Summoning System of Nanming

I finally saw an update in the New Year. The author has written this book carefully and will give you a monthly ticket or 2 recommendation tickets every month 🤓

Could you, the author, please check it yourself after you finish writing? There are so many typos, you can encounter them in almost every chapter, and they are not corrected at all.

The pace is slow, the layout is small, and fewer and fewer people will read it. Coupled with typos, the author's own mentality is negative. It can be seen that the ending of this book is over. If it does not change...

Don't read trash, have a system, don't kill the stupid king Zhu Youjian, have rights, just play with a woman, don't kill the woman who kills you, is your brain flooded?

It's been hundreds of chapters and the protagonist is still developing in a county but not expanding. How can you dominate it from now on? And you have been working under the Ming Dynasty. You have a group of pig teammates who defeated the rebels in various ways, but got nothing. You described all kinds of corruption and corruption in the Ming Dynasty, but the protagonist did not complain at all or even fart. Finally, your system has not appeared in the next few chapters. Except for giving you some soldiers and horses destined to survive in troubled times at the beginning, it has not appeared since. Count the total of 5,000 people including those mercenaries. I am afraid you have forgotten the author (ㅎ‸ㅎ)

It feels like the writing is so slow, the author

What's going on? ? ? ?

I found two typos in the first chapter, won't you correct them?

Just over 900,000 to finish the book? This is too fast. If the plot hadn't collapsed, 900,000 words might have been less than half of the entire book. As long as there are no brainless explosives in this book, it won't be a problem at all if there are more than one million or two million. I hope the author can be like the masters of late Ming novels. (At least the author's writing style and arrangement are good, so it can be considered a good book) (I'm not talking nonsense, I have been reading online novels for almost ten years, and I have been gradually focusing on historical novels since six or seven years ago. I have an idea of ​​whether the whole novel has developed after reading 70,000 to 80,000 words. The author thinks that this novel has great prospects. Don't finish it within one million)

The subject matter is good, but the plot is not well written. There is a recruitment system. Hurry up and get money to expand the army. In troubled times, having soldiers is the king. But you have to go to Nanyang. Just this, it can be said to be **. It's like someone gave me 100 million now, but I only dare to deposit it in the bank.

Author, why don't you update again? . .

The author's writing habits are too uncomfortable to read. He uses commas too frequently and breaks a sentence into several parts.

🤫 Isn't it sealed? Bah, it smells so good.