The Wind Blows Wildly

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The writing is delicate, keep up the hard work, come on, it's finished!

Haha, I have read several good martial arts books recently. The author's writing style is very good and he has accumulated experience. It is recommended that the description be more accurate, whether it is a certain phenomenon, a certain person, or a certain plot. Because the author's works have a strong visual sense, what is presented to the readers must accurately reflect the image the author wants to express. This depends on the penmanship. Therefore, the author still has great skills, but he is not completely able to write freely. In addition, the rhythm control should be strengthened. These are all bonus points that make the book attractive after it has a backbone. However, the overall work is good in a large aspect, and its flaws do not hide its merits. Come on! 😁

Type: Traditional martial arts Number of words read: 8w/16w Initial rating: 90 (The author must work hard💪) Reviewer: Fatty Fatty Quail 🦉Overall review: A colorful and secular worldly affair. 🦉Plot Summary: The painting of Mountain Dwelling as a reward from the monarch was stolen. Before Huang Shu could catch the evil thief who stole the painting, the thief was killed and twenty-one strands of women's hair were left behind. Under the collision of a group of small people and an unjust case, each has its own fate and tragedy. The real protagonists are not the above people, but the students and two beggar boys of Mr. Yan, the suspect who died tragically in the theft case. Somehow, the exiles, the murderers, and the beggars all went to Fengye City. The real martial arts begins after 50,000 words, but the beginning is also very interesting. 🦉Recognition💫Highlight💫With the author's extremely high recognition and memory points, this book will never be a low-scoring novel. Like singers, I often feel that it is very rare and important for a writer to be recognizable. Many authors may have good skills and good writing skills, but they are just mediocre and not amazing enough to read. The author's writing has the tone of an old knight who has experienced the world for a long time. Maybe he is not skilled enough or knowledgeable enough, but he has clearly been through the world, and every word he speaks contains the freedom and joy of the world. So, don't ask about which dynasty or dynasty, don't care about the details of the ancients saying the new people's words, or the flowers blooming in the east and the flowers in the west, just relax and listen to the author's story! 🦉Positioning of the work: From what I read, the author does not sound like a traditional martial arts writer. It is better to change it to suspense to be more realistic. The author's writing is very sophisticated. The ukiyo-e paintings interspersed in it, such as Han Yuan's sick father and the fatuous monarch, enrich the content and world view of the book, and at the same time suppress the pace, making it difficult for readers to see the next step. The Jianghu written by the author is not the Jianghu I expected to see, but it is also a real Jianghu that is more relevant to history. In this river and lake, there is no Eighteen Palms for Subduing the Dragon and the Heavenly Sword and Dragon Slaying Knife. There are only countless small figures of all kinds. They develop individually, collide with each other, and gather together to form a river and lake with a pyrotechnic and worldly atmosphere. [When I finished writing the above words and thought they were the keynote of the whole story, I saw 50,000 words. The real main line was revealed around 50,000 words. I was already sucked into this story before the main plot arrived, and I couldn't help but continue reading] 🦉Highlights (let me praise this novel): 1. The logic is tight and solid. The first level is the logic of the story - whether it is the conflict and inexplicable reconciliation between the two leaders in the town's power center, or the timing of everyone's appearance, there is nothing unreasonable. The lame old man didn't encounter an official as soon as he left the house, and Ding Fu didn't have to wait until the woman finished cursing before showing up to arrest him. Perhaps there was just one more reason and two more sentences of explanation. The whole story was less intentional, more real, and no less dramatic. The second level - the logic of deciding the case. 2. Outstanding ability to organize plots. At the beginning, we split into two groups. One group wandered around the city to investigate suspects, and the other group searched for clues about Mr. Yan. One is noisy and the other is quiet, the painting is divided into two ends while maintaining the same rhythm. ——It fully avoids reading confusion for readers and clarifies the story context. Later, the evidence found at Mr. Yan's house and the 21 humiliated women were used to connect the entire officialdom and the world. It's very smooth and natural, and I finished reading it in one sitting with almost no distractions. Then! These turned out to be just the prologue. In order to create a vivid world and explain some people, they all went to Fengye City. The whole work is intricate and intricate, and it relies on the author's organizational skills to make the main line clear and easy to read. 3. The writing is sophisticated and detailed. This book is so enjoyable to read. The author meticulously takes care of the scene in which each person is located, projecting from the scene to the personal psychology, and from the personal psychology to the words, thus affecting and promoting the development of the plot. In the three-person scene of catching Han Yuan, Ding Fu and Wang Zhong bowed and bowed out, changed into civilian clothes and chatted under a tree, leaving a familiar farmer to hide in the stable. The farmer excused himself, but Ding Fu pushed him back. The farmer walked back and squatted down, cursing. In one or two pages, Ding Fu's flattery, negative nature, and acceptable professionalism make this person fit the common sense of a petty official; and the peasant's overt and treacherous character also emerges vividly on the page, which is very detailed and touching. 4. The rhythm is compact but not abrupt, and the suspense setting is precise. Since I don't intend to spoil the story, I won't go into details about it. The author explains the detective's work in solving the case smoothly, and when the audience breathes a sigh of relief, he uses others to point out the unreasonableness and brings up some strange things about the detective himself. The reader has just given up on this and is thinking about other things. The rhythm neither makes the reader feel so appetizing that it loses interest, nor makes the reader feel that it is dull and boring. 🦉Disadvantages: 1. Typos problem. The author still has quite a few typos. The person writes about the past, writes about the past, records and so on. It will slightly affect reading, but it will not affect the sincerity of the author between the lines. 2. Update timeliness. I didn't want to watch it when I first saw the author's love story. You have to know that this kind of Jianghu suspense genre can't be picked up halfway through, so I lost the interest I had when I first watched it. It not only affects the reader's mood, but also affects the coherence of the work. (Although I mention this, I don't want the author to reduce the quality of the article because of the word count) 3. (From the perspective of online articles) The writing technique is slightly old-school. In fact, this is not a shortcoming, but it is based on the fact that the author came from a starting point and published online articles, so he must use popular online articles to comment. One is the organization of writing into paragraphs and narrative interludes such as memories. For example, when Han Yuan recalled the plot between him and Mr. Yan, the author skillfully used a cross talk allegro to carry it through, which may seem awkward to online readers (but I personally feel that this organizational method is very sophisticated and profound). Second, the characters' speaking tone is too old-school, like a dialect book from the old society. Many readers just read it when they have nothing to do. I conducted a reader survey with a relatively small audience. Everyone thought it was too deep and obscure. In their words, it was "a slap in the head". 4. Type ambiguity. At more than 30,000 words, I feel that the genre is a bit blurry. The author's self-defined genre is traditional martial arts, but there is too much emphasis on officialdom and society, and it is a bit like traditional literature, while martial arts is a bit far away. There is no description of officialdom in the category of online articles, which are probably not popular. The author could reduce the description of officialdom and focus more on suspense and martial arts, which may attract readers more. 🦉Improvement suggestions: 1. Pay attention to typos. 2. Consider whether it should meet the needs of online readers and make the article more down-to-earth. 3. Consider whether it is necessary to make the pace faster, reduce secular descriptions and slow pace, and speed up the main plot.

The writing is good and it reads smoothly. I would venture to ask, why not apply for a contract?

Ding! Your dog-headed strategist is online. First of all, what I know about the martial arts circle is that the circle is gradually shrinking, and the people in the circle are gradually losing people. Its direct impact includes but is not limited to the author's transformation due to livelihood constraints, the reduction of spontaneous publicity among martial arts fans, the slow replenishment of new blood, etc. Why are authors rejected? The answer can be gleaned from the above. The decline of the martial arts circle directly affected the changes in contract signing requirements. The substantial increase in contract signing requirements directly resulted in the inability to sign contracts with writing standards that could easily be contracted in other divisions. Secondly, some immature personal suggestions: The author can add some funny clips appropriately. Now that the pressure of survival is increasing day by day, human beings need to relax their tense nerves through certain channels. Light-hearted and refreshing articles meet some needs. For example, the writing style and plot of "The King's Spare My Life" are ordinary and satisfactory. Even for me, it is just a novice with good grades, but it ranks among the top sellers. It can be seen that the reasonable interweaving of funny elements has a role. But it's not putting the cart before the horse and making it funny for the sake of being funny. In addition, the author's writing style and plot logic are still good, keep up the good work. Personally, I really admire you people who generate electricity for love. Finally, the author can read Sanzha's latest novel, which is also about martial arts, and I heard that the response has been very good. There should be a lot of things to learn from it.

Wonderful! ! This novel is wonderful! ! The author's writing style and plot creation are very powerful! Although I haven't signed a contract, it doesn't matter. I don't have one either. They are all slow writers. They don't cater to the current novice Internet literature, which is what the starting point should be! Let's work hard together... Although I feel ashamed that my writing is not as good as yours, I hope we can work hard together!

Friends, I am here, and I am worried because I couldn't write well before. If you don't change it, no one might be able to stand it. If you want to change it, you may have to make a big change. . . What do you think?

The editor doesn't like it, but maybe the director will like it in the future... Hahaha! Come on

I opened a column today, and I want to do a linkage with the author. On the one hand, I want to enrich the content of the column, and I also hope to help the author to promote it a little. I will detail the ownership of the published articles. If I become a certified columnist next month, the 1,000 points of income from each column will also be rewarded to the author~ I wonder if the author is willing to write some popular science articles with content and publish them in my column? Although the author seems to be too late to write the article, he still extends my olive branch~

It's been a few months, so I'll come back and watch again. I feel a bit sad after seeing some of your inner words. I thought you might be a decent white-collar worker, writing something in your spare time, just for fun, but I didn't expect that this kind of embarrassing writing came from a maintenance worker (no other meaning). Talent? You may think you don't have it, but I look up to you. I studied hard in high school, only ate lunch every day, and studied sixteen or seventeen hours a day. However, compared with those geniuses, the gap became wider and wider. In the second semester of high school, my body was broken. Haha, the main reason is that no one here knows who I am, so I can talk about it. If my family members knew, they would be heartbroken. Now I don't want to talk about how to persevere. If you are tired, take a rest and spend time with your family. When the mood strikes, update it. Don't regard updating as a burden. Just be happy.

I also write about martial arts. Come on, let's see if we can revive martial arts and restore it to its glory in the last century.

Is there a holiday during the Dragon Boat Festival? Come on, brother

Brother, I have also opened a new book. I am learning from you and endure the single-player mode.

Collect first, then read slowly, I like martial arts

Persistence is victory! Hold on, ✊

I like your story very much. It is quite different. I will read it slowly. Come on!

No matter you still write or not! Come on, come on! ✊

It's been almost a month, I'll post more chapters when I have time

Happy New Year! 🌹🌹🌹