I Sell Cigarettes and Alcohol in Another World

This book is very similar to the one I have been following (Systematic Super Grocery Store), and the writing is not even the slightest bit worse! I just want to say that you, the author, are really a shameless plagiarist🐶Oh, do you think we readers are stupid?

Chapter One, 'This Great Yan Dynasty'! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Author, how many times do you want to express your feelings? Can you be more concise?

The routine is a bit embarrassing, just pretending to be a slap in the face. It looks a bit embarrassing

That's what I said and expressed. I could bear it in the first few chapters, but by Chapter 6 I was really singing.

The author should change the character and temper of the protagonist! Consistently pretending to be tough will not retain mainstream readers! It may not sound nice, but it's the truth!

Even if this book is not a good book, it is at least a simple one, right? Other books lower the IQ of the supporting characters, but this one is different. It lowers the IQ of the protagonist. Why do you say that? From beginning to end, it is the protagonist who is being calculated. Knowing that there is a spy in her store, she has been tricked by her several times and still doesn't get out of the way. Every time something happens, she is there. You can guess it using your brain, right? OK! Even if the black slave is invincible! But who is disgusting when you write like this? The princess has been so hacked by the author, so the protagonist still wants to lick her? Is it possible that this book was written by two people? I just said before that I know there is a big identity gap between the two parties, so I am not going to pursue him anymore. Will someone come to pick up the goods in person later? Talk about creating opportunities. I am also convinced. After chasing a girl like this, do you still want to get approval? Even if the protagonist was a nobody in his previous life, even if he has never seen the world, even if he is an imbecile, he will not turn into a pig whenever he sees a woman! It is right to want to chase a beautiful girl, but I beg you to clear her name first! OK? You are not required to pick out typos one by one. I just ask you not to forcefully advance the plot. At least this kind of mistake should not happen. Since you are not writing cool articles, don't stick to the quantity. Improving quality is the most important thing.

After reading a few chapters, the protagonist's IQ seems to be off the mark. He is the king of words.

By the way, has anyone tried Feitian Moutai? Have you ever broken through King Wu?

How can you recommend a metropolitan area that is obviously an alien world...

It was quite good at the beginning, but as I progressed, I felt like I had a kind of halo of wisdom.

The creativity is still good, but the worst thing is that it does not implement the principle that a gentleman should not build a dangerous wall. It is really embarrassing.

I think there's something wrong with the protagonist's character. He's always taken aback by anything that happens. The protagonist still needs to be a little smart. I hope the author pays attention to it.

I only read about ten chapters a day. If I read too much, I'm afraid of lowering my IQ. But the creativity of the book is not bad, but the writing style is not very good, and the pig's trotters IQ is not good. It is purely a novice's cool writing and a pretentious line. The audience should also be mainly junior high school students with low academic qualifications. In this way, it seems that tobacco and alcohol are the main subjects, which will easily lead to bad readers.

I just couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. The protagonist's system for selling cigarettes and alcohol didn't even mention the functional limitations of cigarettes and alcohol? Why is it so expensive? The protagonist seems to take it for granted The author's setting is not clear at all

Why don't you have a head? ? ? The one in the front has a bad attitude and mocks the customers, but the one in the back wants to be nice and make money when they bring people? If you run a shop, everyone who enters your house is a customer. If you don't buy, it's your turn to laugh at him?

The author creates a player base. Otherwise we will get lost

I don't understand one thing. Suppose a bottle of wine costs RMB 2,000, and his commission is RMB 2,000. How can he purchase the wine like this?

The protagonist's wisdom makes it feel like things are starting to move in a good direction. Whether the little loli is cute or not, but whether she looks crazy and violent depends on the progress later. Next, the description of the battle scene will be better if it is more vivid.

In my opinion, this book is not bad. After all, I can't read many other books without reading dozens of chapters. Because that's complete nonsense. I only read two books now, and this is one of them. It's about returning from the world of immortals. Written by a mad monster. 😄😄

This book is actually good, but it doesn't match my grades. Support you, come on!

You will be given one for your first order, and you can also give recommended tickets, and the monthly tickets are reserved for Daojun. Work hard!

There are too few details, and it looks like there is no outline. The routine is clear, and I find that it is just the end of the play. Everyone knows this script, and I can write a place more concretely and vividly.

The different world is still very big. Try to expand the world view and overall content as much as possible.