Online Game: Mad Battle Mage

Very well written, support and support

This book is so wonderful! Recommended votes are required!

The author has started a fan group! I want to join the group!

It's so beautiful. I beg the author to accept me as his disciple. I can't write more than 100 words every time.

The opening of the holographic online game is a very routine start. After entering the game, the protagonist followed a technical route, focusing on weak points attacks and supplemented by combat rhythm. He became a unique master in the novice village at that time. After being praised by the melon-eating crowd, he made a grand desire to challenge a certain master team and encountered it in the latest chapter. At present, there are not many characters in the story other than the protagonist. The ones that are more heavily written are probably the few backbones of the union that invited him, and then there is the little brother he recruited who was just looking for experience? I'm surprised that the protagonist is so desperate that he's still single. The writing style of the whole story is very naughty, which can be seen from the explanatory information of the system. At the same time, the story is also full of the protagonist's strong complaints about the system, NPCs and other players. It can be said that it is a story with a lot of inner drama and flaws. However, I personally feel that the level of skinning is a bit too much. In the story telling, the words and ink often focus on describing one or a few skinny plots, while ignoring the main plot of the real story. When reading, you can't help but feel a sense of disobedience. The description of the protagonist's technical flow is relatively insufficient. I think more descriptions of the understanding of the battle rhythm can be made, which will make it more interesting. The last few points are a bit strange to read. I've read a lot of online game novels. I remember that the solo game should be solo, right? What is sala in the article? There is also the character in Chapter 3, where the rabbit characters are a bit witty and brainless, and were the whole lot at the end just to make up the word count? And some of the parentheses in the text... Exercise restraint. At the same time, the inner activities related to the protagonist's master seem a bit abrupt. This matter was not mentioned in the previous article?

Do you think that scythe staff is the death grip? Actually, the girl is the one q

Author, I think online game writing cannot be smooth and must be novel. Maybe it will hit rock bottom all of a sudden, maybe too many players will complain about quitting the game and have their accounts deleted, etc. It has to whet one's appetite, otherwise it will eventually be forgotten in the sea of ​​time.

Who am I, where am I, what am I doing?

Congratulations on changing the status. Work hard to code and put it on the shelves!

I want to be lazy ~ Do you have any comments ~ 😏 (manual funny)

Don't look at the data of other new books! I'm afraid I won't have confidence anymore. . . .

New authors definitely have a lot of questions. If you have any good suggestions, you can mention them to me here, which can also help the author avoid some detours. Thank you all here!

Like the title, please give me nicknames in the game and names in real life. If you want a character, please design a nickname, real name, occupation, front and back. .

This author is simply not too showy. The boyfriend in the chapter review was so showy to me (づ ●─● )づ

It's been so long, I've forgotten the plot

Thumbs up, the author of the same game category. At first glance, it seems pretty good. I have collected it and encourage you to share it! 🤝🤝

Come on, author, I feel like you are the vest of an old author. Why do you write so well?

Haha, this introduction is very well written. I clicked in and read it in one go. It's not bad. There is a melee mage in an online game far away, and there is a martial arts expert in an online game nearby. You are not alone. Come on, boy

Damn, I saw your book list coming in. Come on, author.

Please update, this seems to be my tenth comment, please remember to update it!