The Real System of the Game World

I feel like the author's writing is messy. The setting of the protagonist's father is weird. A man who has to save money for several months to buy nutritional supplements for his son, later causes huge losses to some company, and even has a good relationship with the city lord after fighting side by side.

As soon as I read the first chapter, the author came up with something that I couldn't stand, but I didn't complain immediately and read six more chapters. From the moment the male protagonist obtained the S-level dream-eating talent, the students looked at the male protagonist with sympathy. I want to say that you are sympathetic to this idiot. Are your brains broken? I don't know what the author was thinking when he wrote this paragraph. He thought that the characters in the book were all fools. Still treating readers as people who read novels but have no brains. The last person to obtain this talent has already gone down in history. It was also mentioned at the beginning that the way to obtain power in this world is to enter dungeons and play dungeons. Not to mention that this method is the only way to obtain power, but it is at least 90% of the time. The last person to obtain the talent collaborated with scientists to create various copies. This shows that there is state power or official power. I don't know why scientists don't do research now? Has science regressed or have all scientists gone into hibernation? The country doesn't care. Everyone can play the dungeon however they like, and our country will just watch. As long as the country has a little bit of brains, it will take the initiative to contact the male protagonist. What do you think about not contacting me? I think the number of copies is enough. There are too many copies and I can't get through, right? It can be said that from the moment the male protagonist obtained this talent, he didn't have to do anything to directly cooperate with the country. He just lay on the bed and cooperated with the scientists' research, and he just lay on the bed and reached the peak of his life. However, just like this, just like this, the students are still looking at the hero with sympathy. Now let's talk about the first copy. The male protagonist's talent came out without having to finish anything, and he got a lot of equipment and a job transfer certificate. Take off directly. I can't figure it out. Why are your classmates not playing in the same dungeon as you? How can you switch jobs and add exclusive equipment when your talent is useless? After the fight among those talented students, not all of them are better than you. When I see this, I feel that the male protagonist's talent can be directly changed to the talent of the European Emperor. He has more opportunities than others and has better luck than others, which is quite good. What's the point of dreaming? Others have many talents, but even entering the same dungeon won't make as much as you without using your talents. Could it be that the other characters have already fallen before the male protagonist exerts his strength? Male Protagonist: You are a bunch of scum. I have already crushed you even though I have no talent. You should just kill yourself. Living is a waste of food and air. In the end, you can't be serious about reading this novel, and you can't be smart about it, otherwise you really won't be able to stand it. Old fellows, am I right?

It was a bit confusing to watch, it was so confusing and a lot of it was not explained clearly. The designs are confusing.

In the first chapter, I had just entered middle school and was exposed to dungeons. It was said that it would take three years. I went through a dungeon once, got promoted two levels, returned home, and was about to start the college entrance examination. How did I pass this time? There is no description at all.

No brain🧠 and logic. Can't justify it

Can't you just be normal? The mage with the hammer, if you can think of it, you already know that the style of painting is not ordinary, then we look even worse. Nowadays, the author is writing novels that are getting more and more weird.

Well, it's another magical book, with 320,000 words, and a total recommendation of 613. It looks like it was written by the author for his own pleasure. There is nothing wrong with the book in general, but the small details are handled very poorly. Many places cannot be thought about in detail. After all, you will find the problem as soon as you think about it. The main story is there, but It always gives people a dry feeling, but it seems okay. It extremely weakens the role of the state. This aspect is handled very well. To be honest, I think if the writing style of this book can be better, the details can be handled better, the logic can be self-consistent, some can be deleted, and some can be added, maybe it can become a high-quality book.

The first chapter says that you are a freshman when you first enter the school, but in the fifth chapter, you take the graduation exam overnight, and you graduate after studying for a total of two days? ? ? The writing is too loose.

Sometimes I want to write something, but after I write it, I go back and read it, and I feel that what I wrote is too messy, so I delete it. You may not believe it, but two years ago, I used a notepad to write a dream story with a million words. After reading it this year, I burned it. It was too messy and I didn't have the ability. So, I admire authors who can keep writing. Although what I write now is a bit messy and has some logic problems, I want to say: Come on, my friend, keep writing. Only after writing can you understand the problem, give yourself room to grow, and then solve the problem, it will become better and better, and write a story that entertains people and yourself.

Chapter 1, Teacher: "I don't know how many people can pass the test, I hope there will be five." Then? After that, the teacher at the back said: "No matter what you have experienced in the dungeon, I believe you have gained something."... The relationship test is something that only five people can pass, but everyone can gain something. Then the teacher said: "Even the weakest monster can challenge any of the students." The protagonist kills a monster with two punches with his bare hands? ? ? Okay, protagonist, I have seen through your hidden identity. Tell me, were you a part-time retired special forces soldier or the king of killers in your previous life.

After reading a few chapters, all I want to say is that the whole world has changed because of the talent of Dream Eater. Who thinks that this talent is useless and ordinary? I can't understand how the characters feel about the protagonist's talent! !

I am a newbie author who has not considered all the logic. During all the pretending moments, the protagonist is capable, while everyone else is in a daze, stupid, scared, discouraged, etc. But except for the battle moments, everyone else immediately behaves very powerfully, directly turning all the surrounding characters into arrogant characters.

I think the writing is okay, why bother with so much? Just feel good and that's it.

😂 I just want to ask the author. In the second chapter, the teacher asked the students to go in and kill a monster to activate the panel. The author has already gone in to upgrade and fight the boss. The small elites are all beaten in batches. The boss only fights the most difficult ones. Why don't you go to heaven

Usually it is the protagonist who uses the power, but in this book the protagonist is used by the power.

I read a lot of chapters, and the author's writing is okay, but the logic is too messy, like a draft. I write whatever I remember, but I can't remember what I wrote earlier. I read dozens of chapters a day and became more and more confused. However, while I was reading, I kept reminding myself that this novel was terrible, but I couldn't help but read more than 70 chapters. Although I don't know if I will read it again, I still want to encourage the author. Maybe when you stop and think about it, you can sort out these words from the beginning. Maybe it will be a very attractive novel. Come on!

The writing is quite good, I hope the author will keep working hard!

Overall, there are only four words in my mind, which is baffling.

Issues with casting time and cooling time! Instant spells are not the reason why you are faster than a machine gun.

Is it a real person or is the data numb? Just read the book review 3

The content of the book is quite good, but the author deliberately blurred the details. Those who should understand will naturally understand. Those who don't understand are just like me who are confused by playing various games. Let me introduce the background.

What exactly is the sword sealing demon? Are there still various games that I can't understand?

What kind of thing are you doing, author? Change it first and then change it? Is this anti-piracy?

There is nothing wrong with being calm, but you are sure to go when someone calls you. It seems that the author changed after chapter 100. Before, it was full of passion and excitement. After chapter 100, it seems to be grinding and whining about all kinds of weak conspiracy theories.

This protagonist reminds me of the Underworld Cult Master

Chapter 1: I just entered school and took the college entrance examination within a few days. I entered college just to awaken my talent and took the college entrance examination 🔨🔨🔨🔨