Thriller and Otherworldly Game

I have read the latest chapter, Chapter 63. I would like to tell the author about my reading experience. If I make any mistakes, please forget them with a smile. I have some objections to the plot changes in this novel. For example, in the Two Towers chapter, the protagonist disguises himself as a spy on the opposite side, the dialogue in order to win the trust of the flames, and the change in attitude of the enemy leader, which always seemed very stiff. Another point is that the plot description feels very expository, and I feel that the emotional changes of the characters in the text are not described enough. Such a humble opinion, but it still catches my eyes.

This Lu Yuwei was not helpful to the protagonist and was taken away twice by the protagonist. How did she betray the protagonist's information, help others test the protagonist, and also confidently and loudly condemn the protagonist? I can actually accept the protagonist's reaction to this incident. After all, I knew he had a mental problem when he appeared on the scene, but Lu Yuwei's character, emmm, is a bit uncomfortable.

Lu Yuwei: I scolded you, hit you and harmed you all for your own good. Not only did you not understand but you dared to resist. What I said is right, and the path I pointed out is correct. You should live the way I want to be a normal person. I do everything for your own good, so you have to be obedient.

Author, if you give me all the recommendation votes for Lu Yuweiduo

I don't know why I hate Lu Yuwei so much

The effect would be better if

Heroine: The main female character who drives the development of the plot. Don't default to being the hero and his wife. You should feel more comfortable after changing this understanding...

Dear author, I suggest you remove the last sentence "Author's Answer" in the introduction. I have already persuaded you to quit once because of this sentence. The important thing is that there are many novels that cannot write "high IQ" protagonists, but they still have to write them, so it makes it embarrassing for readers to read them. The author writes well, but this introduction may be misleading.

The protagonist's character would have been killed long ago if he had no backer... Especially if he had some intellectual talent... It was obvious that he was under the edge of the house, so what if he made a grimace? If you put the credit card signature in the bank note, even if you write it as "empty, lonely, cold", as long as it is your own will and the documents are complete, you will have to sign "empty, lonely and cold" before you can use it when you swipe that card... Not to mention the supernatural black technology?

After seeing two worlds, I decided to test the poison first so that I could fall into the trap later. 1. This book can enter the genre of brain-burning novels, but the main character is the protagonist. It is quite comfortable for readers. It is suitable for those who like brain-burning novels. 2. The protagonist's IQ is very online, but because he has a certain degree of distrust, his behavior is a bit crooked. Although many of the answers are correct, it makes people feel that he is a little reckless. 3. The characterization is good and the supporting characters are all online. 4. The author cheated the protagonist again and gave various money ~(*Eat)ノ⌒*Throw 5. Overall, food and grass. Let's continue reading later. I hope it doesn't collapse... 6. The most poisonous point is that this world will never really die, M's paradise (￣┰￣*)

1. People will be resurrected after death, and problems will definitely arise in the future. 2. The first level (12~31) is a puzzle level, but the hints (tips) given by the author in the article are not enough, causing the reader to have no sense of participation and the protagonist solves the puzzle by himself. 3. The second level (43~52) ended too quickly, and conflicts arose before the supporting characters were formed, making the plot a bit confusing. 4. In the third level (62~), it can be seen that the author wants to express the situations of both parties at the same time, but having one chapter of the protagonist and one chapter of the heroine will make the plot very confusing, and the readers will not be able to remember the previous plot.

The author shouldn't be a eunuch. It's not easy to find better game articles.

Thanks to the friends who gave me comments. Good suggestions can help the author improve and prevent him from encountering these poisonous points again when he writes a new book in the future. However, overdoing it will affect the reading experience of other readers, so I will create a page here and ask everyone who needs to complain to comment here. I will delete the comments that poke the G point elsewhere in the future. Thank you for your cooperation.

The book is very good, and the updates are relatively stable. Let's find someone to promote it.

Damn new book, over 300 million hits. 🥵

Sorry, I stand for the male lead of Dao x.

I'm just curious if some people really start finding fault with imperfect heroines when they see them. What's the matter? Two games are limited to ordinary friends. Isn't it normal to test or request? No one will die. In a game that cannot die, your ordinary female friend will act like a baby [Take me to play a game] [I want that one but I can't beat him] or [That person is quite pitiful. I think we should help him? ], A normal person would just throw a tantrum? She may be a little pushy, but calling her a virgin bitch is not enough... Yes, no matter how hard you try to die here, you won't die, so why not relax and have fun and not be so violent towards the female characters? I really hope you can be so strict with your girlfriend when you have her...

Lu Yuwei really doesn't want to watch her. The main character is obviously very exciting and annoying.

Why do we always use "him" to describe it? This word appears too many times. The sentences are not fluent,

Hahaha, it's so real. I had no choice but to give up the fastest way to pass the level, and suddenly and inexplicably made me laugh.

What a pity, such a beautiful book.

I want to learn from other good books. Do you have any recommendations? 🤔🤔🤔

Ming after transformation (it's a pity that his hair is white, otherwise it would be more perfect)

Speaking of what the purpose of