave up the book. Come on

The subject matter is obviously good, but why does it look so awkward?

Is the spiritual energy revived? The progress is too slow. It is so slow that the national army can easily take over to maintain order. The power development of individuals and private teams is restricted. How does the protagonist perform it? ? ? ? It's been a few weeks since the cards appeared, but monsters are still being cultivated? ? The zombies were reported by the protagonist, which is understandable. But monsters don't wreak havoc? Still growing slowly? Is the city a novice zone? Are you writing online games so slowly? Without mutation, how to show the protagonist's style. The writing of the previous dozens of chaptersis neither exciting nor enjoyable, nor is it written with good literary grace. You'll get tired of it, I suggest you design the background well and speed up the monster process!

Has the author read Eye of Evolution 😰 I saw a name named Li Shuyi in Chapter 162 😊

... The biggest advantage of the undead is that it doesn't cost money. OVO

The author's writing of this book is quite good, but when I read it, words like "haha" appeared, which made me feel a little unsmooth while reading it.

After watching Twenty Openings, I felt like the poison slipped away 😰

Author: Do you often laugh when you speak?

Why do you always like the undead profession?

The author is great, I paused due to something or the plot got stuck. Or there is a big bug in the setting. I hope you can reply casually. After all, I have spent money on this book, and it is not bad by the way.