Both China and Foreign Countries Are Blooming

Let's be serious Read to Chapter 20, the main plot is clear, the narrative is sufficient and there are no poisonous points, which is rare for a newcomer. It can be seen that the author has spent a lot of time The same, more or less, there are some shadows of novices, some events have unclear narratives, and some paragraphs It is too lengthy and the description of the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is also a bit jerky, but the shortcomings are not outweighed. These shortcomings are not a big problem in the book as a whole. It is also recommended that the author use less punctuation endings such as "..." In the text, which will inevitably be a bit cheap. The turning narrative is clearer and the character's speech is not clear enough.

The two flowers bloom just after the opening of the chapter.

You want to apologize to the people of the whole country.

There are a lot of songs hidden in the book🤭

Let me leave you a message. The author's writing is pretty good, but some of the paragraphs at the back are super long, which made me a little tired. But overall, it's still pretty good. Keep up the good work! I am also a newbie, and I hope my work can receive comments and support. Thank you!